
Douluo Dalu: The Abandoned Son of the Haotian Clan, So Why Did He Go to Spirit Hall?
斗罗:昊天弃子,怎么去了武魂殿
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- 1.6M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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Is the author considering changing the heroine, or changing the priorities? Don't rewrite the two characters currently on the character card!
Are these two useful? It can be said that Dugu Yan and Xiancao can be related in the early stage, and Ye Lingling is also a top support, but the emotional scene you wrote is really too stiff, and the heroine has not appeared in many scenes since she came out! These two are like two vases. Most of the protagonists team up with the talented second-generation ancestors of the Enshrinement Hall. They don't have a role in playing games or hunting souls. This makes the heroine very unattractive. By the way, these two are very unpopular as heroines! Many people say that Dou Yi's Qian Renxue is stupid, but her stupidity does not prevent her talent from being the best in Douluo Continent forever. She has an innate twenty-level god-level martial spirit + top-level fairy grass. The protagonist's current hard talent is not as good as Qian Renxue, plus According to the divine examination passed down from the family, he will definitely be a first-level god in the future, and the angel god is also a self-created god-level god with a higher upper limit than ordinary first-level gods. He can be ranked in the top five among the eighteen first-level gods. He can expect to be a half-step god king in the future, and it is not impossible to become a true god king! "It doesn't matter if she is stupid. The protagonist can suppress her and she will listen to her advice. Isn't this good?" As the wife of a future first-level god, she is also a powerful wife in the divine world (after all, there are only two goddess kings in the divine world, and the first-level god is already very strong). Look at the two you gave us now, one is Dugu Yan and the other is Ye Lingling! Let's talk about Dugu Yan first. Her talent is not very high. Originally, even if she was cured of the poison, she might not be able to become a Titled Douluo in the future. Now, the enhancement of the fairy grass has overwhelmed the Super Douluo. It is impossible to be a Ultimate Douluo! Even if the protagonist takes you to the God Realm in the future, you will only be a second-level god at most. What can a second-level god do? A bottle of oil is useless! Out that her martial soul is indeed very good, and it is not incomprehensible to be called the "miracle in the martial arts", but even if her talent is strengthened by the fairy grass, it is impossible to become a god king. She is not qualified for the goddess of life, and there is no godship related to healing among the first-level gods. She also killed a second-level god! The difference between Dugu Yan and Dugu Yan is that one can never become a god in his lifetime, while the other has a small chance of becoming a god! It's all the same, it's useless. But some people will say that they will have a lot of effects in the early stage, but think about it for yourself, do the second-generation ancestors in the Enshrinement Hall need them as teammates? Dugu Yan is purely useless. Ye Lingling's treatment is pretty good, but isn't there already a healing angel? It's not very useful! It's useless in the early stage, and it's even less useful in the later stage! Do these two roles have any substantive role? I hope the author can change the priorities of the heroine, and don't focus on the two characters in the current character card. Take a long-term view. The protagonist is the heir who has been favored by the Shura God King, the future God King. I hope the heroine's strength and status can be more suitable for him. There can be some drag, but don't focus on the description! This book is actually quite well written. Don't leave any flaws or holes in the emotional drama.
The author really doesn't know how to choose a female protagonist. He writes a few female supporting characters whose original works are not good at all. Does he want to give away girls? Another party that won't dismantle CP
After reading so many Douluo fandoms, no one has played Soul Ring, which is a reference to Ten Years Lone Bamboo Soul Skill Pole Vault, which makes me very disappointed.
I don't know since when, Dugu Yan and Ye Lingling replaced the original positions of Ning Rongrong and Xiao Wu and became the must-try heroines of the new generation of Douluo 🙂
I don't understand why the author would write something that is not very popular as the heroine. Isn't Douluo Qian Renxue a must-have? It is very popular and accepting it can also help the protagonist. The author said that her status is sensitive so she will not accept it. I don't understand where the sensitivity lies.
This book seems to have some common problems among Douluo fans.
