I Am Your Natural Enemy

The content is similar. Strange stories about rules + contained objects + containment organizations + weird world invasion + multi-professional game.

A very good article, an easy and invincible article, reviving spiritual energy, the author has great imagination, the profession chosen for the protagonist is quite interesting, the contrast is very strong, "natural enemy" versus "invincible". The opening story is also very eye-catching and impressive. The supporting characters in it are very vivid, such as the nurse with tooth decay and the director of the funeral home. They are not just tool people, but have souls. Most of the plots are full of freshness, unconventional, with a bit of ghosts, Maoshan Tianshi, etc., And are grounded with a little suspense.

Reading Youtiao's books makes people feel very comfortable. How comfortable is it? There are obviously more than 10,000 books written every day, but I still feel that I have only read more than 3,000 words 😭 It is not enough. It is not enough at all.

Many things in this book reminded me of the first half of the Demon Suppression Museum. I'm not saying it's plagiarism, but the atmosphere of humanistic care is very similar. The short stories in each unit are quite touching, but the writing style is not as delicate as the Demon Suppression Museum. Also, I would like to complain that the title and introduction of this book are seriously inconsistent with the content. I thought it was a game article after looking at the title and introduction, and I almost missed this good book.

I haven't read it yet. Can I ask the author of this book if he updates it quickly? Can he update it ten times a day?

What time will Youtiao go to bed today?

Sofa

It's just right. I waited until the 29th to finish reading it. I feel very good. Thank you Youtiao for bringing this work. Happy New Year's Eve to everyone ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

First of all, I have not turned on my privacy. I don't like to troll people when looking at my profile! Okay, let's start. There was an author who wrote something toxic. I told him that he would permanently ban me. I changed my account and asked him why. He also blocked my account. I decided that every time I read a book, I would leave a trace of him in the book circle to let everyone know!

This achievement is all due to the writing, and the character creation is difficult to describe (it is too powerful as described above, and it will be useless if something goes wrong, so it relies on the mechanical deity of the protagonist. In order to set off the protagonist, it does not need to be to this extent). The ability of Goldfinger in the early stage was not written clearly (don't be ridiculous, everyone in the chapter review is just making up their minds and guessing). The first few chapters are like talking in sleep, but I have to say that the writing style is really good and comfortable to watch, but the plot, alas

It's really just "making dumplings". The plot after the protagonist starts cultivating is that the holes that are not conducive to unity cannot be filled, the plot that is not conducive to the people cannot be written, what is beneficial should be fought for, and the outsiders cannot be the first to shoot,,,. . . The last chapter is about family reunion and making dumplings, this. . . I don't have any objections to the ten good young people who are the protagonists, but when I look back at the topic of the last chapter, it's really just the plot of the Spring Festival Gala, which makes me speechless.

Personally, I feel that the content is quite well written. After reading it, I didn't find any obvious poisonous points. The protagonist is brave enough to add some tricks. After all, the protagonist is just a martial artist, so he doesn't ask for too much. Some of the character creations are also good, at least in the early stage, especially Cai Heizi. After offline, I felt that the pace of the plot began to speed up significantly. Basically, the protagonist worked from beginning to end. There is basically no description of the little zombies and sparrow cats until later, and probably not much after that. As we get to the back, there are fewer main supporting characters, and we start to fall into a plot loop, where the protagonist discovers a problem, the protagonist uses his authority to investigate, the protagonist quickly goes over to blow him up, and then shakes him off if he doesn't blow up, and then continues to blow him up. After blowing him up, he goes home to rest for two days, practice for two days, and then discovers the problem again. ,,, A non-stop cycle, I don't remember how many chapters this cycle started, but basically this is the step after that. The protagonist has no time to practice, and he is either fucking others or on the way to fucking others every day. This is not bad, but it would be better if the plot rhythm is slightly slowed down so that I can take a breather. Then let's talk about the villains. The few supporting characters mentioned are mainly protagonists. There are a lot of villains with all kinds of heaven-defying abilities. Some of the abilities are even used as templates for the protagonists in other novels. But unfortunately, here they are supporting characters. As we go to the back, there is actually a gap between the protagonists and the villains. The protagonist has no time to improve himself and has begun to be unable to keep up with the version. To be honest, with the few heaven-defying villains I have seen, the protagonist can't compete with the protagonist on his own. The protagonist has reached the end. Judging from the previous progress, unless the protagonist can step out of his own way in one go, the protagonist will still enter the plot loop mentioned above when fighting the villain, because the villain he fights is too high-level, and the natural enemy profession is actually too useless to face those late-stage villains, yes, that is It's useless, because if you look at the back, everyone will know that the protagonist's so-called plug-ins and natural enemies are of no use against the villains. They all impede the protagonist's abilities, and because the protagonist cannot practice Taoism, the way to quickly change combat power is given to his stupid son. Alas, to be honest, I have said too much, but I just want to say one point. Let the protagonist have the opportunity to develop and greatly improve his strength, instead of always relying on the boss to paddle K heads on his own, which does not improve himself at all. The early writing is quite good, but the later part is too compact.

