Douluo Dalu: Spirit Pearl Divine Sword

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ The protagonist's IQ is not very high. For example, when he was weak, he went to Tiandou Royal Academy to pretend to be a pig and eat tigers, claiming to be an ordinary civilian (hiding his identity as a disciple of Sword Douluo), but unscrupulously offending a noble student (cutting off the ear of a grandson of Contra), which seems unreasonable to me. Sexually speaking, a gentleman is not conducive to being under a dangerous wall. It can also be seen from the subsequent plot, especially after magnifying Ning Fengzhi's IQ, he often only exists in the form of chess pieces. Of course, there is nothing wrong with chess pieces, but chess players can have a brighter future. The protagonist is not devoted and certainly not sentimental. This point is related to the protagonist's family history. The protagonist is too deeply bound to the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect. In the early stage, he was hampered by his weakness. Not to mention whether he had sentimental thoughts, even if he did, like Qian Renxue, he did not dare to marry until he left the Douluo God Realm and went to the Fairy Sword World. His complicated feelings towards Gu Yuena may also be seen. , These details can show that the protagonist is indeed not a dedicated person, but he is still very decent and will not unscrupulously cater to his own preferences, at least until he has not grown up. After all, he relied on the Qibao Glazed Sect at the beginning, and some things are not easy to do in person. I think this is also a reason. The protagonist is still a bit indecisive, and has some seemingly inexplicable guilt and debt towards some people. This is mainly related to the fact that the protagonist's state of mind has not changed. He regards the original work as a real world, but he does not know that for him, the original work is just a script in a parallel world, and in this world he comes to, he is the protagonist who describes and affects the world. To experience the true warmth and warmth of human nature, there is no need to restrict the terms in the original script, but to make good use of the information in this script to play his own life. Of course, these are just some minor flaws, because for a book, making people think is the core value, so I still quite approve of this book.

Really, I highly recommend this book, it is completely different from other Douluo fan fiction! The protagonist has three upright views, behaves like a gentleman, is modest and reasonable, and is affectionate and righteous. The whole character is made flesh and blood and very smart by the author. The plot is also very compact, with some exciting moments, but no flaws so far. Goldfinger is not as outrageous as other novels. You can see the protagonist growing up step by step. I really recommend everyone to take a look, it will definitely not be a loss! ! ! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

It's really great. In fact, the last 300 chapters are also solid. The personal battles are full of fun and the battle chapters stand up to scrutiny. It's great! Extremely cool! The damned ones were spared their lives, the damned ones had their own ending. (Juhuaguan and Old Ghost, I really...) I really like Ning Fengzhichenxin. The author's description of Shrek is also very good. I learned a lot. The author is very skilled. I don't know if he is a craftsman. In short, it is so wonderful.

It is not appropriate to give away the fairy grass for free. Yu Tianheng is one of the heirs of the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Family. Although he and the Qibao Glazed Sect are allies, there is also competition. If it is a marriage partner, it is understandable to give it away for free, but he is a man. In addition to Dugu Yan and Ye Lingling, there should be an exchange of interests. The protagonist is not Tang San at that time. He needs to win people's hearts as much as possible, and the interests of the sect must also be considered. Do you think that the Qibao Glazed Sect would give away human soul bones from other sects for no reason?

The single heroine is so good, Rongrong is so good, why do we have to have two men from the modern past and two men? I just want to see Ning Rongrong as the heroine alone. Why is it so difficult? I have to bring Qian Renxue every time

If the writing is good, you can actually try harem novels, which will have a wider audience. I have seen several harem Douluo fanfics with more poisonous points than you, but more monthly votes than you. Don't worry about those who don't like it. People who like books won't talk about it. Only those who don't like it will stop scolding because they feel uncomfortable. So you will see a lot of people scolding, but there will be book friends to defend it, as long as it is not a big poisonous point.

You must have made a mistake. When you hunt for the first soul ring, you will meet Tang San. The protagonist is in the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect, which is next to Tiandou City. Moreover, Tang San is in a small principality and is not within the scope of the Tiandou Empire.

