I Have the Door to Eternal Life

In other words, scolding from beginning to end. But I really can't stand it anymore. The beginning is interesting, but the rest is really boring. And the author didn't even understand the original work, so I couldn't read it anymore.

First one

The concept of the Gate of Eternal Life exists even though countless mortal Taoist ancestors cannot touch it. Cultivate the Five Elements Technique and turn the human world upside down to see if you can cultivate the Five Emperors Canopy🤣

The method of immortality is notoriously resource-consuming, and the mortal world is notoriously barren. Even if you drain the five elements of the mortal world, you may not be able to build the Five Emperors Canopy, let alone the Great Origin Technique, the Great Pool of Blood Technique, the Great Reincarnation Technique, and the Great Wish Technique.

This starts to crush the protagonist again. With the protagonist's current strength, why should he be so polite to those four gods? A fucking senior, senior, shouted. Even if you want the plot to be watery, it can't be this watery. Ah, I cut off You Tian Kunpeng's claws. On the other hand, his wife is being missed by others. If you really want to have a Minotaur plot, just say, I will avoid lightning in advance.

"And Henry Zhang now has 1.5 Million mana. In terms of mana alone, he is not weaker than the monks in the Immortality Secret Realm." 🤣Who in the Immortality Secret Realm has such fw stuff? It's not even a fraction of the lower limit of 100 million pieces.

How unimaginable is it that the protagonist's original earth, wood, and fire spirit roots before traveling through time would be able to practice fire-attribute skills in an environment like the Chaos Star Sea, where water-attribute monsters are densely populated, water-attribute resources are abundant, and there are many water-attribute monks? ? ? It doesn't matter if the Five Elements are in conflict, right? What is the difference between this and practicing water attribute skills in a desert area? 😠 Normal people should save some money and quickly change their skills. Whether it is earth controlling water or water producing wood, the earth and wood attributes are much stronger than the fire attribute in the Chaos Star Sea.

I can punch a hundred black and yellow horses and hit Yuanying, right?

Han Li has been on the fourth level of Mingwangjue in the Divine Transformation Stage. He has also eaten Dragon Scale Fruit for decades. He can easily lift a 10,000-kilogram boulder with one hand without any magic power. Now the protagonist has just established the foundation of immortal magic power, which means he has more than 500,000 kilograms of strength. What else is there?

In fact, the human world and the spiritual world do not need the Three Thousand Avenues at all. The eight magical powers of the Yuhua Sect are still very valuable. If they can't beat a few more ancient magical powers, the Sumeru Mountain Fist, Zuma's Ancient Divine Energy and Haotian Fire can be invincible.

The protagonist's golden finger is too big. With just one Great Five Elements Technique, you can directly practice it to the level of Tao Ancestor and become the Five Elements Tao Ancestor. The so-called Taoist ancestors in the immortal world are just golden immortals

What do you want from Three Thousand Avenues? Ordinary small and large magical powers are enough to be used in the spiritual world. The last level of the Immortal Secret Realm of Immortality, the True Immortal Realm, can probably kill Taoist ancestors.

As mentioned earlier, the true spirit Kunpeng can be killed when he comes to the lower world, and when faced with the four transformed gods, he becomes a grandson. What cuckold turtle protagonist, you have already practiced the method of immortality. Can't you fight across the stairs? What kind of stupid thing are you learning? Do you really want to become a cuckold turtle when you reach the spiritual world?

You have already killed the Mahayana and you still want to be the Qingming Guard. The human race is just the bottom of the Mahayana. Your ability to kill the Mahayana is completely based on getting what you want. Even Feng Yuan Continent is the poorest among the three continents in the spiritual world. There is no need to stay in the remote areas of Feng Yuan Continent.

It's so rubbish. The male protagonist in this book is simply a eunuch. He became a Nascent Soul monk at 90 o'clock, but he is still a virgin. He has three concubines but he doesn't want to stay in love.

Doesn't the Great Blood Soul Technique use flesh and blood to increase physical fitness, mana, and lifespan? Other people's heavenly kings are there to open up the world. Are you a person who builds foundations and has a level of supernatural power, practicing weapons with something that increases your mana, physique, and lifespan? I'm almost starving to death, so I give all my living expenses to the little fairy anchor, and dig wild vegetables and eat instant noodles every day?

