At the Beginning, I Traveled Through the Wilderness, and I Controlled the Beasts to Survive.

The author's writing is good, please update soon!

Two or three chapters a day for a thousand years, now one chapter every two days?

Overall, it's pretty good, but author, can your combat descriptions be less intelligent? Battle descriptions like that of Pokémon lower the combat IQ of the entire book An attack action often happens instantly. You see, you are still shouting to command the battle, and your pet attacks with half of its power and waits for your command? Or what's the point of attacking after you shout? There is obviously a better way to command, but mental command is not used. The other thing is to let the pet understand the fighting method on its own. The protagonist only needs to provide general directions! Is it interesting to insert a poisonous point from time to time?

I like this book very much. There are no intrigues or shady people behind the scenes. I hope that in the subsequent plots, attributes will not be added to the characters. All attributes can only be fed back to the owner by pets. After adding attributes to the protagonist, the protagonist will be stronger than the pet. I really can't stand that kind of mindless writing. Focus on writing about pets. Don't develop the plot too fast. Come on😊

If you follow the words "Survive and Create a Civilization" at the beginning, this book will be a hit. But it's a pity that it became cliched later and became an upgrade to killing monsters. Obviously, the results are not good, and there are not even many discussions. What a pity!

It's a bit like The Farm of Gods and Demons. I've been looking for this type of book for a long time! This book looks good

Do you want to contract a firefly? I think that when the protagonist needs to be active at night, he may need a mobile light-emitting device with remote output, and fireflies are the best choice.

How should I put it? I can no longer feel the warm and beautiful atmosphere of a group of human beings united to survive in the apocalypse described by the author. It just feels like the characters written by the author are becoming less and less human. Compared to humans, they are more like a group of cluster-conscious beings wearing human skins, unified, firm, and united. The more you write about their unity now, the more I feel like they are a group of monsters in human skin, and instead I feel a little scary and uncomfortable for no reason. Looking more human than human, is this the uncanny valley effect? 😥

This is the first time I see a post-apocalyptic article that expresses emotions. . . That's not to say it's bad, but you also have to consider the environment and people's hearts. A strange environment where people die at any time, a doomsday world, an extraordinary world, this is where the strong will always be strong. If you want to play as a team, you can, the team also has the role of a team, but what do you mean by making everyone average? Everyone became stronger together. I really laughed. Resources are constant. Brother, have you considered resources and time? This novel is like a dream, except for the feelings, everything else is full of utopia. To give you the simplest example, you worked hard to build a dryad camp and obtained more than a dozen crystals. These crystals are necessary materials for evolution. In the end, you chose to give the crystals to a person who petted a beast to death. What kind of distribution plan is this? 14 Crystals can cultivate at least three people who have evolved to awakening. As a result, the resources necessary for evolution must be allocated to the members who are starting over. What do you think? If you want to say that he has credit, tell me, who doesn't? Is it just because their pet beast died? Are they the ones who deserve the most credit? So I say this is all about selling feelings and sympathy. You can't waste such important resources just because of sympathy. You can give them more other resources to make the restarted beasts grow faster. What is the operation of giving crystals? I was confused. There is definitely no problem in writing positive energy, but you must also consider the reality. You are exactly like the big group at the beginning. The experience we gained through bloody lessons is completely absent from you. From childhood to adulthood, I feel that the author's history class must have been taught by a physical education teacher 😅 If you don't understand, go back and look through the textbook. Why did we become like this from the big group at the beginning? Why did Chief Engineer Deng change the development strategy at that time? It is good to have ideals and plans, but you have to consider other comprehensive factors. You cannot take it for granted. Practice is the only criterion for testing truth. We have spent decades testing it, and only a few years later have we forgotten it?

I feel like I'm off topic. The title is Survival and Development of Civilization. What are you writing about? It has become an upgrade for killing monsters.

I don't quite believe that all teachers have that kind of sacrificial spirit

Since the golden finger can add points to wild soul beasts, this book has collapsed and can be deleted.

The first part was okay, I thought it was the combination of individual strength and civilizational development, but when I wrote about the ant mushroom, I started to jump. It jumped too fast. In just a few dozen chapters, I developed from a stronger human being to destroying the planet. It's like the Qi refining period in a novel about cultivating immortals. In just a few dozen chapters, it evolved to a person who is about to overcome a tribulation and ascend.

