I Am Really Not the Villain BOSS of the Game!

After reading about a hundred chapters, I can already see some of the advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the writing is pretty good, although there are still bugs in some small places. As for the shortcomings, the portrayal of the protagonist is a bit over-corrected, the portrayal of the supporting characters is a bit facial and thin, the portrayal of the players is also a little too little, and there is no grasp of the proportion (maybe because I haven't seen the part that belongs to the players), and does the relationship between the male and female protagonists progress too fast? The description of combat is also a bit weak, but even a newcomer can understand it. By the way, the character of the protagonist feels somewhat similar to the protagonist of a novel I have read before, which is the protagonist of Fate 0's Almighty Alchemist, Igreel. There is also madness hidden under the gentleness, pursuit of passion, cruelty but elegance, with a strong confidence in grasping the overall situation, even in the face of strong enemies. I feel like the author could learn from it. Your portrayal in this aspect is a bit unnatural. I hope you can understand the above humble opinion. I really like this type of protagonist, and I hope the author can write better and better. (ps: Don't forget each other if you are rich or noble. After making progress, don't forget to slightly optimize the previous chapters. The shortcomings in the front are still not small.)

Recently, a nightmare creature claimed to have discovered an unknown existence in the Red Rose Empire. This existence caused many creatures to disappear, causing great panic in the nightmare world. Below we will transfer the live broadcast An unknown nightmare creature: I tell you, you must not laugh. (Background sound: You said, we are nightmare lords. We have received professional training and generally do not laugh.) At that time, I was very scared. He was so big and swallowed my companion in one bite. I was so scared that I ran away. This station will continue to report, for more news, please pay attention to Nightmare World News

The quality is good, but it's a pity that it's not popular. There are many novels that have good beginnings. I hope I can stick with it.

I just like this kind of crazy yet well-behaved, hehehe

The protagonist's expression is very rich, either ferocious, or he smiles pervertedly from time to time. When playing a low-level copy, he always changes his face to an ignorant and naive middle-aged boy, which is scary. Can his eyes really be cold and scary? The protagonist's eyes alone are more intimidating than his skills. It's not necessary to show off a perverted expression and a chubby speech even though you're fighting a monster. There are many scenes where the eyes are frightening and then seamlessly change to gentle and cheerful. It's so embarrassing. You are the reincarnation of a gamer, not a master of expression management. Many of the expressions and eyes are incomprehensible, making the protagonist look like a perverted psycho. Why are you, a gamer, pretending to be perverted? You can just fight monsters and pass the level easily.

I'm not very good at drawing, just spray qwq Feel the shortcomings and then think about it (I really can't draw (´;;`))

The book is pretty good, but I have a question. Is the main character your mother gay? Why are gays so angry?

"We finally won." The surviving people dropped their weapons and stood blankly. The old god was dead, but the huge shadow that was dissipating still made everyone feel depressed. It took a long time before faint cries could be heard. The battle between the two major factions has left the world full of holes, and people's hearts are no exception. The losers disappeared between heaven and earth, but the victors also fell into sorrow. The great prophet ascended the altar, but his beautiful big blue eyes were looking sadly at the increasingly transparent girl in his arms. God is only omnipotent, not omnipotent, even if he has recovered all his memory and power and has become the only true god of nightmares, possessing supreme authority. But he couldn't save his lover. He could only watch the flames on his body extinguish little by little, and his soul became more transparent. "Angus", a soft kiss with red lips, the girl left her last mark on the boy's face, "I love you" with the most innocent smile on her face, and gradually disappeared into the boy's arms. The jealous soul will never be jealous again, not because the fire burns out, but because she already has the best.

Today's news 1: Shocked! A man as infatuated as Father Louis would have such thoughts about a little boy! 2: Mr. Samuel, a well-known painter in the nightmare world and the number one suitor of the Lord of Lust, died tragically in the church. The jealous lady determined that it was suicide! 3: The unspeakable pale devil appears in nightmare? ! The following is a detailed report for you

