Restart the Myth

This new work by Dan Feng has a clichéd character for the protagonist, and it feels like I'm seeing Lu Bei cultivating immortality again. The storyline is still the same, the supporting characters are pale and empty, and the women all look like backwards. It's really not as good as the 3 fanfics I wrote before, at least 99, God, Hong Kong TV series is interested in watching it 2 times and 3 times. After watching Xiuxian once, I forgot and couldn't remember anything.

This book is finished. The next book will return to fandom. The original text has lost its previous charm in two consecutive books. It is not bad but too mediocre. In addition, unless the astringent content can be frequently described on some special websites, it is enough to mention the content on serious websites, just like the "millions of words" in the previous novel, it will be a transition. After all, not many people like to eat raw rice.

The first one I jumped at to read, but this one I didn't bother to read after seeing the demon clone. If the next book is still original, I won't read it, because the author is not original. Everyone has their own suitable field. Old readers have been disappointed too much. The author should be happy to have written two original books. Please be responsible to the readers! After reading this closing speech, I was really surprised...

How can I put it, I feel that Ah Huang chose the wrong track. The quality has declined since the Hong Kong variety show, and I failed to grasp the feeling of being slutty. When I came to Xiuxian, I once thought that the author had changed people. The writing power has not decreased, but there is no that feeling. From this book, it can be seen that Ah Huang has been trying hard to lean on that feeling, but it still lacks a little bit of heat. Moreover, I feel that Ah Huang is not very good at writing settings. It is a bit complicated. There are still not a few specific magic in the places I saw, most of them are just interpretations. But I still support it. After all, your 99 and End of the World are among the top three in Zhutianliu that I have watched. I hope Ah Huang will continue to work hard and adjust, and bring you several masterpieces. Come on 😡😍

There are too many heroines, four or five at most are enough. If there are too many, people can't remember them, and they don't have their own characteristics and experiences. They won't use vases in the later stage, which is very embarrassing.

The ending is good. I know why you wrote Zhutianhe 99 well, because the original characters were created for you. Do you want to read what you wrote in Xiuxian 😅? If not, we will use your strengths and avoid weaknesses and continue writing Zhutianliu to have fun. Your strength obviously does not support you to construct a complete world view and create multiple characters with arcs on your own.

Easy and invincible flow But writing a Lao Deng who repels the same kind and then adding a setting that looks like an illegitimate son Do you have to add a setting of a son for yourself?

I feel that Ah Huang's recent books are not so funny and joyful. Is it my misunderstanding?

I have read more than 200 chapters of the book, and I feel that the protagonists written by the author all have the same character. Duke and Russell are the ones who have the most profound influence. After that, I feel that they are printed from the same mold. It may also be aesthetic fatigue. In short, I am disgusted when I see the protagonist being mean. In just over 200 chapters, it is clear that there is going to be a big event in the city in many places, but the protagonist is still picking up girls, and there are still several of them. It's not that I don't like the harem, but I hate the deception of the protagonist. I always feel that the protagonist of this book is the least likable But I still like the book itself. It is one of the best Western fantasy books I have ever read. I just saw the character of the protagonist and his purposeless formal style, which made me a little unhappy! Actually, I have collected this book for a long time, and I didn't read it until I recently found out that it was finished. Personally, I don't like to catch up on reading, I like to read it to the end in one go. I hope the author's next book will be better!

I find it quite confusing. Some people feel that the style of writing is different from the previous books, so they want to complain about it, saying, "What's going on, what's going on, what's going on, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah". There has to be a premise. Maybe the first few books were of a genre or style that you liked, but this one has changed its style. You have been looking at it with a biased eye and you don't like it. Then you keep magnifying the flaws in this book in your eyes and making some unfriendly comments. This doesn't have to be the case, right? In this way, you are not only making yourself unhappy, but also making book friends who like this book feel uncomfortable, or book friends who want to read this book are persuaded to quit, or the following person feels that the father-in-law and mother-in-law are together, and then the father-in-law has a secretary who is positioned as an artificial dragon and knows some of the secrets of the father-in-law. , I feel that my father-in-law is a scumbag and extremely poisonous (????). I don't understand this very well, but I respect your opinion, but there is no need to be bitter because of this, right? We have all read the harem story. The father-in-law has a mother-in-law, and a secretary who is not sure of the relationship. It is better to have the mother-in-law's knowledge and permission. But in some cases, some, this can break the defense. I can't understand it deeply. If you want to put it this way, the male protagonist has six or seven harems, why don't you resist it? Well, there is nothing special to say. Anyway, I wish everyone a happy reading, even if you don't read, there is no need. It's hard to find a book review for yourself. Book reviews are the least valuable thing. After all, a book can't be liked by everyone. It's hard to agree with everyone. If someone wants to read it, you might as well take the time to see if you like it. Personally speaking, this book still has its flaws.

