Douluo: Peerless Heavenly Eye Yuhao

One thing to say. The writing is okay. The biggest poisonous point of the previous book is that Tang San always calculated the protagonist's growth. It's disgusting. It is recommended that a cheat appears or the world of gods is isolated due to the turbulence of time and space that the protagonist travels through. Wait until you become a god before opening a copy of Tang San. Otherwise, it would be disgusting to be plotted by the God King and not be able to defeat him.

I've ordered them all. I want all the heroines, and they're all in the harem. You can't be worse than Tang Wei. Write it according to the patron saint of the Chinese zodiac.

The homogeneity is too serious. You don't need to buy many chapters. You can know the general content just by looking at the title and prelude. The taste is very different from the most popular Dou Er books. In fact, many low-popular Douji fans have recently developed new flavors. It is precisely because of the low popularity that the author can play freely. On the contrary, such relatively popular ones have restricted their imagination.

Since there is no emotional drama between Xiao Xiao and He Caitou, let's accept Xiao Xiao as well. We already have Yu Jie and girls, so accepting a loli is not too much.🙂

I skipped it to the end. I won't talk about the writing style. I mentioned it in a post before. Many plots are very bloated. You have to write a few sentences to express your meaning when there is no need to write. It feels like we are talking instead of reading, you know. I wonder if others feel this way. Many times when I read this book, I felt that I was not reading a book, but talking to others. Of course, there is also a lot of progress. The writing style of Sesu has improved very quickly. At the beginning, I obviously felt that the emotional scene was awkward, but it got much better later and looked very enjoyable. This is worthy of praise, and there is obvious improvement. 😀 The biggest problem is the writing. It depends on you whether you can change it or not. I feel that this is a matter of style and it depends on you.

I'm very angry. What I've been thinking is Huo Yuhao's truest thought. It's okay to kill the white tiger, civet, and Yi tribes. Let's see if the author can write it out.

I watched the author increase the number of female protagonists from three to six, which really spoils the readers. It's very popular and readers like it, so we'll be satisfied 😍

There is something wrong with the plot of Chapter 145. It lacks logic. Suddenly, a Zhu family member who can fuse with Dai Yueheng's martial spirit appears. Haven't you tested the fusion degree before? If you are a six-year-old child who has just awakened and has soul power, you can still accept it, but you are already fourteen or fifteen years old. Everything serves the plot, right? Logic is not so important.

To be honest, why did the heroine choose Ma Xiaotao? Choose Wang Dong'er, Auspicious Beast, Meng Hongchen, Tangerine, don't they taste great?

The character of the protagonist is not established, and he has no personality charm compared to the original grilled fish. The biggest problem is that the writing method is a bit single-threaded. For example, when writing the game, many chapters did not include emotional advancement or upgrading to become stronger.

I really suggest that the author learn the emotional drama writing method of the author of Throne of the Void book, and his writing style. It doesn't feel like you are talking to yourself, you know?

Snow Emperor

The main text will be released on August 1st. The new book has many female protagonists. Tentative: Ning Tian, ​​Ma Xiaotao, Snow Emperor. Thank you all for your support.

