Invincible Among Mortals, I Analyze the Cultivation of Immortality

Suppress the pace and add a little more detail. The protagonist's golden finger is very powerful. It is too easy to obtain resources. Economic prices have collapsed. The plot must have its own ideas. The story line can be used, but cannot be copied. It can describe people's humanity more. The monks are fighting for resources. Cultivation is like the big fish eating the small fish and the small fish eating the shrimp. Events should be used to change the protagonist's personality and become a little self-interested. These can better reflect the cultivation of immortals, and the cultivation hierarchy must be clear. The higher level is to overwhelm the next level. You can seek supplements with external things, but not outrageous. Once you jump to a higher level, you are no brainer. You can have a confidante, but you can't be around you. Most of the mortals nowadays are like this. They must be distinguished. There is still a lot of potential in the beginning. I hope it will not collapse. This is purely a personal opinion.

Why is A Mortal's Story of Immortality a classic? The first point is that Han Li doesn't lick anyone. The author really licks. His parents don't care, but he still licks. The daughter of his enemy still licks because he read the original work and felt that he really can't cultivate immortality without spiritual roots. As a result, his parents and younger brothers don't care. What if your parents are buried in the grave, will you have time to save it? And if you dare to reveal the secret of giving people spiritual roots even if they are not related by blood, do you not know how to search for souls? I feel that my IQ has been affected. When I see a woman, I have to have a relationship. Isn't it easy for the world of immortality to solve physiological needs? Why do cultivators look down on mortals, because women are just low-level resources, and are they willing to exchange treasures and spiritual roots for them? Author, do you think it's worth it? Most of the immortal cultivators pursue immortality, because it is a higher pursuit. Any ordinary woman in any dynasty will be given away by powerful people. I don't believe that the girls of the Mohist family can compare to the women of the immortal cultivator. There are also immortal cultivators who sell themselves for resources. They are so poisonous that they can't be more poisonous.

The setting is so messed up. There is no charge to enter Tainan Valley in the original work in Chapter 22, because the casual cultivators are very poor and have no income at all. Unlike the Immortal Cultivation Family, which has the Lingshan Spirit Mine, the casual cultivators have no income. If there is a fee, there is no need to convene the Immortal Ascension Conference. The casual cultivators had no spirit stones at all and couldn't even get in. Who would go to a Fang Market that charges a fee? It seems that they don't even charge for living in a house and setting up stalls. I can't remember clearly. Han Li seemed to live with Wu Jiuzhi and the others. How can there be any level setting for the formation? For example, the upside-down five-shaped formation modified by Xin Ruying has the three-point and five-point strength of the original version. How do you set the level? If you add more precious materials to the same formation, it may be more powerful. Then how do you calculate the level? Arrays are all created by people. How can there be so many level settings? They only have power.

Han Li seems to be ruthless but he has a bottom line and morality.

Another person who deliberately set the number of water characters randomly.

When did the Chen family become so proud? It can even affect the Bloody Forbidden Land, allowing Huang Maple Valley disciples and other sect disciples to attack and kill the protagonist... If it was really so powerful, in the original work, Chen Qiaoqian (who lost the Foundation Establishment Pill) and her brother (who took the Foundation Establishment Pill but failed to break through) would not have been arranged to fight in the Bloody Forbidden Land. Not to mention, Chen Qiaoqian is not worthy of what the Chen family does. After all, the evil way invades later, and Chen Qiaoqian is immediately arranged (marriage) to be someone else's bride... Are you sure you take it so seriously? Hurry up and get through the story of the Chen family. I don't know what other readers think, but I know that I am a little disgusted. It's okay to go dark, but it's not good if it's too much. Chen Qiaoqian and Senior Brother Lu have an arranged marriage. What is the emotional basis? Secondly, after being in contact with him for a period of time, I should understand to some extent the nature of Senior Brother Lu. Is he sure that he really loves him deeply? If you are completely in love, just pretend I didn't say it. (Be decisive and follow your heart) The world is not about fighting and killing, but about human nature. People who don't understand. The grass on the grave is not three feet high. It is on the way to be buried.

He's not as good as Han Lao Mo. At least his close relatives have died a good death. Why don't you just jump like this? The entire village was speechless as a result of the disaster.

