Uchiha: Starting from Tobirama Jinchuriki

Overall, it's pretty good In my opinion, inner drama is part of the fun Including the comment section The only drawback is that I personally feel that the pacing in the later stages is a bit rough But it's still worth watching To be honest The part where Kuro Zetsu and Obito fall in love is really interesting and tense.

It's one of the best online novels I've ever read. I've been following it for two years and the plot is quite exciting. Danzo, a dog who is so bad to the core, is rewarded for his evil deeds. He is a good protagonist who is not only very smart and decisive in killing, but also very kind to others. He is not like some anti-social personalities. The protagonist has also brought many good people who originally had tragic fates to live and changed them. The fate of the story is very well done, and the overall plot is quite relaxed. It also allowed me to understand people like Tobirama who I didn't know much about before. And even though it is a systematic text, the battle of wits is really strong. I have to find various ways to maximize the shock to everyone's hearts to gain strength, gain rights, balance the village and family, and balance the ninja world Otsutsuki. I can only say that it is not much simpler than writing without a system. There are so many things that require thinking. If you were in my place, a simple-minded person like me would not only not be able to gain much power, but would probably die as soon as I started. It is very interesting, although many plots have been magically changed and look very abstract, such as Senju Tobirama getting the Mangekyou Sharingan, Black Zetsu falling in love with Obito, but the logic is still quite smooth. , It didn't make people feel that it was made up. Even the two people, Black Zetsu and Obito, were so pure in love that I felt like crying. You can say it's against the will or not. 😜 The battle scenes are also very exciting, especially the scene where Iwagakure's tailed beast is killed with a giant steam explosion and one person fights nine shadow levels. Overall, good people are rewarded. It's really well written and the author is really strong.

I have finished reading the main text, and the overall impression is pretty good. There is no profound intention, just Tu Yile's invincible writing. It is suitable for relaxing after work and looks very relaxing. While the protagonist repeatedly tosses the ninja world, he uses "a better ending than the original" as his bottom line. Rather than being a sinister person for the sake of earning gold coins, it is more like an alien from another world satisfying his own evil taste. Subjectively, I always feel that I am an alienated time traveler, and that everyone in the ninja world is just a tool to be used. In fact, as we spent time together day and night, I was moved a little bit and gradually integrated into it. He originally wanted to be the mastermind who controlled the entire ninja world, but eventually became the protector of all living beings. A play is like life, it's hard to tell who acted who. Who says the protagonist isn't a big black Zetsu... Just replace Obito with a member of the ninja world. You don't need to think too much about Yingxingxiang's articles, such as what is the nature of the system, where does the energy for replication and enhancement come from, and whether unconserved energy will destroy the structure of the world... If these underlying logics could be self-explanatory, and by the way explain the reason for time travel (that classmate), this book would be more complete. I would like to make a suggestion. Characters' personalities change with time and energy. If the writing can reflect this, it will be more exciting. For example, the text clearly points out the changes in the protagonist's feelings towards the people of the ninja world, such as the attitude towards the system from being a puppet of the system at the beginning to worrying about gains and losses, fear and doubt after gaining power, etc., And wants to explore the truth of the system. What kind of character comes from time travel, what kind of character is there in the finale, and the handling of the characters is weak. This is the difficulty of the invincible flow. Without the pressure of combat power, it is difficult to use the big plot to create characters. It can only be integrated into daily details, which is more demanding. Overall, it is good. I believe the author can write better and better. Compared with upgrading flow, imagination writing is indeed more suitable for authors. For example, I really like the sadomasochism between Zetsu and Obito, hahahahaha. Looking forward to playing in the extra story.

Cool article! I have always had an inexplicable prejudice against this kind of system-based writing. Everything is given by the system, which makes people feel insecure, and there is a sense of compulsion that you are teaching me to do things. However, I felt very comfortable reading this book. The system cannot speak and does not point fingers at the protagonist. There is no overly forced intelligence in the plot, and the protagonist does not have the kind of psychological activities that look like a loser. There is ambiguity but no harem orientation (there is also a hint of CP in the supporting characters, I like it). The remaining thing that I personally don't like is that the protagonist's strength increases too fast (so fast that I can't imagine it and can't relate to it), so I skipped chapters when there were more than 100 chapters. After more than 70 chapters, I didn't want to read it. After all, too much fun will make you tired. But it's just my personal experience. Overall, this is a very good Naruto fanfic. Come on.

