Zerg Invasion, I Contracted the Titan Ape

The writing is okay, but this monkey is too irritable like the ones in Mount Emei. I don't know why. He is so angry that he wishes the protagonist would die. I hope he will behave better in the future and be cruel to others instead of being a bully in the nest.

A sense of déjà vu swallowing up the starry sky! Is it my imagination? Also, I would like to suggest to the author, do you feel that you are putting the cart before the horse? Judging from the name and introduction, it's a beast-controlling article! I didn't see it later, but I saw the training camp. The protagonist was written with outstanding combat power, but the monkey was marginalized. The pig's feet can sweep it by itself, so there is no need for the monkey, right? After all, the pig's feet have taken the whole show, and the monkey is dispensable, not even a supporting role, what do you think?

The monkey's temper persuades him to quit. Why the hell does the monkey protagonist have a good temper? The protagonist's pet turns out to be bad-tempered towards the protagonist, and then the protagonist's strength increases. The monkey also inexplicably increases its strength and becomes even more irritable towards the protagonist.

After reading it, let me tell you your thoughts. Isn't it a little bit like having at least one panel in one chapter? . . There is even a three-panel chapter, but the rest is okay. It is true that after the gangster was pushed to the ground and beaten, he still provoked the protagonist. Generally speaking, you can watch it. Come on, see you again 🤝

After reading Chapter 11, I was persuaded to quit. In the novel, the status of practitioners is so high, and the protagonist also broke the record. The top scorer in the college entrance examination will be valued by the local leaders, let alone the record of the practitioner. Isn't this gold content higher than the top scorer in the college entrance examination? As a result, no leader came to the door. Forget it, those young men clearly knew that the protagonist had a bright future by breaking the record, so how dare they take the initiative to provoke the protagonist? After seeing Chapter 11, I was completely overwhelmed. A small police chief dared to use his power for personal gain against the protagonist. Are you really not afraid that the protagonist will cause trouble for him when he becomes powerful? ! And why is the irritable little monkey so docile to the protagonist's mother? Is it the maternal love of the main character's mother that influenced the monkey or something else? At least write down a reason. It's completely unclear. The protagonist's combat power is twice as low as that of the monkey. He knows that the monkey is irritable and doesn't like the protagonist, but he still dares to anger the monkey. Why, you know that the monkey doesn't dare to kill you? Was this confidence system given to you? ! After reading novels for so many years, this is the first time I have seen so many flaws. I can't bear to look at it.

This monkey is disobedient. If you ask him to do anything, he will be killed by you if he betrays you. Never seen anything like this

Meng Xin

This villain is so disgusting. He's so drunk that he didn't write it to death. Why are you still keeping it, waiting for him to take revenge on your family 🤔

The ultimate intelligence reduction, the protagonist breaks the record, the martial arts school attaches great importance to the protagonist, and then some garbage comes to surround and threaten the protagonist. No matter what the protagonist does, others think it is luck and think that the protagonist is a weakling, so there is nothing to be afraid of. They can fall in love with the protagonist's women and threaten the protagonist at will. It may not be expressed accurately, but that's probably what it means.

Fang Yuan

The combat power system is so messed up that one warrior can kill an Insect King. Even if the Insect King was seriously injured, it would not be possible.

Is it mainly because pets treat their owners like this? ? Raised for what?

If you have time to reply, why not write more? The content is not bad and worth reading. It is updated quickly.

The ideas are very broad, and the outline is very complete. I beg you gentlemen not to keep books, but to read them until the new book period is over. It will make you proud 😭😭😭

There's a reason why I wasn't popular when I was a kid! What is the Zerg? In front of the Zerg, King Kong is trash. The Zerg you write about here are worse than King Kong! It is a perfect reflection of my three views over the past ten years!

The panel is a matter of benevolence and wisdom, and everyone has their own preferences. Newcomers and new books can be written in detail. Mainly because some readers think that it is useless to write in detail after it is put on the shelf. But for data geeks like us, the more detailed the panel, the more interesting it is to read So the author can also open a separate free chapter to list the data, so that everyone likes it In short, support!

I haven't written much yet. I'll come back to read it in a year and a half.

I'm tired of reading the training chapter, so I'll skip the raising book for now.

Gentlemen, I really have no choice. This book has to be cut. The unsatisfactory results must be the main reason. After four rounds, I only collected more than 3,000. Even if it is a low frequency, it is too unsightly. The second point is also very important. Many readers have pointed it out. Many plots are poisonous points, such as the monkey's violent temper. Although this is a foreshadowing of the monkey's life experience, it was also written in Chapter 70. But as a new writer, where are the readers who will wait for you? After writing it, I gave up the book after reading a few chapters. Then Chapters 9 and 10 were also poisonous and a little intellectually depressing, so in the end I insisted on reading it. Based on these points, plus the short text is really awkward to write, I need to improve my writing style, so I can only cut it. However, the new book is already being prepared. There is no problem with signing the contract. I will post it later. Thank you again for your support, 🙏!