People in Kama Taj Have Countless Talent Entries

Author, do you know what horror is? Horror is the rule of death. Since they are all weird, just make the rules. You can have a small amount of low-end intelligence, but since you wrote sugar as love, your book has exploded.

There are some problems with the latest two chapters. . When selling entries to the other party, it is best to give an explanation as soon as possible as to how many points the other party can give you. You can sell as many co-authors as you want. And there is an entry for just finding a corpse as written earlier. The explosion rate of the entry is a bit too high. Why don't you just take off if you find a place where there's a war?

It would be best to change the consumption of the lottery If you multiply this by 50, 100, 200, 400, you can calculate how big it will be after 20 times

I was made to cry by the stupidity of the protagonist😭. There were all sorts of loopholes from beginning to end, and there was no progress at all😓. For example, the effect of copper skin and iron bones is to increase double resistance by 20%. As a result, the protagonist said it was "invulnerable"😒. For example, the protagonist is afraid of being psychically attacked by Dr. For example, when the protagonist meets the Sea of ​​Insects, he does not want to learn range damage such as fireball and explosion magic, but wants to create point damage such as magic spear and magic Gatling😂 ...

Odin is very poisonous. In the movie, Odin's tight pants can't even fit in his pants. The setting is that the Asa clan gets stronger as they get older, but as a result, they are almost dead and can't even let out a fart. But why do you think Odin is going to destroy the Supreme Mage line because the Ancient One breaks into Asgard? Is the Supreme Mage so worthless? Or are you writing a comic about Odin? If you want to write a comic setting, Ancient Yi's strength is not right.

The setting of the golden finger is good, but the writing is not good, not to mention mindless cheating. When writing Odin Guyi, his pupils will tremble, or he will be jealous, and his defense will be broken when encountering something. You can imagine how the characters with a lower mood than these two are written. I don't dare think about the plot, it's full of loopholes, the words can't be picked out carefully, there are always bad sentences, it's not smooth to read, it's very annoying, no one will read it, I really want to persuade you to quit.

The content is getting more and more clumsy, and the IQ is so high that it seems to have low IQ, and there is no motivation to renew 😐

Aren't Ancient One and Odin on the same level? The writing feels mindless 😅

The earth is destroyed by real estate development

This woman is really disgusting. If you write that she is the heroine, I will report you every day. Create a hundred accounts and report you every day.

If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about it. Don't force yourself to disgust the readers. This is not good for both parties.

He can give entries to anyone at will, and Odin repeatedly threatens Ancient One. Is this normal? That's the Ancient One, the boss with Eternity behind him, and Odin is now gentle and tolerant even to the Frost Giants. Now he's actually threatening the Ancient One. Do you really think that the Ancient One has no temper? There are unknown numbers of corpses of gods and demons outside the territory. And it's true that Kama Taj's protective barrier is vegetarian. If it's not strong, how can it block these evil gods?

After reading Chapters 58 and 59, I was really confused by the author's setting... Thanos can kill the Ancient One instantly, Odin can also kill the Ancient One instantly, the Ancient One... Is he really so unsatisfactory?

It's a bit confusing, I still can't tell if you're writing a comic or a movie Vishan Emperor and Cytorak are not as good as the Infinity Stones? Weird world? There are ancient gods in Marvel, and there is a cancerous universe. The original Marvel made a wish when it was about to die. The ancient gods heard it, but the ancient gods were crazy and directly erased the concept of death. It is better to let the protagonist be the favored one of the ancient gods. First, arrange an entry for the protagonist that the ancient gods took a look at, and then directly upgrade this entry when encountering a crisis.

If you suck people's luck, what will they do? You are enmity, this is cause and effect! If you are greedy and don't know what to choose, you will get carried away when you succeed. No matter how great the opportunity is, your mind is like a child's. You want this and that. Benefiting yourself at the expense of others is the devil's way. No matter how much power you have, you can only wrap your fragile heart under a layer of power woven by the system and live happily. Such a character, such a protagonist, is really disgusting! Farewell

It is recommended that authors recognize their own IQ and abilities. If the author's IQ is not above a good level, do not imagine that you can write a wise protagonist. A reckless man is more suitable for you. Just fight and kill. For example, in this book, when writing the story, it was okay. Once I wrote about the inner description of the characters, I started to make all kinds of ridiculous speculations, which were outrageous and out of my depth. My IQ kept falling.

Stop messing with your boring weird world. It's not weird or scary at all. It's just about killing monsters and upgrading. It's better to make some crazy multiverse and some zombie universe.

