Star Ocean: Starting at an Abandoned Mining Space Station

The protagonist's small mining ship is so poorly equipped that if a company relied on it for mining, wouldn't they go bankrupt? The capacity is barely enough, and after just one night of mining, you'd have to manually clear the ore. The cargo door is small, and the mining equipment is terrible. You might as well start with the most damaged ship and the worst starting equipment, manually crafted.

... Can 300 kilograms of iron really clog a smelting chamber? One cubic meter of iron weighs nearly 8 tons.

When writing, you don't need to include the protagonist's name in every paragraph. I suggest you read books written by top authors; regardless of the plot, they're at least more enjoyable to read. I personally really like this kind of novel. I hope the author keeps up the good work! I still have four or five monthly tickets left.

Can the protagonist control the machine race? Judging from his abilities, it seems like he can control, repair, and modify machines.

The beginning was so annoying to me, with a bunch of sci-fi fans pointing out all sorts of illogical points. Why don't you just write a sci-fi story based on current physics theories? Can you calculate rocket formulas? Do you understand relativity? What does faster-than-light travel mean? How much do you know about orbital dynamics? How much do you know about planetary geology?

It's not science fiction at all... It's more like fantasy. Starch synthesis system? Atom printer? Large optical tweezers? Energy weapons, energy shields, heavy nuclear fusion? None of these? The important thing is that there wasn't even a mecha, and we didn't see any auxiliary exoskeletons either.

The protagonist is either running for his life or on his way to run for his life.

From an omniscient perspective, it's easy to see; anyone who truly puts themselves in the character's shoes can guess just how clever they are. Also, the protagonist has no sense of propriety, blurting out everything. If it weren't for the plot's manipulation, he would have been exploited and drained by some faction long ago, given how fragile he is and how little he can protect himself.

You need advanced lenses to upgrade your mining lasers? Fine, you even made a trip to the space station for that. And your upgrade method involves melting the lenses into liquid and letting it flow onto the parts. Dude, you already have a furnace, why not just refine a few asteroids and extract the components?

How many people know that the basic framework of this novel is based on the spaceship Far Planet?