I discovered this book in February this year. I started to follow it around the time when Ma Xiaotao and Zhu Lu went to Riyue to find Huo Gua. The first part was the archived manuscript, and the later part was the updated version. I felt that the plot updates in the last one or two months were too slow. The original work of Gong Changwei, a powerful figure, only took 64 chapters (chapters 206-270) from Huo Gua leaving the sun and moon to compete in Mingdu, but this book actually takes a full 100 chapters (chapters 248-348). Although many chapters of Tang San are divided into upper, middle and lower parts, it is not fair to simply compare them like this. But I think since they are all called a "chapter", it means that at least the author regarded it as a minimum plot unit when creating, and this comparison is not unreasonable. And the author probably didn't plan to write more than six million words like Tang San, so in terms of length ratio, this period of time was quite serious. Although the author tried his best to rationalize the long interval in the plot, the original Huo Gua was half a year away from returning from the competition. I can't remember whether this Huo Gua was back after a year or a year and a half. But from a plot perspective, the major events experienced are not significantly improved compared to the original work. The original work Huo Guai experienced after returning to Mingdu to participate in the competition: Long Xiaoyao's interception, Poseidon's blind date, the inner courtyard soul hunting group (the three brothers of the evil soul master and the three born wolf apes), the appointment and preparation training of the Nuoxi Tang duo, and the mandarin duck pot incident, a total of 5-6 major events. In this book, Huo Guaze has experienced: Long Xiaoyao's interception and chat, the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect Competition, the inheritance of the God of War, the early invasion of the abyss, the conquest of the far north, the spread of man-made soul rings, the inheritance of angels and gods, and the fate of the sea god. There are a total of 8 major events + interspersed trends in the divine world. The information density is actually no advantage compared to the flood that forced Tang San. The author left a message at the end of a previous chapter, saying that he was not good at writing original content and could only write about fan fiction. In my opinion, it was too modest. The first half of the book contains a lot of self-created content, such as Huo Gua's experience before he was 12 years old, the new abilities he acquired, the plots related to Black Water, and the plots related to Wang Donger. In my opinion, the writing is very good, including the aforementioned Nine Treasures Glazed Sect Competition and the inheritance of the two gods. The plots are well written, with tight logic and coherent plots. However, some recent original plots are still a bit too delayed, mainly the emotional line issues and plots related to artificial soul rings. The former is like what I said in a certain article about this chapter. The author may have been 1v1 in his previous works. It is difficult to balance the characters when writing a harem for the first time, and he is faced with the mismatch between the characters he likes and the characters the readers like (I feel that the author likes Ma Xiaotao very much, whether it is saying that his xp is the imperial sister or the perfection of personality for this character; but judging from the character card, Ma Xiaotao's popularity Not even half as good as Snow Emperor and Senior Sister), and due to the unplanned appearance of the heroine (the plot related to Zhu Lu has been revised, and Wang Donger and Ning Tian are suspected to be the result of the revision), it leads to being at a loss when it comes to the heroine and her feelings. In most cases, as soon as Huo Guai has other relationship developments, he has to reread the characters who have already entered the harem, resulting in ineffective "redundant sentences". In my opinion, the latter problem has two parts: First, it is a problem of re-reading. I can't remember how many times the original article said that the Sun God Sect has high credibility because it is endorsed by Shrek. Readers are not goldfish, and there is no need to repeat the same information over and over again. And the second reason, which I think is more important, is that most readers don't actually care much about the principles and manufacturing processes of things like artificial soul rings and Sun God Codes. It's enough to just mention them briefly, and there's no need to go into them in such detail. Especially for the artificial soul ring, I have the impression that it was laid out very early. Not only the principles are explained later, but the process of establishing a mass production model is also written out. This is too much content that readers are not interested in. Of course, what I have said is not to criticize the author. So far, in my opinion, this book is definitely full of flaws. I just hope that the author can squeeze out some water and return the quality of the book to the previous half level. Especially when the plot returns to the competition, the author's writing for the first competition was quite good, and he didn't go crazy with the word count like Yasan. The protagonist group here is so much stronger than in the original work, and there is no point in wasting time on fighting with peers in the ring. I hope the author can handle the detailed relationship during the competition. I believe that the author is not the kind of person who deliberately makes the plot watery in order to get a cheaper subscription, especially since the author has already sent out the idea for the next book. Since the author doesn't want to work hard, I think we at least have a common interest in speeding up the pace. To be honest, by the end of the author's last book, I could tell what the content was roughly by looking at the title, and I had no desire to click on it and subscribe. The same thing is happening now with this book. In addition to removing the water here, it is also useful to make the title shorter and more general. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better as he writes, come on! 👍👍👍 I have voted for this book several times before, but now I have no more votes. I will vote for it again when the new votes arrive.

I collapsed. I finally waited until the author finished it and started to chase it. All the results were toilets. Isn't it good to watch someone else's ff live broadcast by myself? 😥 The protagonist was strengthened in the opening chapter. As a result, this is the only movie where I feel that the protagonist cannot beat the original Huo Gua. It is as uncomfortable as the bird has wings and walks on the ground. The whole broken pillar is like a flashlight that can only be used in the sun. To put it lightly, it is not as useful as the ultimate attributes of the original.

I have no problem with Beibei and Tang Ya being together. Beibei treats Tang Ya very well and the two of them like each other very well, but the pairing of Xu Sanshi and Jiang Nannan makes me feel super disgusted. Xu took advantage of others' danger and persisted in clinging to them despite Jiang Nannan's cold rejection. The sense of wretchedness is simply speechless. But it would not be appropriate to tear it apart and let the protagonist get a second-hand product. The book "Angel of Glory" handled it very well. The protagonist did not touch Jiang Nannan, Xu did not end up with her, and Jiang remained single. . But it's too late to say anything now. I turned to the back and found that this wretched thing about Xu was still as expected. I was a little speechless. The feeling of powerlessness as if I was poisoned while watching the original Douluo II came to my heart again. I just hope that these two guys don't give too many scenes😅

Ma Xiaotao

I just started reading to see if the heroine has Gu Yuena and Rui Shou. I didn't see the character cards, but there must be Rui Beast. Wang Donger has both. To be honest, the original Rui Shou is too regretful and was designed to death. The same goes for Gu Yuena in Dou 3. She was also designed. To be honest, these two are the most important thing for me to watch the Dou 2 Dou 3 fanfic.