[Chapter 1: I am the evil god's lackey? ! ] I am the three lights, the three lights of the sun, moon and stars. The story goes like this: When the wave of "Nightmare Invasion" swept across the world, as a Sanren, I never thought that this probability would hit me on the head across regions and people. But it really happened, and it was worthy of my many years of merit and merit, my simplicity and kindness (akimbo (￣▽￣)/) Similar to the plot of Japanese light novels that have been rehearsed countless times in my mind, a blue elf walked out of a particularly conspicuous mansion in front of the birthplace, which immediately caught the attention of players who were verifying the authenticity of the game. (But it is 100% real, don't ask me how I know) But at this moment I found that the little flowers planted at the door opened their mouths to reveal their big toothy smiles! But being kind and simple, I can only say... It's so cool! I immediately became very interested in this camp that favored evil gods. After all, this was obviously a rare one. Hidden camp. However, a nearby player [Single Dog] believed that the so-called "hidden" was actually "shared". In this regard, I think he is too Christian, but it seems understandable that he comes from a large guild and would be more cautious, but I always think it is unnecessary. Then I decisively joined the evil god's camp, and a long sword of rare quality appeared out of thin air. (Who knows about the hidden camp and rare weapons at the beginning🐶) When I got the new toy, I sharpened my knife, was eager to try it, danced with joy, and was so happy. I was worried that I could not control my excitement, but the newly joined camp turned out to be unexpectedly just and assigned the task of clearing out the aliens. I am kind, honest, well-groomed, and upright, how could I... Not do such a thing! Nearby, [Single Dog] was naturally used as a sacrifice to complete the mission. Our results were praised, and those who completed the task received a simple fish-shaped meditation pattern. Although we didn't realize it, it sounded great. As if aware of our suspicion, the camp guide read out the newbie guide. Magic, elemental energy, nightmares, evil gods, good gods... All kinds of concepts flooded into my cerebral cortex, and new connections were established between sensory neurons. (Growing Brains. Png) In short, if we draw the hidden camp at the beginning and become the followers of the evil god, we all have a bright future, a white hole, a white tomorrow is waiting for us!

A good setting and development of the world view is very attractive to me, but there are some small shortcomings that I still want to mention: First of all, the characters are too flat and lack shaping, and in most cases they are told in the same set of words, and the logic of some characters' behaviors is too confusing. The author wants to create a cute character. The male protagonist has a sinister character, but he turned into a humanoid cy when written. Basically, all kinds of characters are talking to the protagonist because "he is so handsome/cute", blushing from time to time, and then becoming the protagonist's die-hard fan (), and then the portrayal of the protagonist's sinister character is always the same, which can basically be summarized as "cold eyes". The portrayal of the heroine is almost blank, with only a few labels and a few looks (really all looks). Secondly, the behavioral logic design of other supporting characters is also poorly considered, giving people a relatively serious sense of fragmentation. For example, college professors, classmates, and players, etc. For example, since the "Single Wolf" has the ability to get into the core of such a large gaming union, he is an old ass after all. There is no reason to break the defense like this because of a game camp that just ruined the closed beta game experience (from the player's perspective, this is just a game, no matter how the forum is about it, no one will really gamble with his or her job just because he hates a mission or camp). Even if he is really so rebellious, at this early stage of public beta, other members would not allow him to act so randomly (if he refuses to accept the decision and messes with the team's assets, he will unplug you in a minute). Finally, the battle process of the next game is also quite weird. It is basically similar to "you open up, I cheat". The protagonist relies on the memory of his previous life to find the next game, and then goes through a similar process to finish the job. The depth is shallow and not very balanced (using super model skills and being beaten) Killing bosses at more than 20 levels in Dongqiang is still too abstract, and the look and feel is relatively poor, without the feeling of a battle of wits and courage) In general, despite its many shortcomings, it is quite good for a new author, and the future is promising, keep it up😘

Damn, it's really good. It's a small size, definitely.

You can have a harem or a philandering male protagonist, but don't write a female protagonist. This is the starting point. If you write well, no one will praise you. If you write poorly or if your writing is mediocre, people will definitely criticize you.

It's all booked, but as I read it, I felt that the male protagonist was a little too feminine. I always felt embarrassed when I saw the male character flirting with him or how he was attracted.

This novel always gave me a sense of immediacy of female romance. I laughed softly, squinted my eyes happily, and added "what" at the end of the dialogue. How can I put it, it's not impossible, but it would be better if it was less.

Uh-huh, with this introduction, I feel like you might as well write a female protagonist.

The author gave me the writing style, painting style, and feeling. Have you ever watched Player Super Justice? I read the second version many years ago, and it still feels very good, and I have a lot of feelings about it. I can see some of his shadow in the author, and some elements are similar. If not, then I read it wrong. It is subjective. If there is anything wrong with what I said, then I will say sorry here first.

I always feel that something is missing. It turns out that the new book does not have idioms for free. I come first, monsters and monsters

This is good😃

Please read it! It is very important to follow up on the new book issues, so please read them first! Getting better recommendations will also give me, a new author, greater motivation to edit more quickly! Thanks~

I obviously finished the project, but my investment failed 😅

Super super like it! It's really delicious. This kind of dark-hearted, perverted and cute little boy's characterization is really deliciousＯ(≧口≦)Ｏ

To be honest, you kill yourself, and the well-written ones suddenly stopped. I almost ordered them all and bought this set for me. Now just make your own people disappear. If there is a popular book, you should write the popular one. If you want to rely on creativity to get a subscription at the beginning and then write a new book at the end, to be honest, most coders do not have this ability.