I have read more than 500 chapters, let me analyze this book The first is the advantages: 1. There is no doubt about the clear grudges. He has lived up to everyone who is good to the protagonist. 2. A clear conscience: Although there are some double standards, the bottom line is that what you do is what you do. If not, it is not. In the book, the protagonist also admits that he has double standards, Holy Mother, so he has a clear conscience to do the things of these good old people. Secondly, the disadvantages: The author did not have a clear overall view and did not think about the future direction of the book, which indirectly led to a series of problems later: the plot was forced to follow, and after the 300th chapter, it felt that something was wrong. The author did not shape the character, characteristics and appearance of the protagonist well, and added supporting characters to the plot. First, the character of the protagonist is given to collapse and the Virgin's heart is overflowing, and then various reasons are given to the people in the protagonist group to get married. It's really embarrassing to say that you force a spouse like this without any emotional description. In the last few hundred chapters, the author has let himself go, just to get through the plot, so it is finished in a hurry There is also my evaluation and discussion: I think this emotional scene of Qian Renxue can be omitted, it is really difficult to describe in one sentence The logic is not smooth, it is unclear whether it is love or hate, and they are completely different in ideology and political morality. There is no logic at all between two people with different views. The protagonist is plotting against Qian Renxue while going to rescue her. It seems really unreasonable Ning Rongrong is in the whole book The book is still very good. I got into it because Ning Rongrong is the heroine. Ning Rongrong really changed a lot after the transformation of Shi Lake in the original book. There is a hint of cuteness in her tsundere. Although she is a little willful, she is steady, mature and considerate. This is also an important reason why I like Ning Rongrong as a character.

The protagonist sees everyone as his brother and everyone he sees as his sister. In reality, it is quite normal. After all, it is usually just polite. However, in the novel, it looks a bit weird. It doesn't matter now, but in the future, you should pay attention to your identity when you compete for world domination or become a god king.

You must treat Rongrong well, I like her very much, I can't let Qian Renxue get over Rongrong, Qian Renxue is too sensible, Rongrong Rongrong. Is the best

Qibao Glazed Sect can definitely cooperate with Wuhun Palace. There are no permanent friends, only eternal interests.

Overall it's okay, with pros and cons. Let's talk about the advantages first. First, the ending is good, everyone has an explanation, they are not eunuchs. Secondly, the protagonist's outlook on life is correct. His intelligence was not good at first, but he has shown clear growth later on. He is a growth-type protagonist. Third, there is no abuse of the host throughout the whole process, which is great. Fourth, the master Tang San and Tang Hao were decisive enough to kill him, unlike previous novels where he was told to kill but always failed to kill him. Fifth, the supporting characters are well described, especially Chen Xin and Ning Fengzhi. Let's talk about the shortcomings First, there are too few female protagonists. In fact, beauties such as Hu Liena and Zhu Zhuqing can be accepted. Although their endings are explained, they still give me a slight feeling of missing out. Secondly, the relationship between Qian Renxue and Qian Renxue was not well described, making her feel like a mistress. Third, the protagonist is too strong in the later stage and has no sense of tension at all. Fourth, make the IQ of the supporting character higher than that of the protagonist. If the boss of this book is Ning Fengzhi, the protagonist will definitely not be able to defeat him.

After watching it all, let me talk about my feelings. First of all, there are no problems with the plot. There are no poisonous points until the end. Moreover, the protagonist belongs to the kind of growth type. If he does something bad in the early stage, he will admit that he did it wrong later. And it's satisfying enough. Maybe it's more appropriate to say it's a big meal, and it's not a brainless slap in the face. A big pleasure will have a lot of preparation until it completely explodes in one place. Of course, there are good things and bad things, but most of the bad things here are things that I personally feel are inappropriate. 1. The smooth development of the plot is achieved by the intelligence of some characters, and then there is an overly deified character on our side. It may not be a problem according to the cool writing, but I just felt awkward when I watched it. To put it simply, it felt like it was too cool, and it was a bit boring in the middle. 2. The characters in the protagonist's camp are somewhat homogenous in personality, that is, as soon as they get to know the protagonist, they all become Buddhist-like. Of course, I feel that this is a matter of length, and not too much perspective is given to the supporting characters. These are the things that I personally feel bad about, and they are over the top, but I still recommend taking a look anyway.