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The author's imagination is ok. The novel looks smooth but I can't understand it. I'm very sorry to the author. I've read dozens of chapters and the plot is pretty good but I can't understand it. I just don't understand what the protagonist's abilities are and what the setting of the world is. Sorry, it's my problem. Let's go.

Generally speaking, the setting is good, and the author's writing style is very comfortable to read. However, there are many logical flaws in the plot. The author looks down on the government's organizational planning ability. He portrays the protagonist's IQ as very high and can think of many solutions that the government departments cannot think of. The result is that many people in the government are dull and have no smart people. In fact, the protagonist's ability is very special. It can be written around the ability, not the protagonist's intelligence. The quotient should be the protagonist's IQ limited by the author's IQ. Author's IQ > Protagonist's IQ > Villain's IQ > Protagonist's teammates' IQ. The result is that the protagonist's teammates, that is, the government departments, appear dull and stupid. In fact, this is impossible. A person may be stupid, but a special department under a political organization cannot be as stupid as an ordinary person. Basically, I have not seen many well-written protagonists with IQ types.

Bird cat😃

After reading Chapter 18, there's nothing exciting about it.

The author can understand the first one, barely understands the second one, and can't understand the third one. It can be seen that the writing has been improving.

The more I read it, the more wrong it became, and it changed its flavor. At first, I still found it interesting. It was a story, but slowly afterwards, maybe it was because I wanted to write about the growth of the protagonist. But I didn't feel it was obvious. What was more obvious was the author's prominence, from relying on people to solve problems to the author's strength. And some places feel a bit forced to be lyrical. For example, the old man in Sister Ye's hometown was not written by the author, but I don't know why he was so angry. In the most abrupt episode, you said that demons harm people, and killing demons is okay. The previous ones are better, you should cry and you should laugh, no problem. Minister Cai doesn't feel passionate and heroic. After all, it's not like other characters. He doesn't leave any behind, and his death is unreal. As a result, Wen Yan's behavior after watching it was also strange, as if he had lost his mind At first, he was serious about survival, but later he became more everyday.

I don't know why, but now I can't read any book without reading more than 100 or 200 pages. I want to read some classics, but I still can't read them. Are there any patients with the same problem? Let's brainstorm, what's going on? ? ? ? ? ?

Brother, please take a break. Wen Yan can't stop spinning like this. It's very hard to watch. I feel like the whole world would be over without Wen Yan. I can write about the daily life of the little zombie bird and cat. Aunt Shuishui can also do it.

This book is not inferior to the previous two, but the material is very fresh.

I saw 300 of them. How should I put it? It felt a bit awkward. The personal heroism was too serious. I felt like the protagonist was the only one in the country who could handle things? Are all the powerful and capable professions villains? Is this the style of the author's previous books as well? I originally planned to finish reading this one and read the first two books. There is a shortage of books. Now I am just waiting to see if someone can give me some popular science.

Black gold

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