Overlord of the Realms

The protagonist's character is too soft! There is a father who is a gambler, and he wants to destroy him, but he still wants to reform him! When he sells your mother to a brothel, are you going to resist him and the brothel thugs? Why would you write a time traveler for such a stupid person? Just write about an indigenous protagonist who is stupid at reading. When your father sold your mother and your brother, you knelt in front of him and watched him buy all your family members. You were still crying: "Dad, no! You can't sell your mother and brother!"

I hope I won't write any more rubbish about Red Mansions, it's a bit new.

I hope the new book is a bit new. To be honest, I have followed three books and I am tired of the same old routine.

Shennong's thoughts after watching this: A brainless and reckless brother who likes to show off and cause trouble, the protagonist has no ability to protect himself but still wants to keep him in the county to teach him martial arts, because he doesn't think he's causing enough trouble? There is a gambler and a scumbag father, and the protagonist continues to wait for him to lose his family one day. There are all kinds of disgusting settings. I can't stand it anymore. I will withdraw now.

Can the author add more people who lead soldiers, or people who start from small soldiers? The writing of this type is really beautiful, but there were few written before. Or writing about another world, it doesn't necessarily have to be about one of the Chinese dynasties.

Do you know why Wenchao is an author of about the same period as you? . The previous results are also similar to others. The better you are, the worse you are. If someone scores 70,000 to 80,000 yuan, you will score 70,000 to 800,000 yuan. Who would like your bad protagonist character?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I can say that in the author's novels there are always plots and characters that make you unhappy, making you feel aggrieved and helpless. It's almost the same as the previous ones, which I threw away after reading the beginning. Not to mention the cool writing, how can an author who always makes people feel frustrated and unhappy become a great writer? Can't he change it?

Waiting for the new Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (Red Mansion) 🤭

Ah, what a great book! (50 cents for this article!)

Brother, the author! When you write a new book, can you remind me in the old book? Too lazy😡