Fu Yao: I Collected the Novels About Ghosts and Monsters

After gnawing it late at night, I feel that it is a good grass. At present, there is indeed a trend of fairy grass. I hope the author can work hard 💪. For classical fairy tales, the writing is indeed full of ancient style, but I suggest that the narrative style can be more ancient style, but the content should not be too much. Ancient texts appear in many articles. You may devote yourself to research and think it is appropriate to release them, but readers may not understand what they mean. I am looking forward to this apprentice. I think the relationship between master and apprentice begins with teaching and learning. You, the master, can be said to have no friendship at all. Why do you insist that my apprentice live and die with you? Based on my many years of experience in reading books, the author has great writing skills. I hope he can portray the image of each heroine well. My humble opinion: Classical Xianxia cannot be too romantic. Every time I see the protagonist and heroine in Xianxia novels having an emotional scene, it is basically a small climax. It is very enjoyable to read.

Unlike the panel text, the data levels are clear, the protagonist kills decisively, and it is not satisfying. Most of the stories are told from the perspective of the protagonist, pursuing a sense of substitution. It's a bit like history, urban literature, and a bit of life. There are quite a few narrations from the perspective of supporting characters. Some dialogue logic routines are okay at first glance, but really look wrong upon closer inspection. However, people may want to write a novel about the style of a white-robed steward. It is not about raising the talent of a talisman demon, making talisman soldiers, talisman generals, talisman city talisman cannons, and the revolutionary new world is coming.

Not to mention that at the beginning of the reincarnation talisman, I still felt a pain in my back, but the messy multi-perspective narrative before and after the wolf demon was dazzled. There isn't a single stand-alone character, so everyone who is related to the protagonist jumps out in a hurry, and the first and third perspectives are randomly switched. I can't stand it anymore.

Shennong is dead, so if something happens, paper will be burned!

Oh my god, this situation is so inconsistent and disgusting.

It's almost fifty chapters. Except for the matryoshka doll at the beginning, I can't see any connection between the content and the title and introduction of the book. Most people who click on it should go for the title and introduction at the beginning. At least that's the case for me. I don't say that I have to hold the golden finger and go straight to the sky in seconds. At least throw out the settings first.

I feel that the writing is very messy. The predecessor wanted to have a realm but not a realm. He didn't know any martial arts. He was inferior to all kinds of mountain Taoist priests. Later, he boasted that he was very powerful, killing demons and demons everywhere, and the practitioners admired him and made excuses. Is this really possible just by relying on the 7 talismans given by his uncle?

After reading about 50 chapters, I feel that the title of this novel is wrong. The title is clearly a novel about talismans and supernatural beings. However, except for the beginning and the end, it basically does not involve it. It is completely based on human writing. The main body is a talisman. Shouldn't it involve more about the creation of talismans, plus the supernatural beings? Elements of novels, use novels as a collection of beliefs, talismans as a list of gods, embodying things in the novel or other talismans and monsters, and the gameplay of the novel. Otherwise, in the later stage, you will just write things based on human experience, which has basically no connection with the theme and no creativity.

He is very poisonous at the beginning. This disciple is really very poisonous.

Is the fat man dead in the back? If not, he would have run earlier. In the past, taking on a female apprentice was like a burden, but now taking on a supercilious person would always be poisonous.

Maybe I'm not good enough, but everyone said yes, so I'll keep looking. The only feeling I have now is that I won't kill this fat guy and keep him for the New Year 😥

It's not very good-looking. There are too many trivial descriptions of the protagonist's unclear realm and the filial piety of his parents. Moreover, the style of imitating Lan Keqiyuan is too obvious. There is a sense of humor that painting a tiger is not the opposite of a dog, and the existence of the apprentice is even more speechless.

I don't quite understand. It's like a talisman possessing a demon, and then the demon possessing a human body. It's like a matryoshka doll. And that disciple, I, Ditian, the authentic white-eyed wolf, dare to continue to carry me like this?

How can I put it, I think it's okay, but I still prefer to read cool articles, waiting for the author to kill the apprentice. The apprentice is really poisonous. The early writing is too hateful. If he doesn't die, he will torture him a little in the later stage to make everyone feel better. In the end, I couldn't resist it and stopped reading it. For a new book, it's pretty good. I'm a book reader and I can't give you any advice. Anyway, I felt that the setting was a bit confusing. But I read it without thinking. It felt pretty good. Good luck, author.

I can't stand this beginning. I'm really drunk that this kind of disciple still has me. There's no reason why I don't have good grades.

This cannot be said to be a demon, it can only be said to be an elf, but it has a physical form.

Which family god will call his Taoist priest son? If you want to call me, you can only call me a mage. The protagonist has no way to settle down and make a living, so he rushes to send this girl to flirt with the female wolf cultivator.

There is no main line, only emotions. It is neither a passionate theme nor a God's perspective. The story of life and death is written carelessly, and the rhythm is too scattered and self-indulgent.

It looks boring, and I feel like the main character has no life left.

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When I saw Chapter 9, alas, the apprentice didn't know why he set the apprentice up like this and the protagonist's attitude. I can only say that the author is happy.

What's written is messy, I can't understand it, it's too messy

After watching more than half of the movie, I didn't know how the protagonist could level up. There were too many irrelevant plots, which were confusing and confusing. I couldn't understand the main storyline. .

After the protagonist sat on the throne, it felt weird

Just got the daily guide

Can you please update it soon? I've been keeping the soldering iron for so long and I don't even have half a million...

How come no one subscribes to such good food? It's a pity that only 500,000 words are not enough. It is better than the previous dozens of articles on cultivating immortals. It has a bit of Taoist Priest's flavor and the author's taste is worth savoring. I hope the new book will get better results.