Crouching Dragon Immortal Clan

Looking back from the beginning, I am no longer young and naive. Now the condensation of language and plot arrangement have the flavor of an old author who has written several books. However, many old authors often fall short in the portrayal of characters, and even great writers are not immune to this. The overall reading experience is that I still have high expectations for this book. How to say it specifically? It has just begun to show its power, and it will really turn into a dragon when it encounters the storm. Come on, Tiezi.

All book friends are welcome to comment. The author will try his best to reply. I also welcome everyone to criticize and point out some errors and omissions in the text. At the same time, the author sincerely asks all book friends who like to gain weight to help me read it. I am grateful and burst into tears😢😢

The writing is good, the emotions are well written, and some of the situations written are also very realistic. I have invested in it and have followed it. Come on✊

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The world structure is a bit small. One Zifu family controls a radius of 800 miles. Although the size of a county is not mentioned, there are actually three Nascent Soul forces, and each force has more than one Nascent Soul. How can it accommodate so many? Comparing the escape speed of foundation-building monks, the map is not that big either. Either the escape speed is slow, or the map could be smaller.

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The writing is quite good, but the protagonist falls for it as soon as he meets the heroine. The way it is written is so immature that it contrasts too much with the rest of the plot, and there is an uncomfortable disconnect. If the author is not good at writing emotional dramas, he could write less. The heroine is a tool and she won't be criticized harshly.

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It's really tiring to read the kind of scheming families you wrote about, and the family and clan rules are also unreasonable. I have nothing to say about the salary you received before you became an adult. But you still give salary for no reason after you become an adult. Shouldn't it be based on the value of personal creation? For example, how much do elders get for managing the family property a month? Other adult clan members exchange spiritual stones or contribution points according to family tasks or cultivation tasks. How can it be like what you wrote about giving free distribution to every clan member, plus the money given by family tasks? How many years can your family survive?

Yes, if I give you a monthly pass, why don't you get two more chapters on the shelves today?

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Even though they have cultivated themselves, they still have a love brain and a nervous system from the beginning.

It's a bit cool to see that the secret realm is here now. The other 20 chapters are unremarkable. There is no sign of the pig's feet, and there is no sign of the family members. They are all insignificant.

Author, how old are you now? Can I ask?

Author, do you want to get some Zifu demon generals or a Jindan demon commander (to look after the house) for my supporting characters? , If it doesn't work, just pretend I didn't say anything.

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I really can't accept the forcedly lyrical plot, so I just jumped in and ordered two chapters. I thought that the writing would be more natural and smooth in the future. It's a pity. The author keeps working hard.

Author, didn't you pass on your golden elixir technique and alchemy way inheritance to the Fan family? Why does the Chu family still need to keep it a secret?