Everyone, I have read all chapters 119 of the novel. I can say that I really like what the author wrote. There is no bitterness or hatred, and it is cheerful, especially the interactive bickering between Senju Tobirama, the eldest brother, and the protagonist. Madara, the second eldest brother, watches the protagonist jump left and right in the shadows of Senju Tobirama and Uchiha Izuna, and Mito Uzumaki, the third eldest sister, thinks about herself. I feel that the writing is very good. The author also checked the information carefully and is very detailed. If you keep writing like this, you can be ranked at the top of the Naruto fan fiction rankings. My humble plot suggestion is, can I get Uchiha Izuna into the sealed space? You can also have a harem, but don't be a stud. The heroine and her characterization will affect the quality of the entire novel. The only drawback is slow updates and broken chapters! Especially when I wrote chapter 119, the chapter was broken! The author is born to be hateful. My evaluation: The ultimate food and grass, half a step to the pinnacle of Dzogchen. Worth a try. (Confiscated money, lightly sprayed.)

Be bold! You, a naturally evil Uchiha, how dare you do such a thing to Naruto! You dare to do this to the Hokage today, you dare to do this to the current Hokage tomorrow, and you dare to rebel the day after tomorrow! Must kill quickly!

The story that Uchiha and Senju have to tell:

I suddenly want to read a book where the protagonist of Naruto is Black Zetsu. For example, the One Thousand Years Planned by Black Zetsu really feels like there are too few things to do, and there are other continents in the ninja world, such as what kind of stones are used as energy sources, etc., And only the royal family can open them. In a thousand years, you can definitely find a way to create a large number of White Zetsu to monitor all ninjas. You can also create a country. Even if you create an underground world, you can develop technology, vigorously train ninjas, and bring a few babies from the underground. There is no problem. Uchiha Senju and Uzumaki's direct blood mixture. Bai Zetsu's various disguises. You can also bring various ideas of modern society and develop your own country in a hidden place. Bai Jue can monitor everyone and know all the unstable factors. Bai Jue can also transform and turn back into something like an elf. Everyone has one since childhood. Or only those with talent are eligible to receive one. Grow together. It can help treat people and save people. The ninja world has some back-ups everywhere. If they are strong enough, Kaguya will come out and formulate a plan to turn people into white Zetsu. For example, ninjas who are dying are eligible to be reincarnated as white Zetsu and accompany their descendants in the new era. The child turned around and asked where his father was, okay. The Bai Jue who accompanied you when you were a child was the one who changed after your father died, and he has always been with you. White Zetsu is under the control of Black Zetsu. Monitor everyone directly. If you don't do it on a large scale, it will be difficult to arouse resistance. Let people volunteer, and there will always be those who are dying and want to leave something for their children. And then we can protect the world for a thousand years in the future. Even if you are brainwashed, generations will agree with you. Looking back, Kaguya came out and was with Kaguya. Anyway, it was Kaguya's will that changed. It can't be regarded as a descendant, it is simply another self. There is no need to worry about betrayal, they are more reliable than Liu Dao's two sons. Be with yourself. Everything from thought, technology to ninjutsu must be developed. Go back and kill the Six Paths and find a way to take over the Pure Land. At that time, the high-end talents will live another life, and the mid-level talents will decide whether to become White Zetsu or go to the Pure Land to stay for decades. After the chakra is swallowed by the Pure Land, the soul is reincarnated, and it depends on how to arrange the reincarnation to easily produce talents. The last infinite Tsukuyomi grand genjutsu. Create a virtual world of ninja world. Many things are almost studied here and then tested in reality. Those on the lower end of the spectrum can be catered for virtually. You can log in and log out freely every day. The login time is calculated according to the amount of chakra. During the login period, the chakra is continuously absorbed. Instead of doing one-stop business, try to get a few sacred tree fruits. The tailed beast is too big to have problems. I will make an elf later, mainly for companionship. White Zetsu can accompany and fight and can also heal. The elf is responsible for the brain and cuteness. Research technology and come up with various potions. It can even be customized, and those who contribute the most can even revert to their ancestors, allowing them to live forever. Those with different ideas will depend on their strength, and they can go back to expand and transform new planets. If you have different ideas, throw them over and see what your ideas are. Allow immigration to other planets. Chakra is simply omnipotent. Even if you don't have ninjutsu of various attributes innately, you can still develop it the day after tomorrow, and you can be reincarnated. It can materialize, create shadow clones, and those with higher levels can create life through yin and yang. Those with lower levels, such as Chiyo, can resurrect the recently dead and give life to dead objects. Even if they develop well in retrospect. It's not unusual for a chuunin jounin to be able to use chakra to create souls. There is also a kaleidoscope of time and space. The earliest Izanagi is probably also a kaleidoscope. Later, it was studied that three magatama can be used, but the burden of three magatama is too great, and there is a chakra giant. In theory, kaleidoscope can only be opened. The result is that people know the theory. Magatama is also a chakra giant. For example, Madara Uchiha did it. He learned to build a ninja world version of the knowledge instillation machine. He could control the energy in his body a few times through genjutsu or genjutsu, so that he could experience the energy flow more. He studied in or in the virtual world of Infinite Tsukuyomi. If only Black Jue could do this. Looking back, all the ninjutsu and knowledge in the world will be controlled, everyone will be monitored, and their thoughts will be guided, with arrangements from childhood to adulthood. Even after death, the arrangements are well-arranged. The moon can use ninjutsu to create living space, and transforming other planets is not a problem. There are many stars. If the technology of the ninja world directly advances to collect solar energy and convert chakra, it is better than Otsutsuki's one-stop deal to find life planets in the entire universe. When these are realized, then go to other parallel spaces and introduce talents. The same talents will develop different things in different eras. If you don't want to have this person, don't let him go. All talents are needed, and we are trying to find a way to study the origin, similar to Orochimaru's fight for the body, but we are not fighting for the body. We are combining two identical people into one, and the potential, power and soul are doubled. The conditions are more stringent, and the same people must be willing. Otherwise, it will be chaotic and become Zero-Tail, which most people will not be willing to do. Even if it's another self, there's always someone willing. There are many ordinary mediocre people who want to change the status quo. Even if they are geniuses, their will and belief will not allow it. Going back to the Yin-Yang escape manufacturing system, it directly realizes the soul companion system. The private system can also perform dungeons and run out of food. The system energy absorbs the energy of the universe. Chakra can be used to convert energy and matter. You can input various data later and the system will transform and grow by yourself. When you grow to the peak, you will absorb the system by yourself. Anyway, you can do it by yourself. You can also keep the system. The system database needs to be updated. It is very difficult. Talent, contribution, strength. Updates must be made at Ninja World Headquarters. Others are emasculated versions and will be disconnected by default if they are not updated for a long time. How many years will it be automatically destroyed to prevent it from being obtained by enemies or other forces. He has been trained since he was a baby, and even the virtual world in the brain in the tank can be used to guide his thoughts. When he wakes up, he is set to be involved in space turbulence during adventures and appear here. There are quite a few Uchiha Uzumakis whose protagonists are Naruto and various others. I want to see the protagonist become Black Zetsu's or Kaguya's. What if Kaguya's personality and soul were split, and she traveled through time and became one of them, turned into a man, and slept with the female self? That would be amazing. There is also the ninja world sealing technique. If ninjutsu can do it, the sealing technique can also do it. The method of sealing the tailed beast can also be improved, such as continuously absorbing the opponent after sealing, and slowly strengthening the body. Add attributes and characteristics, and finally absorb them completely. Seal a White Zetsu, and then turn all White Zetsu's abilities and strengths into your own. Like Dragon Ball's Cell and Majin Buu, the sealing technique should also work. Find a way to absorb it more harshly. Don't keep living like a tailed beast. The people absorbed by the living ragdoll can still come out. You must absorb it completely like the first Buu absorbed Kaioshin. But instead of absorbing the soul, so as not to affect the character, you can also seal the dead object to absorb it, seal it with a stone, and the body will remain flexible and have the hardness of a stone when you turn around.

