Star Ocean: Starting at an Abandoned Mining Space Station

The configuration of the protagonist's small mining ship. Does the company need to rely on this thing to mine without losing its life? With a larger capacity P, you have to manually clean the mine after a night of mining. The cargo door is also small and the mining equipment is poor. You might as well start with the most damaged ship and start with the worst equipment by hand.

. . . Can the volume of 300 kilograms of iron block the smelting chamber? One cubic meter of iron weighs nearly 8 tons. .

When writing, there is absolutely no need to include the name of the protagonist in every paragraph. I suggest you read the books written by the masters. No matter what the plot is, at least it will make people more comfortable to read. I personally like this type of novel. I hope the author will work hard and write well. I still have four or five monthly tickets here.

Can the protagonist control the robot race? Judging from his abilities, it seems that he can control, repair and transform machinery.

At the beginning, a group of greedy sci-fi fans gave me a hard time and deserved it. What was unreasonable here and where was it unreasonable? Why don't you write a science fiction story based on the description of current physical theory? Does the rocket formula count? Do you understand the theory of relativity? What does faster than light mean? How much do you know about orbital dynamics? How much do you know about planetary geology? A group of people pretend to understand, thinking they know better than the author, so they start instructing the author on how to write a novel. It's really funny.

I can only say that it is not science fiction at all. . . . Quite fantasy Starch synthesis system? Atomic printer? Large optical tweezers equipment? Energy weapons, energy shields, heavy nuclear fusion? None? The important thing is that I didn't see the mecha or the auxiliary exoskeleton.

The protagonist is either running for his life or on the way to escape.

It's very simple to know from a God's perspective. You can guess how smart it is if you really put it in. Also, the protagonist has no control over his mouth and talks about everything. If it weren't for the control of the plot, he would have been severely squeezed out by some force as a tool. After all, the body is so fragile and has no means of self-protection.

You need an advanced lens to modify the mining laser. Yes, you went to the space station for this. Then you modify it by melting the lens into liquid and flowing onto the parts. Dude, you already have a furnace. You can just refine a few asteroids to extract the ingredients.

How many people know that the basic framework of this novel is borrowed from Far Planet?