Immortality: Remaining in the World of Mortals and Becoming an Immortal

After reading Chapter 15, it was very outrageous to ask a group of eleven or twelve-year-old farm children to kill a wild deer to get its ears. The wild deer stood and asked you to get its ears? Moreover, most of the children described are cruel and cruel, and their minds are ridiculously mature. There are a few of these top-notch children who are still barely round. Isn't that too much?

Does the protagonist have a Qiankun bag in his arms? It can hold more than a hundred deer ears...

Recently, I really wanted to read this kind of story about people who slowly progress from martial arts to cultivating immortality. Unfortunately, the poison started right at the beginning 😅. I bit the bullet and read a few more chapters. I really couldn't stand it anymore. Hey! The author's writing was too deliberate, leading to all kinds of little poisons, really one after another 😰

I read Shen Nong's comment on Chapter 25: Part of the plot is very blunt, and I don't know what happened if the follow-up plot didn't develop. The whole story was a little bit toxic in the beginning. What is more difficult for me to accept is that there is such a big difference in age and behavior, it's a bit of a drama. I would be more accepting if the corresponding age was raised to fifteen or sixteen. Others feel fine, maybe I have higher resistance 😁

When you meet a beautiful woman, if you don't save her, you won't be able to think clearly.

It's poisonous. There's poison everywhere. If you don't look at it with your brain, it should be okay.

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There is no trouble in the world, only mediocre people bring it upon themselves. What does the accident in the escort agency have to do with the protagonist? Aren't you looking for trouble?

Chapter 37 It's so arrogant. You don't have the strength to be so frivolous. What happened at the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion that night was that you didn't learn a lesson at all. You dared to do this and that without any strength. You are really awesome. You really put yourself in God's perspective to write a book.

The first five chapters are full of little poisonous points, and I can't bear it anymore

Let me talk about the shortcomings and advantages of this book first. As of Chapter 80, it is very old-fashioned to use the heroine as the plot driving point. Several plot points are driven by beauties. Then this book is about immortality, but I don't see how long the time span is. It's 200,000 words and I'm still at the first level of martial arts. There are 6 realms in martial arts, and there's also the cultivation of immortality. It can be said that if you don't want to write 1 million words and still be in martial arts, there may be an unreasonable upgrade speed in the future. If you like to read very slowly, this book should be very suitable. The supporting characters are also more obvious in reducing their intelligence. Many details cannot be delved into. However, it is the first time for the author to write a book and it is acceptable. The advantages and potential are great.

Why didn't Su Hui wake up and insist on taking her body and traveling through time?

Can you please stop using words like "looking deeply"? It's very poisonous.

Didn't you say that you want to be sexually active? When you see a woman, you do all kinds of things. You are convinced. You, an immortal, are actually doing all kinds of things. Do you really think you are strong? You are so convinced!

I'm so excited, please read more...

It's best to go all the way to the dark side. Judging from this rhythm, you are going to cultivate immortality. What a pity. What is the protagonist's cheat? I seem to have forgotten

If you cut off the deer ears and give them to your friends who are poisoned and die, you might as well save some to make it to the top of thirty. It's really up to the parents not to care about it, because the parents' house is so hungry that they don't have enough to eat.