One thing to say is that this novel has already concluded when the Otsutsuki Rei Style is completed. There are extra chapters after that, and the protagonist has been replaced by Senju Tobirama. Basically, there is no need to think about it. Why are you all asking why he ran away without ending? Isn't it already over?

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Hey🤓☝️Finished the author who didn't set up the ending and made everyone's investment fail.

Since Black Zetsu has changed into a young girl, then it's okay for Uchiha Madara to change into a young girl and become a heroine

I watched 60% of it and cut it three times. The book is good, but I may not understand it a bit, but I still want to read more👀. What do you say about this book? The protagonist's personality is less charming (because of the plug-in, which requires manipulation), so there will be a feeling that the protagonist is wantonly toying with other people's emotions. But the protagonist also really defends some good people. No matter what the purpose is, I still like a good person. There is nothing outstanding about the supporting characters. It stands to reason that the author's writing ability is quite good. It really shouldn't be that the supporting characters are so unremarkable. There is a feeling that all the characters are trying to cooperate with the protagonist's performance. Due to plug-ins, the protagonist can obtain all abilities, but the protagonist is very eager to obtain stronger power. In the beginning, it was because I felt insecure, but I was actually able to beat Konoha White Fang. After this, the protagonist's abilities begin to soar. But because Ban has been paying attention, he has no choice but to need more strength. The war started, and people began to crazily acquire various ninjutsu, blood inheritance, bloodline, etc. At this time, they can actually improve their skills, so as not to lose the demeanor of a strong person. However, due to the plug-in, the protagonist has to show off his skills to gain power. This kind of high-handedness and using the soles of shoes to tease other people's emotions is not good, and it is a bit petty. A gentleman's deeds do not matter his heart. The protagonist is indeed doing good things. A person who does good deeds does not care what his purpose is or how much profit he makes. He must be a good person. But to be honest, there are some small flaws in manipulating other people's emotions. I still hope that the author will write better and better. For bookworms, I hope that every story of the author will be the new world that I expect. No one likes book waste. There is no author who doesn't want to make money. The stronger the author, the happier I can be. Come on, author

