A Cybernetic Galaxy of Immortals

You must maintain the aura you had at the beginning of the last book. It's best not to be so protected by the big boss again. In the later part of the last book, the protagonist simply won. It is obvious that he was a genius with a lot of imagination in the early stage 😁

This book was really good in the early stages, but when I wrote about the mother, it started to get ugly. I feel like it's messed up now. I was attracted to it in the early stages, but not in the later stages.

When choosing talents for foundation building, choose the most rubbish ones. If there are good ones, just don't choose them, just play them.

It feels like the author comes up with something every time he wants it, and every plot is very sudden.

Brother, I always feel like you were force-feeding me a reply when it was about to be published. I really can't bear it. The transition is too abrupt. I feel uncomfortable watching it.

After reading about forty chapters, I found that there were too many chapters written about my sister and aunt, and they were completely incompatible with cultivating immortality.

In short, if the protagonist is awesome and the one with the strongest talent is not happy, just choose the most ordinary one. Why bother? Brother, are you so stubborn? Are you an expert? Didn't you work your way up from the bottom by panning for gold? ? ?

How should I put it, replacing cultivation with source power, spiritual energy or something, it is not inconsistent at all. The cultivator feels like a big-headed soldier, unable to draw any combat power at all

Cultivation to Immortality has the aesthetic elements of cultivating immortality, but at least as far as the beginning of the plot is concerned, it does not show the temperament and logic of the Cultivation to Immortality category. As far as science fiction is concerned, calling it a space opera may be considered a compliment. In fact, if you really want to make it unique, the best strategy is actually to use AI to make pictures with special aesthetics, so that at least the superficial elements can match the two elements of immortality and science fiction. The following is a detailed discussion of the aesthetic elements of immortality and science fiction: I personally think that the logic of contemporary immortality writing is actually closer to workplace writing, except that it eliminates the correlation with reality through element replacement, thereby ensuring that no matter what rules the author writes against the heavens, he will not trigger the reader's empirical resistance. From the perspective of aesthetic elements, one of the core aesthetic elements of cultivating immortality is longevity, which is manifested in the decrease in social intensity caused by the long life cycle. Another aesthetic core is "Tao". "Tao" makes characters deal with things rather than people. It emphasizes dealing with things, which is a kind of engineer thinking to a certain extent. As long as you do a good job in "Tao", you can naturally achieve a class jump (level promotion) and gain social status. (Of course, you may think that fantasy has similar settings, but fantasy emphasizes the refreshing feeling of class breakthrough, which is different from the logic of cultivating immortals. It emphasizes more on the social feeling after class jump, such as the praise of various people before and after the breakthrough. The intention of this expression is very clear). Aesthetic elements of soft science fiction: The excitement that science fiction can provide is actually very high-end, But from the perspective of aesthetic elements, the aesthetic elements of science fiction works are actually concentrated on humanistic features and technological tree ideas. But for a work to be called science fiction, you can't just take out two elements. Generally speaking, there should not be too many singularities that deviate from reality. A good work can extend from a basic singularity setting to a complete system through physics or engineering knowledge from high school to undergraduate. Readers' recognition of the system is not trust in the basic singularity setting, but trust in the basic common sense of science and engineering. This trust ensures readers' immersion in the world view. Moreover, there are social relations and superstructure based on the hyper-realistic system. In other words, the best configuration of science fiction is a huge system based on a small idea and introduced by a large number of concepts from realistic deterministic disciplines (physics and chemistry) and empirical disciplines (social sciences). What I feel in this book is actually a chimeric product of cyberpunk style and space opera. The actual sense of immortality is not very strong. Only the surface layer matches immortality and science fiction. The inner layer can only be said to be a fantasy starry sky opera with restrained emotional expression

I casually scrolled through the comment area and saw no negative comments. I will probably delete this post, so it doesn't matter; It's just average. If I say it's not poisonous, I'll feel dizzy again if I say okay. It's like a fake cyborg and a real cultivator. Cultivate immortality, but technology. He's a cyborg, but he's really cultivating immortality. It is filled with a lot of unbelievable sense of rationality that makes people go numb. Inexplicably soft rice. The way the eldest lady shows off her muscles is to melt the table into a sword! Yes, this is a great power attributed to oneself, but the eldest lady doesn't even have a magic weapon? ! It's impossible to say that none of the elders of the young lady have ascended and don't have so many resources, or that they are pure good people who won't leave backdoors in the programs of low-level people, right?