A Cybernetic Galaxy of Immortals

You absolutely must maintain the same spark and brilliance as the beginning of the last book! It's best not to let the big shots protect you so much again. In the last book, the protagonist basically won without any effort later on, even though he was clearly a wildly imaginative genius in the beginning. 😁

The beginning of this book was really good, but it got less interesting later on when it got to the mother character. I feel like it's gotten messy now. The beginning was quite engaging, but the later parts just didn't work.

When choosing talents for Foundation Establishment, pick the worst one; if there are good ones, just ignore them—it's all for fun.

It feels like the author is just making things up on a whim; every storyline is very sudden.

Brother, it feels like you're forcing me to write a thesis defense right before it's going to be published. I can't stand it anymore! The transitions are so abrupt, it's really painful to read.

After reading about forty chapters, I found that there was too much writing about older sisters and aunts, which didn't fit the cultivation theme at all.

In short, the protagonist is awesome, but the most talented among them isn't happy, so they choose the most ordinary one. Why bother, buddy? Are you that stubborn? Are you some kind of genius? Didn't you rise from the bottom, panning for gold?

To put it simply, if you replaced cultivation with source energy or spiritual energy, it wouldn't feel out of place at all. Cultivators would feel like ordinary soldiers, completely failing to demonstrate combat power.

Cultivation has its aesthetic elements, but at least in the beginning of the story, it doesn't showcase the temperament and logic of the cultivation genre. As for science fiction, calling it a space opera would be an overstatement. In fact, if you really want to create something unique, the best strategy is to use AI to create images with special aesthetics, so that at least on the surface, it…

I glanced at the comments section and didn't see any negative reviews, so this post of mine will probably be deleted anyway. Oh well. It's alright, not exactly poisonous, but it also gives you a dizzying feeling. It's like a fake cyberpunk cultivator actually practicing immortality. It's about cultivating immortality, but with technology. It's cyberpunk, but it's about true cultivation.