The first novel I read at Qidian was The End of the Universe, and I still think it is the best novel I have ever read. But now this is real water. Although there is water at the end of the world, it is quite funny. I really like watching the water at the end of the world. After all, there are not so many girls. Now this is a pure harem, all about dealing with a bunch of women. Especially after reaching 80%, there are too many women, 90% of the content is teasing girls, 10% is promoting the plot, the harem is too big, the next version may have 3,000 beauties in the harem, 99% is picking up girls, 1% of the plot.

The only suggestion is to recruit less female supporting characters and write more main plots and fictitious stories.

This person's point of view is that the God's Chosen Knight is a large legendary mage, demigod > God's Chosen Knight. He must come out that the Queen is protected by four legendary mages ≈ four divinely chosen knights, the Explosive Hammer Landau family. Finally, let me read the book seriously. 😡

I must have caught this guy secretly opening a new book 🤓

Isn't it about to end? It's too soon.

By the way, is the Cong Shen at the same level as the Archangel and the Seven Demon Kings? Or is it still a level weaker? The span of demigods is too big, and the division of power levels is unclear, which greatly affects the reading experience. Although this book is essentially a joke invincible flow, and the power levels are dispensable, it is more satisfying to pretend to be slapped in the face after the division is clear. Otherwise, it will feel almost boring to slap a big boss and a minion in the face. I hope the author will make it clearer later.

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I've been keeping this book for a long time (I subscribed but didn't read it). Before reading it, I looked through the comment section and my expectations were quite low. I thought it was on the same level as the book on Xiuxian (in my eyes, Zhutian and Hong Kong Zongzong are both pretty good). But when I clicked on it, I thought, damn, the comment section is full of trolls, right? mullet roe, where is the operations officer? What are you doing for food? Let's swing the big stick.

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Ah Huang has written four novels, all of which are about harems. If you want to read novels without heroines, you can read them by yourself. What do you call them in the comment area? I just love to read harems, and I hope that when you read novels without heroines, some of you will jump out and want a harem.

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Why do Ah Huang's novels dwell on the issue of whether to have a harem or not? When everyone reads his novels, aren't they attracted by the joyful and comical temperament of his characters? I was attracted by 99 at first, and then I watched the End of the World, and I really liked this infinite quicksand glyph. Of course, I didn't read much of the book on Immortality, because the more I read, the more tired I became. I don't know why. I hope this one still maintains the joyful atmosphere of the sand sculpture.