Ningtian

Dong Yuze has already sent it. When will you send it {"NickName":"Beifeng Weixi","UserId":227257873}

Personally, I feel it is better than the two Buddhas of the future and the past

The author wrote this book really well. First of all, it is based on the timeline of the original work, but it does not copy the original work like some works, and has its own innovations. In fact, I like to read the fanfics of Dou Er and Dou San the most, because the sub-jobs or soul guides in them can enrich the content of the novel. It is not as monotonous as Dou Yi. Although the development of this kind of soul guide has some drawbacks, it can add a lot of suspense and expansion to the novel. Comparatively speaking, the logic of Dou Er is easier to sort out than that of Dou San. In Dou San, due to various reasons, the protagonist is either very cheating (otherwise he cannot develop), or he develops according to the development path of the original text. Therefore, some fans of Dou San often play a role in making up for the difficult meaning of the original work. After reading the author's closing remarks, I have great expectations for the author's next novel. Apart from the book "Throne of the Void", many of Dou San's colleagues have not become apprentices or friends with Yun Mi. If Dou San must find a big backer, then Yun Mi may be a link that cannot be bypassed. After all, it can be seen from the original work that he is not as stubborn and conservative as some other Shrek Academy teachers, so for the male protagonist of the same novel, he is likely to play a role similar to a protector. At the same time, since we are all Dou San, it should be natural to be with Na'er, and the Yun Mi line should also be a corresponding development link. Possible. Some people wonder, if it is a sideline of the Qiangu family, is it possible to enter the core of Shrek Academy? I think it is completely possible. Na'er's martial spirit in the original novel is a god-level martial spirit. In fact, everyone understands that god-level martial arts have traces to follow, such as Poseidon, etc. Doesn't Yunmi also accept disciples? The sideline of Qiangu, the martial soul suddenly becomes stronger and the twin martial souls are added. On the one hand, cheating is not a big deal, and on the other hand, the problem of logical self-consistency is solved. Regarding the sub-career issue, there is actually no need to focus solely on forging, nor is it necessary to have several almighty abilities. Breaking through level 9 and reaching level 10 in one of them can also improve your strength. I believe that all book friends who have read the Legend of Dou San Dragon King should find that Dou San was actually written really well in the early stages, but later there were plots that did not conform to the concept. The finale is also really difficult to understand. I hope the author can make up for the shortcomings and update more. Finally, I read this book in a few days on QQ Reading, and I will gradually add monthly tickets to the author.

The next book will have a single female protagonist and multiple female protagonists. Is the protagonist from the Qiangu family?

This is too gentle for Ditian If you want me to say it, just wall-facer Huo Yuhao speaks to all the soul beasts Then "I swear on my martial soul that I am the son of destiny chosen by the plane. The purpose is to solve the evil intention of the God King on the Douluo Continent and help humans and nature coexist harmoniously. No one except me can solve the problem that the soul beasts will become extinct." Anyway, this is all right, although it is only half the words Then Prepare to self-destruct directly, and let Ditian take the soul beasts to beg you not to die. Anyway, you can be buried with the soul beasts of the whole continent when you die. Although the time is about ten thousand years, do you think Ditian still dares to give you a face?

I'm sending you a preview of your new book {"NickName":"","UserId":227257873}. I've saved up several recommendation votes and monthly passes, and I'm just waiting for you to publish your new book.

Speaking of which, did you forget to write it later? After entering the God Realm, you said you wanted to reshape the soul in your spiritual sea, but nothing happened. There is no more to say about Yi Lao reshaping his body or something. There is no more to say about Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue's reincarnation. You have written all the words and lost them. What do you do? 😅 And when the second martial soul obtains the soul ring, it is quite unclear whether it is to hunt the soul beast or to make it into a soul. The default is to hunt the soul beast. Directly writing to Chapter 520, I have to decide on one. The end is also a new beginning, and then a new beginning. Can't you fill the holes you dug? Where did you fill it in, bro? How about not cutting it to chapter 520, writing it a little longer, and filling in all the holes? If you have to make it to chapter 520, you've written so many love scenes, I'm really dizzy.

Give it a try!

It's well written, but there are still some holes that haven't been filled in. I hope the supporting characters can have more roles, but I feel like the supporting characters are a little less interesting.

When will the author publish a new book? Dou San really doesn't have many books to read. They either copy the original work in a different way, or the writing is not strong enough and has problems with logic. My favorite book, Throne of the Void, is almost as good as TJ. Great support for the author, I will definitely support it with monthly votes when he opens a new book.

Will the heroine of the next new book be Gu Yuena? If so, I'll book it all.