This book's Ning Fengzhi has been strengthened to the legendary level, and his intelligence really crushes all kinds of people.

I feel that the satisfaction after reading this book is far beyond the original work. It makes up for the three-dimensional problem and the unreasonable plot in the original work. It makes me feel that this is the real Douluo Continent instead of the Tang Family Continent. The plot in the story no longer revolves around the protagonist. In the end, when the continent is unified, I thought that the protagonist will come on stage to strike with a divine attack. Unexpectedly, I saw that everyone was united. At that moment, everyone gained a soul. The scene of a hundred rings harmonizing will be unforgettable for a long time.

It's really good, no stallion, the male protagonist is only married to Ning Rongrong. People who like the male protagonist include Qian Renxue and Gu Yuena (postscript) Ning Fengzhi is responsible for intelligence, and Chen Xin is responsible for strength

To be honest, I felt very comfortable reading this fanfic. The protagonist's views are correct, he has a kind heart but is not a saint. He is not perfect and has some minor flaws (such as not being decisive enough in the early stage, etc.), But there is an obvious growth process. The most important thing is that the supporting characters are not clever, especially the leader Ning in this book, which really surprised me. He is the most charismatic and intelligent fan leader I have ever seen. Especially in the decisive battle, the mortal body plotted against the gods. It can be said that he planned the decisive battle to victory with his own plan. Furthermore, according to the logic of this book, it is very inconsistent for a Douluo Continent to have a martial spirit like the Holy Spirit Bead Demon Sword. It gives the impression that the plug-in is overdone, just like some fans started with the Pangu Ax and Chaos Bead martial spirit. It feels like a mindless and cool novel. But this book didn't give me this feeling. Just like the setting of the original text, the protagonist's magic sword and Holy Spirit Orb adapted to the rules of Douluo. The author did write this feeling. At least I didn't feel it was inconsistent. It gave the protagonist a big hook and the plot development did not collapse. It was really surprising. Finally, to remind you, author, have you rested enough? The manuscript fee is almost spent, and it's time to go to work. When will your new book be released?

Douluo's fan fiction is well written and not brainless throughout. Bring the Immortal Sword and Douluo together and fight against the Tang Dynasty. Still a happy end. Overall OK

I just recently discovered a very excellent Douluo fanfic. I won't go into details on the many advantages. I will just say that the author's description of Ning Fengzhi, the leader of the Qibao Glazed Sect, one of the supporting characters, is very consistent with his character. He has a deep city and unparalleled resourcefulness. He is not just a supporting character with a wise personality, his strategy deeply affects the protagonist, allowing him to grow mentally. It's worth seeing for just that.

Overall, it's a 70% rating. It's a good Douluo fan novel. There are no major flaws in more than 400 chapters. It's just that the character creation of the Snow Emperor and the Ice Emperor is a bit off, but it's not a big problem.

Congratulations on the ending. It's pretty good, at least I can keep watching it. However, the protagonist is not as brilliant as some of the supporting characters, such as Chen Xin and Ning Fengzhi. Among all the Douluo fans, you painted them the most brilliantly.

It's a very good fanfic, although the ending is a bit rushed and the final scene is a bit over-the-top and out of control. But the flaws do not hide the good points, Shuhuang can come and take a look.