Before I met my father-in-law, I thought it was very beautiful. But after my father-in-law came on the scene, I didn't know why, but something became more and more wrong, and I felt a little uncomfortable. So I summed it up and found a few shortcomings for me The first one, the heroine, front There were too few scenes for the heroine. By the end, I had completely forgotten the characteristics and name of the heroine. It was not as impressive as the one written by the mother-in-law. The second one is the mother-in-law. Just like the first question, the mother-in-law wrote a lot of scenes, especially in the early stage of apprenticeship. At that time, the mother-in-law and the protagonist had a lot of ambiguity, such as touching legs and so on. The protagonist also watched a lot of welfare. I liked my mother-in-law very much at that time, and then I wrote about one of the inappropriate heroines who had been separated from her husband for many years and hated her husband. Good guy, I thought she was the heroine, but she didn't. I thought of writing to me again later. It turned out that I really liked my husband. The separation was just a little fun between husband and wife. Not long after we returned, we lived together and acted like dogs every day. This made me very sick. I was ambiguous with my disciple in the early stage. Is this a normal master-disciple relationship? , Definitely not. Later, the author wrote about how much the mother-in-law loved the father-in-law, and how she and the father-in-law were cheating on each other, which made me feel uncomfortable. If the author removed those ambiguities and replaced them with a normal master-disciple relationship, I would not bother to care whether the mother-in-law is beautiful or not, and whether she and her husband are in love or enemies. I don't care at all. I tolerated this part, after all, are they a legal couple? The third point is the father-in-law. Just like at the beginning, the protagonist risked his life to save his daughter, and one loli finally sent a carrier pigeon. Although the other didn't send anything, it didn't cause any trouble. But this one is not only ungrateful, forget it. Then you told me that the protagonist was attacked by gang members. At that time, the protagonist had not officially practiced cultivation, and he was just an ordinary person. If not The protagonist was killed by his father-in-law eight hundred times, and later he was kicked out of his home and left his hometown directly. He still owed his father-in-law a favor. I really laughed. You have to thank him for driving you out of the house. If you hadn't met your mother-in-law later, the protagonist probably wouldn't be able to go back. If you say that the protagonist and his daughter are really related, then that's okay. At worst, after he dies, the old guy will burst into gold coins. It's not a loss, but the main character Jiao has nothing to do with his daughter. Also, if the father-in-law is not a person from the mysterious world, but just an ordinary person, then I can understand it, but the father-in-law is the Dark Knight, can't he find out? You told me that his daughter was almost dead and was saved by others, and then he wanted to kill the protagonist. Is this the kind of thing where there is no way to repay the life-saving grace, and the only choice is to kill the protagonist to resolve the cause and effect. Okay, I can tolerate this. The fourth point is also the point I can't stand the most. Let's compare it. In terms of wealth, the protagonist is poor. His father-in-law is as rich as anyone in the country and has great connections. In terms of strength, the protagonist looks good. His father-in-law is a serious Dark Knight. As for the heroine, as I said in the first point, the heroine of the protagonist has no role at all. Yes, there are almost a hundred of them out. As for the father-in-law's, not to mention the mother-in-law, they also have a beautiful housekeeper who is exactly like the mother-in-law. What other popular celebrities can be found at your fingertips? Besides, the housekeeper that the protagonist has been longing for is also trained by the father-in-law. No need, The most important thing is the character. The author has been telling you through the words of his mother-in-law and the matter of masturbating the cat. The father-in-law's personality is very similar to the protagonist's. Oh no, the protagonist's personality is very similar to his father-in-law. If you think about it this way, all the protagonist's shining points have been crushed by his father-in-law. In addition, the character is also the same. This is not just a pure protagonist, but a substitute. Then you Think about it again, the protagonist has been tortured to death, being plotted every day, more than 100 times, only a few are happy. As for the father-in-law, he plots against others every day, is chased and licked by the Vatican, and his mother-in-law is sent back just by saying a word. Think about who is the protagonist, the protagonist is crushed by the father-in-law in all aspects, what do you think? In addition, there are a lot of father-in-law scenes, so do I watch the protagonist or the father-in-law, and the protagonist does not owe their family, on the contrary, they owe the protagonist. Why do they have to lick their faces and go to his house? The father-in-law does not want to see him in the first place, and he pretends that nothing is wrong and is annoying That's it mainly. Everyone is welcome to discuss If there are any problems, please point them out and discuss them This is what I find annoying,

I told you it was a harem story, so everyone should leave early and don't waste everyone's time.

In my lifetime, I want to see Ah Huang write another infinite

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To be honest, this harem feels too big The women in Ah Huang are not the heroines of ordinary harem novels. At least they have brains and their own pursuits and thoughts. Now the harem is so big that it feels like it is about to overturn and it is obviously out of control. There are three little ones, the angel secretary, the moonlight priest, the literary girl series of evil spirits, the nature saint, the dark saint, and the moonlight knight, princess and goddess who are not established. This is not a problem that can be solved by dragging the father-in-law into the water. And when he and Auston always insist on pure love, he is more like a clown and a scumbag than Wayne. On Duke's side, the women in each world do not communicate with each other, and the Roman Eyes are in each small world, but they are still loyal to Supergirl (at least the Olympus side will not fall over). In the end, they also confiscated the other members of the main god team.