He led the two girls from the Mo family to become immortals and persuaded them to leave and then left 🙂

It was okay at the beginning, but it turned out that the light spirit and treatment were the same as those of the alien spirit root. However, after entering the sect, there was nothing. Just read the original work and you knew that there was an alien spirit root. Not to mention the golden elixir, at least the treatment was much better, but the result was nothing, just like an ordinary disciple. In the mortal world, a alien spirit root is worse than the heavenly spirit root, better than the 20th root, and the dialogue of the characters in it is too modern.

The author has entered a writing cycle where he finds trouble when he has nothing to do. I have written this twice now. 1. Turn Chen Qiaoqian into a brainless "husband hater" 2. Knowing that the physiques of the two women are easy to be coveted, they still sent them out as training. I haven't written anything recently and I have no desire to read this book.

In order to bring up his sister and bring his whole family together to cultivate immortality, the protagonist is researching how to allow mortals to have spiritual roots. It is estimated that he will provide unlimited resources in the future. Why are you still cultivating if you are so good? You can ascend directly. In a small period of Qi training, in an underworld cultivation environment like a mortal, you have to be so swollen to be so good. Even Han Laomo couldn't do it in the early stage. All the poison points in Xiu Xian Wen were exposed by the protagonist. Please thank me for testing the poison. I was so disgusted that I couldn't understand.

If their parents don't have spiritual roots, they can't practice cultivation. If the Mo sisters don't have spiritual roots, they can help them grow spiritual roots and wipe their butts.

This book was poisoned by two sisters from the Mo family in the early stage

They sent the Sky Palm Bottle back to Old Mo Han in front of you, but the secret of the Sky Palm Bottle was known to three people. Han Li was so stupid, and all Han Li's early opportunities were intercepted by you. Can you still have a future? Since you have a golden finger and don't want to be a villain, just take advantage of the opportunity and don't be a villain at the same time.

I read twenty chapters, but I didn't see any signs of the protagonist being calm, calm, or thinking.

I'll spend money just to see you being hunted all the time.

This protagonist is a bit mentally retarded. He dares to practice blindly on his own even if he can't use it. He can't train himself to death because of a "pen". How do you think he dares to go to Lao Mo for medical treatment? Didn't you read the plot after you wrote it? !

Did you know that you can know what kind of person the author is by reading novels, because the author usually puts himself into the protagonist's senses when writing.

The protagonist has the potential to be a dog licker and really knows how to give away good things.

When writing about mortals, I think you should always show off in front of Han Li and follow him, so that you can feel comfortable. Those who rob Han Li for his opportunity and Han Li's wife cannot read what the author thinks. What you write is a novel, and by chance, don't you just write about women casually? I have to grab Han Li's.

The evaluation is a piece of cake, let's criticize again. Bah, the white-eyed wolf protagonist plus the demon heroine.

Bringing two mortal women to fight three immortal cultivators of similar realms. As a result, none of the mortals died, and all the other parties were destroyed. What the hell is this writing? Others don't care that you only fight mortals. You're just kidding.

What the hell are you writing? You don't want to have inner demons, but you just lead mortals into the world of immortality. Don't you create your own inner demons?

The smell of farmyard manure is too strong, I can't stand it

With his shabby shop, he made tens of thousands of spiritual stones in Fangshi. The protagonist as the boss is just a twelfth-level Qi practitioner with no background The key point is that he is not even a foundation builder. Does he really think that Zongmenfang City is a safe zone in the game? How many times did Li Zi get robbed and killed when he came out of Fangshi? This is still bearable. The key point is that the protagonist entered a sect and didn't have it for three days. Thousands of spiritual stones were spent by the mortal who was enlightened by the protagonist and was currently on the 5th level of the weapon refiner. The real waste was spent randomly. She bought a bunch of useless things, and then the protagonist pretended to be rich and talked about earthy love words there Are those two top-quality spiritual stones?

I've read a lot of poisonous articles, but this is the first time I've been disgusted to this extent. I died from the poison.

I persisted until Chapter 22, and when I saw that I was taking two mortals to cultivate immortality, I really couldn't hold on anymore.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

I've read more than seventy chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. I don't know why.