Douluo Dalu: Every Soul Skill Boosted, I Am the One-Punch Angel

I really despise those who criticize for the sake of criticizing. No matter how hypocritical Tang San is, at least he's not stupid. Why would the Blue Silver Emperor even look at Hao Zi with his personality? While it's true that one's stance is influenced by their own biases, one shouldn't be so mindless.

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It feels like the protagonist is being targeted. Honestly, at level 98, he's practically invincible. How could those forces dare to assassinate him? If you push someone too far, even if they're only level 90, 1, or 2, they'll target your younger generation—how can you defend yourself? They'll attack and run, wiping out your entire sect and clan.

The protagonist is arrogant, saying at the beginning not to treat anyone as a fool. I'm thinking, he's only six years old since he transmigrated, and he's already talking about scheming against the God of Asura. Tang San is nothing in his eyes. If we follow the original setting, Tang San at least had some experience surviving in ancient times.

Bibi Dong betrayed the Spirit Hall's intelligence, revealing all the secrets of the Angel Spirit. The master's face looked even more stiff. "I only know a little bit, it was Bibi Dong who told me. She mentioned something superficial, saying that in the Spirit Hall, there are six soul bones that have been passed down for thousands of years.

It's a bit disgusting. He pretends to be all-knowing, but does stupid things. There are also a lot of ambiguous descriptions. He's incredibly pathetic.

Can you please stop writing about Heiglin? What's the point? All you give him is whale glue, and you've already helped them, and you still want him to become a god and go to the divine realm? He's always in the story and even interacts with the female lead 😅. The protagonist is surrounded by women, and then you suddenly introduce a male supporting character. Is he there to build a harem for the protagonist or for Heiglin? 😅

The male lead's ability to make Yue Ling, a Soul Master in her forties, fall in love with a six-year-old kid in just three months is particularly toxic. Is an old lady falling in love with her grandson out of maternal love? If you were twenty, it might be understandable, but you're only six. If you develop any further, you'll be unbelievable at six! 😅

There are no major flaws, but plenty of minor ones, and they haven't changed even after being told.