Douluo: Awakening the Original Martial Spirit at the Beginning

Was disgusted. The utilization value is so high. Talented and brainy. He also helped Qian Renxue improve her strength. Indeed, Bibi Dong had to threaten him to find a way to improve his strength for this loser Yu Xiaoan. There are also life threats. It makes me sick. What you wrote in this chapter is really poisonous. That's it for Chihiro Ji now. Later, when Bibi Dong succeeds to the throne, won't he have to take the protagonist to be Yu Xiaogang's dog licker for Tang San?

Because the author wanted the protagonist to be Bibi Dong's dog, but he couldn't do it explicitly, so he designed the plot like this. This not only achieves the author's desire to be a dog, but also makes people feel that the protagonist is just forced to do so.

Since when has henpecking become a virtue? It looks disgusting. Respecting each other, isn't it a bad idea to be the one who belongs to whom? Henpecked? Like?

Why should we adopt the male supporting actor Li Fan, 😅, no wonder I rushed to the street. In Douluo, the entire male supporting cast is still raised as a brother. It's so funny. Why not let Deadpool raise him and brainwash him into a servant and slave? Why not adopt a younger sister? I vomited.

The protagonist, the soul master, can wield a 600-pound steel rod and even a chicken-feather sword. Even if you have a big sword, I won't say anything. Swords are about skills. Who else uses swords in the army? Why buy swordsmanship for the army? The protagonist now needs to exercise his physical fitness and meditate to improve his mental strength. How about free time to practice swordplay? If you use a big knife or a steel stick to play with force and weight, isn't it better than a sword? The protagonist practices weapons in order to get through the early stage without any offensive soul skills, but in the early stage there are several peers who can compete with the protagonist. If the protagonist cannot beat him with a knife or a stick, can he defeat him with a sword? It is best if you understand what is suitable.

Some good-looking fan novels are originally good, but the result is that they forcefully send some women from the original novels to the front, and forcefully force the relationship, which is a stupid plot.

When I read Chapter 50, I was so stupid that I couldn't breathe due to the author's actions. The protagonist, a cutie who is over level 30, where does he get the courage to face a level 90 first-line player alone? The protagonist's current identity is that he is a seed player under the Wuhun Palace Elders' House. If he wants to enter Yuanyang Guo, he only needs to come up with a reasonable explanation and evidence of the existence of Yuanyang Guo, and he can easily recruit the two Orange Ghosts. After all, it is impossible for Ju Douluo not to pay attention to the news about the fairy grass. Ju Douluo has already paid attention to it, and it is impossible for Ghost Douluo not to come. And after getting the jelly grass, the protagonist's share will not be such a big advantage. What is the protagonist's reason for going up alone?

To be honest, there are few characters in Dou Yi that I like more, such as the disgusting love brain Bibi Dong Hu Liena, the scumbag, Lu Xiaogang, the double-standard dog Tang San, etc. I still want to help Yu Xiaogang improve, so why not kill Yu Xiaogang as soon as possible?

Why do some people think it's cool to use a sword? Isn't it cool to fly with a sword? I don't think there is any difference between using a sword to cut someone and using it to cut someone. It's like fighting in the mud. After the fight, you are still covered in mud. Is there any difference between using a sword and a sword?

Hahaha, friends who have been practicing for a year and have an innate level 6 "weapon" martial spirit rely on the meditation method of mental supplementation with the original martial spirit at the beginning! If you can get 900 years in the first ring, what kind of poisonous immortal is alive!

The previous ones were okay, but I was convinced after reading Chapter 117. Dugu Yan is still with Yu Tianheng. Then what are you doing to win over Dugu Bo and help Dugu Yan detoxify? From now on, whether Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan will help you or the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect. What about charity? Accepted. What a fart. Goodbye👋🏻

Being the masked brother of a villain like Gou San is better than being a crazy bitch like Bibi Dong. After all, it doesn't matter if you follow Gou Sanbao and become a god. Bibi Dong is really crazy and wants to destroy the whole world.

It was okay at the beginning, but when you get the soul ring, you start to poison it. I want to know how you can absorb the thousand-year soul ring. There are basic methods for exercising. Even if Douluo is different from the earthlings, you must at least maintain energy conservation. You have neither eaten any genius treasures nor cheats. I just want to know how you can be the first to ring for a thousand years. It is completely illogical and you deserve to be thrown into the street. You are a thousand years old, but your little brother is 900 years old? This is a complete insult to IQ. After one year of physical exercise, two 7-year-old children can absorb a second ring that is higher than others. Dou Er Wang Dong is only a thousand-year-old second ring, and he even ate whale gum.