Author, you need to increase the difficulty. It is best to reflect the struggle of human beings. What's the point of being too smooth? Especially if the protagonist evolves and upgrades step by step, it is easy to fall into the plot of repeated upgrades and monster killing. And human beings are a group. Don't just talk about the protagonist scanning the map alone. There are too many starting points. Write more about the team. The real power is when the group drama is well written...

It will be fun if you don't have any brains, but if you have brains, don't watch it

Alas, I feel like I can't stand it anymore after chapter 200. In the later period, your golden finger still comes with upgrades, and that's all. You also changed it to almighty. Starting from the chapter where the protagonist is beheaded underground, it feels a bit rushed.

Read the free chapter, save someone at night, find the thigh and insist on looking for the body, is it because you think you have lived long? It's boring to rely on the halo of the protagonist to push the plot forward

In fact, no matter what country they are from, when their lives are at stake, people from unfamiliar worlds will inevitably gather together, and those who engage in conspiracy and internal strife will have long since died.

The author is not a studio, nor ai

The male protagonist is completely written to have no sense of existence. There is no difference at all from those passers-by. For example, one of the 20 people is a male protagonist. Their work is no different from that of the male protagonist. Why do they do what the male protagonist does? They do whatever the male protagonist does. The male protagonist is completely written to have no sense of existence. It has no characteristics at all. It was special to write about the male protagonist. For example, among the 20 people, the profession of the male protagonist is selling things. But the male protagonist has some special abilities. You can often find out where better things can be sold and where the harvest will be greater. What you write should be distinguished from others. This way people will know that you are the protagonist. Let others know you are special. And what the author wrote can be said to be a passerby male protagonist.

The writing is useless, the first part is very exciting, but after about 150 chapters, it starts to be lax, and I take it for granted. No matter how many levels you climb, you can always win without thinking after a hard fight, and the win makes no sense. . . If you write it this way, there is no need to write so many steps of cultivation.

Was this book later sold by the author, or was it hired as a ghostwriter? The gap between before and after it was put on the shelves was too big.

Many apocalyptic survival novels with single characters and no female protagonists are quite speechless. I just want to know what is the use of only one person remaining even if the survival is successful? Humanity is also considered extinct.

The author's name is similar to yours, is it you? Or plagiarism?

Why are they all female? Is this author so masculine?

Will there be a female protagonist?

It can be said that there is no ending at all. Not to mention showing the fantasy and magnificence of the Amethyst world, at least it has a beginning and an end. To be honest, it would be better to just follow the New Year and almost end it, leaving all the holes unfilled. The combat power collapsed later on, but you managed to get through the plot and finish the trick. It feels like you can just walk all over the place immediately after entering the big map. The story is quite good, there are not many vulgar plots, the racial settings are okay, the plot can continue to advance, and you can participate in major events in the mainland. But I didn't expect that as an author without the most basic morals, the last dozens of chapters were used to experiment with new plots (that's what I thought, and a plot about controlling beasts suddenly appeared). At the end, there is no ending to TM, and it is not even perfunctory. No matter how many new accounts you change, it will still be the same 😆😆😆

The good thing is that I like the subject matter very much. I especially like beast-control novels. The author is also very smart in handling the early issues. He doesn't write messy things and just goes over them in one stroke. It feels refreshing after reading it The bad thing is the time when you arrive in another world at the beginning. It's too short. It's unreasonable to make everything so orderly in such a short time. Secondly, some parts are too childish. I don't know whether the author wrote it like this on purpose or if the writing is not strong enough. Some plots are very childish and very deliberate Let's go to the cafeteria to find the protagonist. As for the food part, when picking up the corpse at the end, I have to say that the protagonist gave the remaining corpse to other students. The problem is that even if the protagonist refuses, the protagonist cannot collect all the corpses. In addition to the protagonist, there are more than a dozen people. In this case, the protagonist collected one-third is enough The protagonist in this plot feels condescending and hypocritical Look at the subsequent plot, but in this plot, the protagonist reminds me of Tang San

Speechless😑, a hammer here and a stick here and there, where have all these gone?

Hello, boss. I am taking advantage of the treasure to push my own book. I am a newbie and a new book. With Hex, I have become a beast-controlling rancher. I suggest that this post can be deleted. I wish the boss a long life and a prosperous fortune.