In Chapter 153, the power stone and machine were stolen by Raven. The protagonist followed Raven to Magneto's place. The first thing he did when he arrived was not to get the things back but to have a BBQ with Magneto? BB Forget it, later on the fight started, your abilities were exposed, and you were hated by Magneto. You still had time to engage in psychological activities with Magneto. Knowing that machines can enhance the abilities of mutants, why didn't you put your things away? ? ? Then Magneto asked Raven to get the machine to strengthen herself, so why didn't you just collect the things? OK, the machine and the Power Stone can't be transferred directly, so you wouldn't just transfer yourself there? Okay, your own teleportation is also slow. You don't know how to open a mirror space? How can you make an action slower than talking to the person next to you and turning on a machine to strengthen it? I know that writing fan fiction has its own set of explanations, but you can't reduce your intelligence. By the time you get to 153, the protagonist is already very powerful. You can easily understand the magic, and there are infinite blue bars. If you really only look at the system, your IQ will not increase at all? After Magneto is strengthened, you still smile bitterly like a hammer before you get the things back. When you look at Wolverine, you can think of exile, but when you look at Magneto, you can't think of it, right? I can imagine that the main character followed you there to recruit, but you just said it directly when you arrived. As soon as you walked over, you talked about this and that, without saying anything serious, what did you do in the past? Pretend? Free? (Ah, I just watched 153 again, plus the previous 152 and the following 154. The protagonist got the machine back after Magneto strengthened it, opened a door to summon the X-Men, and expelled Magneto after a collision of ideas... There are obviously simpler solutions and must choose the most complicated one, just to write two more character panels?)

The setting is very rough and cannot stand up to scrutiny. As a result, it suppresses the protagonist at every turn, which is very disturbing to watch. Isn't this a slap in the face? First, regarding the acquisition of luck value, it can be obtained by fighting and killing weirdos, and it is treated as experience points. Later, it was said that it can also be obtained by changing the plot or the fate of the characters. In the end, the protagonist just got a power gem, and after changing the plot, he only got 200 luck points. There is a setting that changes the plot, which has pros and cons and will cancel each other out. Then you play a der , the protagonist taking the power gem will not only be beneficial to the protagonist, but also disadvantageous to others. Why not deduct the luck value as a negative number? As long as the protagonist exists, it is harvesting good things and changing the plot. In addition to benefiting the protagonist, there are a lot of negative effects, and you can also get luck values. If it is not a negative number, this setting cannot withstand scrutiny at all. Second, the protagonist draws energy from the power gem. Why does he say that he has no mana when killing weirdos? Infinite fast charging can still have no mana. As for the rest of the story, I can't read it well. I can only say that the writing is not that good, and the outline is not that good either. The protagonist's role is not well defined. It feels like I am making up as I write. I have to suppress the protagonist at every turn, so don't be too awesome.

After reading more than 50 chapters, I have a lot of inner drama, very fragmented behavior, sometimes narcissistic, sometimes persecutory paranoia, serious breakdown in combat power, and unclear understanding of my own abilities. The only thing that makes me unstoppable is that everyone has learned magic. They have to use magic pistols. You have already written about Kama Taj, but haven't you understood the characteristics of magic? Large-scale indiscriminate strikes, high lethality, long distance, and strong targeting. Just because there are some dense insects, do you have to use magic guns? To be honest, a fireball spell is better than your magic gun.

After reading the first few chapters, there are some ideas, but not much. T3 is a small piece of writing. The logic is not self-consistent but it is forced to round up. The author is seriously disappointed. The writing style is average and the author is too irritated. Please keep up the good work.

You only get 200 luck when you see the power gem. What kind of bullshit is this? Whatever changes destiny, you will find good results and bad results. What do you measure by. You can't survive in the early stage without taking power gems. Isn't it more beneficial to you? In the end, you get 200 luck yourself, bah

The brothers were poisoned, but they still couldn't hold on after all.

Run! Run! Run! , Don't look back, kid, only one can. Otherwise, it's not my fault if you die of poisoning.

Can I ask about the author's academic qualifications? Various words used in sentences do not convey the intended meaning

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. The protagonist's IQ and the characters' IQ are getting lower and lower. Too many mental activities expose the protagonist's ignorance.

One protagonist can travel around the world in seconds and regain the consciousness of the earth... Still can't figure out the inner earth world? What the hell... I saw a pirated post 🤭

I feel like the protagonist is just rubbish. Others can upgrade the entries by self-study. The protagonist has an entry with bonus learning. Not to mention upgrading the entries, it should be easy to learn a bunch of white entries by yourself.

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I can't understand it at all, it's like this or that. You've already got the gems and you're still paying so much.