Jun Tianlin "Holy Demon Douluo" "Asura God King" "Holy Emperor" ●Soul Ring Devil Sword (Shura God's Throne) 1. "Swivel Tail Tip Shuttle" Yellow, Ning Hanxue 2. "Purple Fire Golden Clear" "Beast" purple, conferred gods of ice and fire 3. "Golden Winged Eagle" purple, wind and water flow 4. "Thunder Lion" black, streamer killing immortal slash 5. "Flying Scale Light Fish" black, fantasy water and thunder 6. "Behemoth of the Earth" is red, the three talents destroyed the demon town, and all spirits returned to the divine light 7. "Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear" is red, the true form of the martial spirit 8. "Ice Bear King" is red, the spinning light swallows the sun and moon, and the ultimate curse returns to Yin and Yang 9. " "God-gifted" dark gold, heaven and earth Yuanling Slash Holy Spirit Pearl (Holy Emperor's throne) 1. "Tianmeng Ice Silkworm" platinum, holy breath will create more evils and five spirits will purify evil                    2.，                   Earth Screen Summons the Mountain God 3. "Fire Spirit Pearl" Red Gold, Tiangang War Qi Purgatory Sea of Fire Fire Screen Summons the God of Fire 4. "Water Spirit Pearl" Blue Gold, Wind, Moon and Ice Sky Cold Realm Curse Realm Water Screen Summons the Snow Demon 5. "Wind Spirit Pearl" green gold, strong wind and sky-shattering Wind Control Technique Wind Screen Summons the God of Wind 6. "Thunder Spirit Pearl" Purple Gold, Thunder Moves the Nine Heavens Thunder Dance Town Thunder God 7. "Silver Dragon King" Silver, martial soul true body 8. "Silver Dragon King" Silver, God-binding seal Wumenmian Heavenly Demon Soul Lock        Demonic Soul Resurrection 9. "Silver Dragon King" Silver, full attribute control ●Soul Bone Head: "Tianmeng Ice Silkworm" 1 million years old, soul reading and heart-taking                                  ： ：46 Ten Thousand Years, Dark Gold Terror Claw                               10，                                  ：10，                                              ： "The Blood-red Nine-Headed Bat King" has 400,000 years and is reborn with a drop of blood Extra: "Purple Fire Golden Beast" Golden Flame Soul Destroyer Extra: "Ice Bear King" 300,000 years ● Heroine: Ning Rongrong, Qian Renxue

I watched it for the first time during the summer vacation after the high school entrance examination, and now I watch it again during my freshman year. 😍😭

Among the three brothers, Tianlin is the best. He has eaten all the three most powerful beauties in terms of money, strength and influence.

Author, your novel is so advanced. In today's latest theatrical version, Chen Xin is really ready to become a sword god 🤭

The new book has just begun, "Douluo Peerless: Tiandan Demon Tiger". Dou 2 fan, we sincerely invite all book lovers to watch. In fact, I originally wanted to write a Dou 3 fanfic, but there are too many Dou 3 competitions, and I don't know how to change it better. I wrote several versions of the outline but I'm still not satisfied. Before I have a good idea, I'd better write Dou Yi Dou 2 first. Especially in Dou 2, there are so many beautiful female characters. So far, I have only written about Xiao Xiao, Qiu'er and Ling Luochen. There are still a lot of others. This book also has many women, but there is a definite first heroine, Snow Emperor.

Isn't Qiandaoliu's ninth soul skill the breath of angels?

Chen Xiao—the grandson of Sword Douluo Chenxin! During the six-year-old awakening ceremony, the Soul Killing Immortal Sword appeared, the sword energy soared into the sky, and the soul measuring stone suddenly shattered! Chen Xin's eyes were as bright as a sword, and he smiled proudly: "When this sword is drawn, Haotian must bow his head!" Ning Fengzhi clapped his hands and praised: "With Xiao'er here, my Qibao Glazed Sect will be happy!" Ning Rongrong's eyes were full of stars, and she declared in a sweet voice: "Brother Xiao is unparalleled in the world, you can only be mine!" However, when Chenxiao's Immortal-killing Sword shocked the mainland, the proud women and peerless powerful men from all over the world cast their gazes—— Qian Renxue stared at Chenxiao, the corners of her lips raised slightly, and the ambition to conquer ignited in her eyes: "Chenxiao..., You will eventually surrender to me!" Bibi Dong tapped the scepter lightly with her fingertips, with a hidden meaning in her eyes: "The Immortal Killing Sword... If it cannot be used by me, it should be completely destroyed!" Bo Saixiyao! Looking at the mainland, he whispered softly: "This son's sword actually made the Poseidon Trident tremble... Will he be the new god's choice?" Tang San clenched the Clear Sky Hammer tightly, fighting spirit boiling: "It's just a pirated version of the Immortal Killing Sword? I want to see if it's your sword that's sharper, or my hammer that's stronger!" —— When the Zhuxian Sword comes out, who can compete with him? The world of gods trembles, and thousands of sects bow their heads! Chen Xiao holds the sword and walks across the sky, vowing to kill all disobedience in the world!