Mortal Immortality

This is the first time I have seen someone who has reached a bottleneck after breaking through the first level of Qi training.

The poison started in the third chapter. Zhang Youcai was written like a fool. The protagonist still has to take him to life and death, right? 666

The beginning of the article was terrible. I thought that the cultivation novel I wrote had a whiny opening that would not attract readers without getting into the main topic. You start the article directly and want to kill the male protagonist.

I always feel like something is missing. It's too slow to cultivate immortality like this. I still read the book, it just depends on the author's ability.

Will the setting be too simple? Each time you advance to a level, you need to collect alchemy materials for the purpose of unfolding the story.