From Chapter 243, we know that "there are 12 dragons in this continent" will be reborn if and only when they die. From Chapter 4, we know that goblins are legendary creatures that are rarer than dragons, but blue goblins cannot bear this title at all (from Chapter 48, it is inferred that blue goblins belong to the goblin race). From Chapter 53, we learn that the goblin race is a mixture of half humans and nightmare creatures. Can such a race be called a "legendary creature that is rarer than dragons" Maybe goblins and goblin races are not the same concept? Back to the question of dragons, the original words are: "This has to start with the race of dragons. There are a total of 12 dragons on this continent, and their number will never change. When one dies, the next one will be born." But in Chapter 140, Uno actually took out a sand dragon. The dragon cub is exchanged with Xiao An. The original words are "This cub is a living dragon. You can even get a dragon." In Chapter 316, King Stundino also stated that there used to be many dragons and they could reproduce normally, but they were killed by other races to the brink of extinction. Now only the Four Seasons Dragon King can be found. To sum up, I think it is possible [the dragon race is a normal western fantasy dragon race, but the 12 dragons are special existences similar to the seven-element dragons of the original god]. But there are also many things that don't make sense. If this assumption is true, then the statements in the article are obviously inaccurate and misleading.

I can only invest so much for the time being😁😁

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Praise me!

Chapter 1: There seems to be something wrong with my game Golden light shone into the room through the glass and gauze. The black-haired boy sat on the chair, his slender fingers flexibly rotated the pen, and his jewel-like dark brown eyes stared at the screen. "Nightmare Invasion" is a cross-generation holographic game that is guaranteed to be released by the federal government and claims to use the latest virtual reality technology and 100% simulate reality. Such a game has attracted considerable public opinion before it has even been released. American five-star general MacArthur once commented, "Ahem, just kidding." There are many conspiracy theories saying that this is a large-scale human experiment conducted by the federal government, and there is precedent for this in history. You are right, but "Nightmare Invasion" is an open-world adventure game independently developed by the federal government... Just kidding × 2. He sneered at this, not because he believed in the government. Just kidding, how could he still not know what his own government was like? It's just that he doesn't believe that the government can come up with such a thing, especially after the internal and public betas, we still know what level we are at. If the government came up with this thing, he would eat the computer directly. In addition, there are endless rumors about aliens, other worlds, etc., But this still cannot stop the enthusiasm of players. Come on, this is 100% holographic. Of course, there must be some forces adding fuel to the flames. "Ding!" Came, the boy stopped writing and looked at the email. "Dear player, congratulations on being selected to participate in the "Nightmare Invasion" 2.0 Public beta game content. The game content will be sent out from the game warehouse within three days, please pay attention to check it." Hmm... It's exciting ... Lying down in the game cabin, he opened his eyes again, and in front of him was a person whose body was exactly the same as his in reality. One thing people have complained about about this game is that the game characters are completely based on reality and can only be slightly adjusted. It is said that it is for the sake of authenticity. It is true that the game is played under a real name. However, there has been no news about players going offline to kill solo after being unable to win in the game. "You have 30 minutes to make adjustments." Along with the prompt tone, a countdown appeared on the top. The boy curiously stepped forward and pinched the model's face... It was smooth, delicate and felt really good, as expected of me! After being a little narcissistic for a while, the boy thought about it and realized that there seemed to be nothing he could do to change it. I was not a beautician, so what if I failed to improve it? Let's just go to the next stage. A blue screen pops up in front of you saying "Do you want to enter the next stage (this operation cannot be undone)"? "Please enter your nickname:" The boy "Mu" entered the name he had thought of for a long time. "Welcome to "Nightmare Invasion", Mu" Then the scene changed, "Are you in the game?" The boy thought, and a smell of rust hit his face. What he saw was a scarlet cloud vortex, and a huge wooden boat next to it, with seaweed and undead clinging to it, as if it came from the underworld. Oh, it's in the PV (no emotion). Wait, I don't want to watch a half-hour PV here, right? (Horror) Half an hour later, "Wait, let me watch for a while!" However, the ruthless Timekeeper did not give him this chance, and a burst of white light enveloped his vision. "Zila" Mu vaguely heard a sound that sounded like an old-fashioned TV malfunctioning...

This half-Cthulhu and crazy feeling is a bit like my cellular prison.