If the resources of the mortal world are small villages, then the eternal world is the future world. If you eat all the people in the mortal world to see if you can develop a great skill, it will be useless if you have no resources.

The writing is a bit poor, it's too straightforward, and the hook doesn't work. It's better to give a mutated World Tree sapling and directly steal the vitality of the eternal world 🤫. The most precious thing in the eternal world is actually not some bullshit magical power, but resources. It's so rich. I don't know how many pure Yang dragons there are in Wuji Starry Sky. One of them seems to be a trillion pure Yang pills. One pure Yang pill is equivalent to the starting point of a high-grade spiritual stone.

It doesn't look good, I'm afraid of this or that. This protagonist has the Gate of Eternal Life in the background but he doesn't dare to accept the purple spirit, he is just like a cuckold.

The writing is so bad, the latest chapter is written like a fool

Just by reading the introduction, you can tell that the level of primary school students is

The protagonist is boring to write. You can either write about the low-key and obscene development of a mortal, or you can write about an immortal who kneels down and becomes a dog for me to make readers happy. The writing is neither fish nor fowl, that is, it does not have the low-keyness of a mortal, and it does not have the domineeringness of an immortal. It is tasteless.

To be honest, Immortal King, the entire mortal immortal world can't provide it, right? Let's talk about a corresponding system that will be criticized by immortals. Transformation of gods versus immortality, refining the void to combine with Mahayana, transcending tribulations and barely comparing to virtual immortals, mortal immortals at most versus real immortals Heavenly immortals, regardless of expressiveness, at most the highest order is compared with golden immortals, immortal Taiyi, Xuanxian Daluo, golden immortals and heavenly ways Or perhaps heavenly immortals versus heavenly immortals, golden immortals versus Daluo, ancestor immortals versus Taoist ancestors, holy immortals versus heavenly ways, what do supreme immortals compare to? Of course, this does not depend on expressiveness, there is no comparison Finally, after becoming a mortal, do you want to be original? There is spiritual consciousness at the fourth level of Qi refining. This is for sure. People can escape from the body and not die. In other words, the remnant soul uses special secrets to inhabit the human body

The first card at the beginning has parallel imports, and all the subsequent ones have parallel imports. It's too bad, it's too bad.

I can't write two world fics with different worldviews. I can't write one fic, but I want to write two fics. Find a job in an electronics factory.

Finished? Everyone says it sucks, so I have to take a look.

The level of the Gate of Eternal Life is too high

The immortality attack is not suitable for the mortal system. The magnitude is too high. If you have the power of a hundred horses, you can defeat the entire human world. Even in the spiritual world, only Han Li, the Immortal Killer, can do a few tricks. The power of a horse is not only a powerful mana, but also the peak of the physical body. Moreover, this horse is a black and yellow horse. The author simply wrote it out of Baidu. The mortal system has the power of a hundred horses, which is unimaginable, let alone the power of a dragon behind the immortality. The magical power of immortality is not suitable for the mortal system. If you just practice the Three Thousand Dao, you can refine the way of heaven. It says that you can kick Han Li's head like a beggar. It seems out of place. If you don't grab Han Li's Sky Palm Bottle, you are not qualified to be called an immortal person. If you really take the Sky Palm Bottle, Han Li will not be able to travel through eternity to mess with you. Mortals only have the Sky Palm Bottle and the bottle spirit that can travel through time and space. You can't even cultivate the law of time, and you haven't even understood the Immortal Realm Chapter. Even if you let Han Li do it, the Gate of Eternal Life can send him to the West with three punches. This is the same as the marks of the gods. The eternal things are pure and invincible for mortals. They can't compare with supernatural powers, elixirs, magic weapons, martial arts, talismans, and spiritual consciousness. The magnitude is even worse.

Does the mortal world have that resource?

The comparison between mortal realm strength and immortality is ridiculous! Fang Han's strength is already at the top of all immortality novels, and Old Demon Han can handle it with at most one Immortal King!