Author, are you excited about writing? How did the protagonist do this thing of stealing from the Snow Emperor? The Snow Emperor's strength is at its limit, and it will be even stronger in the far north. Why does your protagonist run away? Sword Douluo's fate when encountering the Snow Emperor is to be killed instantly. Moreover, I wanted to ask you before, how did your protagonist reach level 6 soul guidance without learning any soul guidance tools? Why did you retain the characteristics of the Dark Demon Evil Tiger?

Is your protagonist overestimating the power of black powder? And it's called mononitrate, disulfide, and charcoal. You've got the recipe all wrong. The description of the hand mine is really full of flaws. In addition, the explosive power of the black powder produced by the local method is very small because it is not pure enough and has too many impurities. Moreover, this is still powdered gunpowder. What you can get from this method is at best a large-sized gunpowder. Can you check the information before writing?

1. What kind of martial spirit are you? The whole process is to awaken the original martial soul. You should make it clear! 2. Tang San's so-called hidden weapon was even stronger than gunpowder? And why does your gunpowder also have sugar? 3. The protagonist has been reading books for several years after time travel. You might as well create your own meditation method at the beginning, and then give it to your younger brother. Your younger brother will directly reach level 10 in one year, and you find him a 900-year-old soul beast? And it was so successful! It's so cool! ! ! 🤔 4. Since you are so powerful, why don't you go to the real Tang Dynasty? , Went to lick Qian Renxue? Anyway, I just want to say that the protagonist may be a peerless genius with full understanding 😰. Otherwise, he can create his own meditation method after reading books for a few years? It may be that the author liked the character Qian Renxue better, so the protagonist went to Qian Renxue's place.

Douluo's average IQ is negative, and the protagonist's IQ is barely zero

Why does it have to be related to Wuhun Palace?

My thoughts after reading only the first three chapters: 1. The author probably wanted to write a warm family for the protagonist, but the writing style seemed extremely outrageous. How did you write the head of the family? If you want to write about a father who loves his children but has the majesty of the head of the family, you can refer to Xiao Zhan from Dou Po, instead of looking awkward. You are the head of the family, not a farm boy. When you write about your weak side, it's really God's fault that this family didn't perish. 2. Still want to rely on meditation to sense soul power in advance? Are you in Douluo's parallel world? Anyway, it doesn't make sense, it's parallel time and space. According to you, that big family is all innately full of soul power, at least each one is at level seven or above. 3. Is there still a thirty-year-old soul king? Too good. In the original work, Tyno, the son of the Contra Titan, is the Soul King, right? Definitely more than thirty. Qin Ming is known as the second youngest Soul Emperor in history. How old was he when he became the Soul King? I don't remember if it's in the original work, but you, a thirty-year-old soul king, must have at least six levels of innate soul power, right?

I saw a lot of Douluo fan profiles saying that if you don't lick Tang San, you won't join the group, so I wanted to ask if licking Bibi Dong and Wuhundian is considered dog licking.

The first soul ring was when I met Qian Renxue, and I happened to see my own character that had been absorbed for 800 years.

I can only say that it is not as good as the original work of Douluo Dalu. If you don't have the literary talent and writing skills, don't mess with the original work. Aren't you afraid of the resurrected AI person whipping you? Tsk tsk

Poisonous points to avoid in Douluo fanfiction: Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue's route, everyone knows it, Ancestral Love Brain, Don't go to Shrek, don't go to Shrek. If you can't write without the main line of the original text, then I suggest you don't write a fanfic, and I suggest you go begging. Douluo can either create his own power or occupy the magpie's nest. The evil soul master can either be famous or be infamous for thousands of years. Who still remembers it after thousands of years? Seeing Douluo Dalu with a head full of yellow waste makes me big-headed🙂

Tmd has a lot of poisonous points, and even plays with gay men, it makes me sick and vomits

How come a 23-year-old book suddenly became a high-quality book?

Why don't you miss your home at all? How could such a heartless person love someone else?

I once heard an author say that it is difficult to balance the excitement and the reasonable plot, and it is difficult to have both. It tends to be more exciting, but the plot is easily unreasonable. It tends to be rational in the plot, which can easily lead to blocking points. But this novel manages to have the shortcomings of both sides and abandon the advantages of both sides.

Joining Wuhun Palace is really a big mistake. Isn't it nice to just develop him if you have this ability? It's not like you have any cheats. It's really speechless for developmental players to join Wuhundian.

Why is it that the 370,000 popular comment section is full of curses? I haven't seen it yet. Can anyone tell me about the plot?

Although it is a bit toxic, the writing is generally good, but the cover is really unsightly. I recommend changing it to another one 🙂