Wei Xian Xun Tu: Fortunately, the System Can Save Death

You don't need to write the last paragraph in the introduction, maybe more people will read it! Or you can travel through Xianxia or the urban world and return to Blue Star! In the end, are you going back from the weird world, or are you going back because of the calculations of the big guys in the weird world? You are not simply serving as a guide for the boss, the biochemical matrix in the zombie apocalypse.

What is the introduction? A party in a dream, a clue about going home? Not interested in clicking in at all

Looking at the title and introduction, it looks like the movie I watched before

The plug-in is not good, the character is not good, the people around the protagonist become cold one after another, and then become incompetent and furious.

It's strange, how come this comment dropped from 12 to 10... Has any reader deleted the comment? You don't want this kind of thing! ! ! 😭😭😭

It feels boring, a lot of ideas are bombarded quickly, the rhythm is not good, the logic is flawed, and there is nothing outstanding about it.

Is this the weird practice? Too useless

It is suggested that the first chapter should be changed to a leather figurine play, and the women should be changed to lifelike leather figurines, which would be more folkloric. The combination of leather figurines and opera masks is also smoother

After stumbling through the first chapter, sometimes it's quite helpless to be alone online.

I want to say what the hell is this Chapter 1 about? There is no sense of immersion at all, and it always feels unconventional when reading.

You, a modern person who has traveled through time in a strange world, are trying to force an explanation when something wrong happens. You might as well write about the aboriginal people. You are really trying to force your brains out. You force a time-traveling person to think according to the thoughts at that time. You are wearing a woolen thread.

The protagonist likes to be nosy and looking for trouble.

It was written by the person who is the chief deputy. It doesn't feel like a human being.

The beginning is very familiar, very similar to a famous foreign writer