BECAUSE OF TANG SAN's double standards, stupid loyalty and selfishness? Putting aside these character problems, Zhang Wei at least wrote a novel to a qualified level. Sadly, most of the Douluo fans we see do not seem to escape the double standard that we should hate the most. The main force of the protagonist in this book revolves around the Enshrinement Hall, and the main characters in the Enshrinement Hall we see are very flat. The attitude of several elders towards a Soul Lord and Soul Sect can be described as gentle. The characters of these elders themselves are also shaped like some saints. The one that impressed me the most was Jugui Douluo. The author used a plot that I thought was very illogical to have them directly switch to the Enshrinement Hall. After that, they became the personal bodyguards of the protagonist. And their characterizations are as gentle and kind as those elders, and most importantly, they value the protagonist. In turn, look at the protagonist's opponents, from Ning Fengzhi to Yu Yuanzhen to Titan to Haotian Sect to Tang San's protagonist group. The author uses extremely childish writing techniques, which makes these villains selfish, double-standard, arrogant, weak and unintentional. What the author depicts is more like a world of informants, as if there is some supreme will that determines that the protagonist and the people around him must be good people, and his opponents must be bad guys. At this time, let's take a look at the most important author's creation of the protagonist. First of all, the cultivation system has collapsed. The protagonist is born at level 9, and his cultivation speed is far faster than that of geniuses at the same time. The author's explanation for all this is that the protagonist works very hard. . . Oh, and maybe also add that Yang Wushuang is very talented in refining medicine and keeps feeding pills to the protagonist. Then there is the idea of writing, the pace is actually too fast. When the protagonist reaches the third and fourth rings, the upper three sects are basically beaten to death, and it has almost nothing to do with the protagonist. The first move is to worship the temple or Yang Wushuang. This directly leads to the fact that the combat power must be destroyed, so that the protagonist can catch up with the most powerful group of people in this era as soon as possible. The second is the character of the protagonist. The protagonist is a Tang San-like character. Why do you say that? Because he is actually exactly like Tang San, he has no ideals and beliefs, and he doesn't think about how to change the world. He is a character who just wants to protect his own people, just like Tang San protected Shrek all the way, protected the Haotian Sect, protected the Tang Sect, and finally destroyed the Wuhun Palace. Huo Yuhao is actually the same way. This virus seems to have been passed down to all Douluo fans... They don't understand what their own power is. They are just tools used by the author to oppose the original work. When Tang San and other protagonists in the original work pretend to be slapped in the face, they show up and slap them in the face. The popularity of this type of fan fiction is actually because the original work is too poorly written and can be scolded for too many points, so any article that opposes the original protagonist group will be well received, because readers enjoy reading it. But I think we shouldn't stop there, thanks for watching!
Is there anyone like me?
Every time I see a fan who writes about Douluo that I am interested in, I get really upset. The filter of childhood allows me to see the reaction of those who abuse Tang San, and as an adult, my mature outlook on life allows me to see the reaction of people who do not abuse Tang San. However, I quite like Douluo's world view (very suitable for the idea king) and want to read it 😐
Thoughts after reading
As of the date of posting, this book has updated 389 chapters. Currently, only 3 of the latest chapters have not been subscribed. I read this in one go and did not put it aside for too long. I think I have the qualifications to say a few words When I first read it, this book was called "Douluo: The Unparalleled Vicious Weapon in the Hall of Worship", or the Fierce Weapon, it doesn't matter. The first three chapters, or the first six chapters, are very, very well written, so good that I once thought I was back in my teenage years, when I read online novels for the first time, and came into contact with fantasy themes for the first time. Of course, this evaluation is too subjective, and part of it is the beautification of memory in the brain. Newcomers can get a 20% discount when reading this evaluation. The first 6 chapters completely describe how a family that has hit rock bottom starts over, Yang Wushuang's heartache and sorrow, Yang Changan's ambition and determination, the family's dilemma of survival, and the joy of finally having a chance to turn over. Reading it, it gave me the feeling that this is not Douluo Continent, but a traditional fantasy novel. I think Douluo Dalu should be written this way, because it is based on traditional fantasy novels, and the various fan fictions that follow are based on its special power system and the abstract characters and plot of the original work. Therefore, using the traditional fantasy writing method can better reflect its background and arouse the emotional resonance of an old man like me. Further on, until the fairy grass plot, my evaluation has been slightly lowered. Because starting from the fairy grass, the plot of this book has returned to the common level of Douluo fans. It is no longer the traditional fantasy of a down-and-out boy counterattacking, but begins a formulaic change of qualifications, seizes opportunities, becomes stronger, and so on, and then accepts the divine examination to become a god, and leads the harem who have also become gods to the divine world. It's not bad, it's written like this because the foundation of Douluo's original work is too weak. If you want to write something else, you can't write it. At most, you can develop soul tools, torture Tang San, and finally become a god. So relatively speaking, this book can write 1.3 Million words without being as watery as possible, which is pretty good. Of course, I won't talk about some watery parts in the middle, but I can barely accept it. The so-called success is Xiao He, failure is also Xiao He. This book starts with a traditional fantasy novel and embarks on the classic path of fairy grass to become a god. As it goes on, the plot of this book is not much different from other Douluo novels. As a result, I have a mentality that it is not a pity not to read it. In other words, it is an achievement. What makes the author's excellent achievements is his solid writing foundation. What prevents his achievements from making breakthroughs is also his solid writing foundation. The author is the kind of talent who can keep the minimum limit. If I open a novel website, I will definitely spend money to poach the author to ensure a stable output of high-quality works in order to survive the weak development period. In short, this book is worth reading. At least it was very readable until Tang San ran to Poseidon Island, but if you continue further, you will get tired of reading.
The significance of the two heroines, Dugu Yan and Ye Lingling, is all mentioned in one stroke.
Why do you have to work for Wuhun Palace? Obviously they almost wiped out your family, killed many people in your family, and found reasons for them, all because of Tang Hao. So I would like to ask, whether it is Tang Hao's side or Wuhundian's side, they can be regarded as enemies, why do they have to be dogs? Can't you do the opposite? Isn't it good to overthrow Wuhun Palace and destroy Haotian Sect? A little white flower that must be written