I Am a Wonderful Immortal

It's a book written by a female author, right? The few male characters currently appearing look like effeminate characters at first glance. It's similar to the female author called Kissing Fingertips, and the male character in the book Ascension of the Day. I don't understand the point of view of a female author writing a male character, always hiding behind to eavesdrop or do other things. In my opinion, this is like taking off your pants and farting, which is unnecessary and meaningless. Maybe this is because men and women have different views. Otherwise, how could 6 people in a female dormitory create 8 groups?

Xie Ziziran comes from Kun Dao in the Tang Dynasty, which is recorded in history. It is said that the place where he ascended to heaven is the Feishen Stone in Xishan, my hometown. I thought it was her who was writing about it, but when I came in and took a look, it wasn't.

Daily Daodu finally recommended a decent book to me... I think it will be fairy grass

Tied again! Stable performance and a premium feel! So far, I'm very satisfied with the portrayal of the Five Strange People, and the characters are well established. However, Xue Xu is sometimes an old woman and sometimes a girl, which looks a bit weird.

I don't think the protagonist is feeling suffocated... Isn't it true that in the current plot, he also pretends to be a disciple (instead of a preaching teacher) and hangs out with others? Then in order not to expose too much of your strength, you have to work secretly... Work secretly and don't let others know that you did it. You can't finish it and then scold others for not knowing. Don't thank you, right? Depending on how showy it is, the battle in the valley and the childishness were also very pretentious. Although the battle in the valley was a bit on the sidelines, the protagonist didn't want to be exposed, so he really couldn't appear with a bang and suppress all the opponents... (That scene was a bit about how the people in their family chose, and which path they took, and it felt like letting nature take its course)

The last few photos have exploded! ! ! ! 36, 37 I will become a god directly! ! ! ! ! !

The evaluation of the book is that it is a book that can only be read. How should I put it? If you cut it and re-open it, you should have a chance to become a god. I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 49. The book has collapsed. The plot is novel, the supporting characters are silly, and the protagonist's brain is sometimes erratic. The wooden boy should be a boy. The role of the girl in educating and promoting the story is difficult to write. The protagonist seems to be a naughty person. He wants to be aloof and do nothing to save others, but he also has to protect his shortcomings at every turn. It doesn't capture the spirit of a fairy who escapes from the world of mortals. It's written in a particularly worldly way, but rather like being a bitch. The definition of strength and weakness in cultivating immortals is outrageous enough. If your meridians are wider than others, does that mean you have to be stronger than others? But no, no one from other sects could see it either. The black and white impermanence is even more outrageous. There are gods and immortals. There is already a complete Shinto system. Who granted the gods and who built the system. What did the police officer and the county magistrate ask the protagonist to do at the beginning? Just ask the city god and that's it. Can the protagonist run around in the world without anyone caring about him? If everything is denied and the protagonist is the biggest, it would conflict with the fact that the five monsters came out and did nothing at the beginning. There are still a lot of problems. In short, the writing is a bit false and empty, which makes it difficult to grasp it in the early stage. In the next book, except for the main character, who only has magic and no magic in the world, and lowers the level of power, it will naturally smell like fireworks.

The emotional portrayal of the characters is really good and touching. Some parts really made me cry~

It's really good to watch. It may be a bit jerky at the beginning, but the plot has ups and downs later and the content is novel enough. I hope the author can advance the story step by step according to his own ideas. The most feared thing about this kind of fairy tale is that he suddenly pretends to be a big showman, and then finds that the subsequent showmanship is not as good as this one (this showdown means that the content is not novel enough, just like repeating the previous showmanship over and over again). Although it is fun when you pretend to be a showman, it will make readers stop the feeling of seeking progress. The bad guy next door is like this. As written before, the trick king slowly improves himself, and the strength of the people he meets also gradually improves, but he always has new ways to show off, and the results are hard to explain later. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit in the fusion period. For example, when he suddenly writes about the plot of the Sun family, it gives people the feeling of a sudden change in the style of painting. It was obvious that the relaxed feeling of playing the world of mortals was suddenly "ignited" (although Mr. Xie is on top of the mountain, holding the heavenly constitution in his mouth to wake up the dragon's head). It feels like the online article from more than ten years ago, "I will fight until the last drop of blood, but I still have to..." Hahahaha.

Let's talk about the protagonist's character and help everyone avoid poison. In this book, there is a core setting for the protagonist to seek magic. As long as the host of the magic is "by the protagonist's side" and "close to the protagonist", the protagonist can recreate the magic. This setting is essentially to give the protagonist the motivation to "take the initiative to form relationships with others", so that the protagonist has something to appeal to, and is even willing to make friends with wonderful people whose cultivation is far lower than him (such as Xue Xu, the most talented woman, who has never practiced Taoism in her life) in exchange for friendship. As for whether this behavior will be worthless or not, I think that a truly confident immortal knows that the choice is always in his hands, so he will not mind asking for advice from others, nor will he mind being courteous to others. He can even accompany a beggar to roll in the mud. If the setting of "My True Way, Miao Immortal" is "immortal", then the setting of Xun Miao is "human", so I wrote a humane immortal, otherwise why would I want to practice in the world? So, if you hope that "the protagonist is very murderous and will kill ants immediately if he can't stand it"; if you think that "the protagonist asking for advice from mortals is too cheap"; if you think that "the protagonist should be the master and ancestor after passing on other people's wonderful skills, and the relaxed relationship of being friends is too cheap", this book may not be suitable for you. That's all. Xie Ziran in his early days was a mortal fairy with a smell of fireworks. I also hope he is an interesting and wonderful person.

Brothers, run quickly, the author is a eunuch

This is too young... The writing is really good.

The main character behaves like a noob, subservient and seems unhappy.

It's both fake and fake, so I suggest you watch it without thinking too much.

Well, it's obvious that I really want to follow the same tactics as Ke Qiyuan. The story is okay too. But the characterization is very awkward, and the writing style is always hidden. It feels like you are holding back a breath that cannot be released, and it is very blue and thin. Overall, it's okay, give it a good review.

This book is actually very novel and the writing is very good, but the rhythm and plot of the plot are a bit too smooth. The section that I thought could show me the saint in front of people ended up being bland and ended without sadness or joy, and there was no climax plot that moved people's hearts. (Seek common ground while reserving differences, don't criticize if you don't like it, let's discuss it together)

I read this book with the same feeling as "Roman Ke Qiyuan", but the more I read it, the more something was wrong. From my perspective, the fairy flavor was not enough, but the human flavor was quite enough.

He is obviously an expert, but he looks like a novice in front of his former apprentice Even if the protagonist doesn't understand much when he travels back in time, he can still explore in secret

Everything is fine, but it just looks a bit messy? It seems that this chapter is about so many people, and the next chapter jumps to another line, otherwise the plot turns a bit sudden. The first part about the Liu family felt okay, but later on when it came to the Sun family, this kind of chaotic feeling came.