I want to see Kuro Zetsu pursuing Obito, but Obito still likes Rin, but treats Kuro Zetsu as a good friend, and Kuro Zetsu keeps "working hard" to improve himself and slowly pays for it. In a ninja war, Obito was besieged because of his arrogance about his own power. Then Black Zetsu died in his arms to save Obito. Before his death, he said some last words: "I am so unwilling to accept it. I have obviously promised myself that I can just watch you from a distance. Why can't I help but get close to you? If this is not enough, I will die in the flames like a moth chasing the light. It's so good to meet you." Isn't it reasonable for Obito to open a kaleidoscope? It's not until he loses that he knows how to stop and look back at what he has been pursuing. Obito, Obito, you are a hopeless bastard 😜😜😜

Uchiha Seishui(Izumi)

Hatsune Tobirama

If she didn't dig out Hikaru and become his wife, Tsunade would be almost done writing. Many heroines in Naruto novels have Tsunade.

Has the author encountered anything recently? It feels like both quality and quantity are declining. If you simply find it difficult to write later and are not fluent, you can refer to book reviews or the like, but it is not recommended to write more than the original outline. Either finish writing according to the outline, or re-plan and add additional content depending on the situation. It's not unacceptable to ask for leave (may it have an impact on the author's income? I'm not sure), but I hope that the quality and quantity can be maintained every day. Otherwise, if things are like this now, I guess I'll have to stock up a little more and watch again.

I have read both the previous one and this one. It should be the best Naruto fanfic in recent years. The plot, characters and characters are all top-notch, and they are definitely not bad. A story about Naruto is about one million words. The most suitable one is about a million words. I look forward to the author continuing to write Naruto fanfics.

Why did you change your name? Why not call it "Konoha: Cough, Fei Lama"

An interesting Naruto fanfic. After reading it, all I can think about is: "The inherently evil Uchiha/Senju"😁

I skipped reading because this author gave me a strange feeling of partiality to science. Let me make an inappropriate analogy: I basically get full marks in all subjects, but I don't do the subtle tasks that can be done with a little effort, add texture, and easily make up the number of words. He got a 100% perfect score on the most difficult frame, but he did it a little casually on the simplest filling? There is a framework where you let the readers figure it out and everyone wants to know you. The domineering character is exposed, but the author makes it a bit bland? I figured it out later... The author doesn't like to write about the environment (manually cover his face). At least when the character should be handsome, he doesn't like to write haha For example, Obito lost Rinna, read Aizen's classic lines to Black Zetsu, and Hinata Hizashi broke his heart to the clan leader After saying it, he was shocked and ended. There is no environment before and after the shock Obito is quite painful, but it is just a step away from the pain of washing kelp Aizen's classic lines are quite handsome, but there is no wind, moon, grass, glasses (wrong), hairspray hands (wrong) ), big beam of light (wrong), A finished speaking quickly, B responded directly with shock, and then ended, which was also a close call The tension in the Hinata family's heartfelt feelings was about to unfold, and they were about to become handsome - that's it! When they were digging their hearts out, they attacked collectively. After pulling out and shaking off their hands, those barking superiors were already incompetently furious with their faces pressed to the floor. Then Rizu said other words without even looking at them, looking at other places like that... Well, it's not haha, or it's just a last-minute kick There is a kind that obviously he can score 100 points, but he doesn't, and slaps three teeth on you 😁😁😁

I am an evil Uchiha kid (with a guilty conscience) (whistle

So happy! ! Write quickly!

What an evil Uchiha brat.

After reading Simultaneous Time Travel, I didn't get enough and wanted to see if there were any other books. I found out that I had read this book before, and I felt that my hobbies were quite unified. I thought, why are Tobirama and Izuna so familiar in the same body, haha

This beautiful book is all ordered. When will the new book be released? Don't be too eunuch.

Is it difficult to produce a new book after three months?

It was updated. Fortunately, you were not deleted.

Gout has been put aside for a few months. Let's get better soon. I vote 8 to support the fun in the past.