Magic!

I feel that some of the things you wrote are not very good, and I am a good person. Send your manuscript over and I will help you revise it for free - an enthusiastic reader who wishes to remain anonymous.

After reading for a long time, I found out that the author is actually the group leader of dnd group

Bengbu is stunned. The protagonist is really good at complaining. As an author, I feel like I am being tortured non-stop. The protagonist always starts directly talking about the plot I have written before, and then starts to complain about the same clichés and other crazy comments. Behind the screen, I am almost speechless! Gua, don't dig!

This is what foreigners say: The most important thing to read about women and love is Japanese novels; The most important thing to read about money and status is Korean comics; The most important thing to read about killing your whole family is Chinese online novels. So when can we kill all the idiots in the school?!

I can only say that the author deserves to be an experienced author, and it can be seen from the writing that his level is different. The writing is smooth and the rhythm is comfortable. The most important thing is that every chapter has a plot, and every chapter has a hit point and hook, which makes people want to stop and read to the end without realizing it. The setting of the protagonist is very interesting, and the duality of genius and madman is accurately grasped. He knows a lot of weird theories, spanning various fields from logic to economics. He can handle countless bizarre encounters at the same time, and even created a ritual to summon demons that only he can realize. But I have to say that his brain circuit is really novel. Who would have thought of using ketchup as a ritual material? Who would have thought that while dealing with the trolley problem, the trolley would be destroyed? It can only be said that you never know what the author will write next. (By the way, the protagonist is also very cute hahaha. After seeing Ms. Black Amber, she asked if she could touch her, which is a real cat control.) Now that we have talked about the protagonist, I have to talk about a very naughty treatment by the author. The protagonist has realized that he is a character in a novel since he was a child, because life is always full of drama, which breaks the dimensional wall and creates a 2.5-Dimensional feeling, making the protagonist and readers feel at home. At the same time, the protagonist's handling of the incident is also very interesting. There is no entanglement. He directly takes the initiative to play the drama, understands the routines, and uses the routines. It is extremely comfortable to watch. The overall worldview structure I would like to call it the magical world with Chinese characteristics. The appearance of Ms. Black Amber and the strange ritual process give people a sense of magic from "Harry Potter", but the setting of the school and the book "Happy Learning Magic" also have a sense of reality. The integration between the two is very good, and it is not inconsistent at all. Overall, after reading it, I feel that the writing is relaxed and nonsensical. It is not tiring to read, and it is very attractive to follow. I am here to give you a thumbs up. This book is definitely a masterpiece~

Hey, Lord, can you break the million-word mark this time?

Is modern magic like this? I also have to write a thesis and learn matrix calculus.

Do you know magic? I'm taking it for granted here and talking nonsense.

It is recommended that you add "laughing point analysis:" at the beginning of the introduction, which just matches the "unable to help laughing" at the end, so that I can reply in the comment area with "unable to laugh"

It's really fun to write, and it doesn't have the common problem of long and stinky online books. It's just the right length for a funny book.