
In the Hokage World: The Fist Path Reaches the Divine!
人在火影:拳道通神!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 566k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After reading it, my evaluation is that the protagonist does not look like a master at all but a brainless fool. A true master will learn from each other's strengths when facing a brand new system. The protagonist so far gives me the impression that our country's martial arts are invincible! Your ninjutsu is so rubbish, it's not as good as our national ninjutsu, a supreme spear, just like a Qing Dynasty person. I have never thought about using ninjutsu to assist my national martial arts. It's not impossible to write pure martial arts that will blow up the ninja world. The problem is that it's a job done by Lu Shengmon, whose brain is all about muscles, not a master of martial arts with brains. Even a Hong Kong comic can learn it.
Forcibly pretending to be cool is the most deadly, especially if the protagonist is asked to explain why he is pretending to be cool, it is really low!
Let's talk about the protagonist's martial arts. Since the protagonist is in the world of Naruto, he should learn and be proficient in using ninjutsu and use ninjutsu as a weapon. The positioning of martial arts as a means of offense and defense will never exclude any weapon that can improve the efficiency of offense and defense
Author, I feel that what you wrote does not have much shadow of the master of martial arts. More like an impure warrior. I hope you won't write anything like this.
It's embarrassing to be so pretentious. Not to mention entering Anjin at the age of 8, are you sure? The body is not fully grown at the age of 8.
At best, martial arts is low, but at least Hokage must be a demon
Every master of martial arts is also a master of weapons. Why don't you use any of the weapons you wrote about? Don't you know that weapons versus fists and feet are a sure winner?😰
Except for the strength system, which is pretty good, there is no logical logic in the entire text. It's hard to read for those with brains.
Your plot and characters have little to do with the original work. Your writing like this is very fanciful. To be honest, you might as well write something original.
I feel like a reckless man, not a master