Bleach: The Sunny, Cheerful Big Brother

You didn't put any thought into the name of your protagonist. The ancestor of the Sifengin family - Sifengin Senni, The previous head - Sifengin Yorichi, The current head - Sifengin Yushiro, Obviously people give names based on numbers and time. The protagonist is called Sifengin Yilong? At first glance, it's a fake!

I'm really convinced. The writing is so silky, you are the one who was born to eat this bowl of rice! I'm really not jealous of you kid making money, no, I have to stuff money into it for you (I'm so speechless!) Look at this and add some finesse to it.

It feels a bit strange. What is the main line of this book? Reform Soul Society? The protagonist participated in every event, but I don't know what the purpose of the participation was. The impression I got from reading the whole story was that the protagonist turned away like a passerby and forgot about it. The protagonist's image was not successfully created, and there were too many Riddler plots.

AI painting - Si Fengyuan Yilong To be honest, the depiction of the shinigami in terms of the collarbone is okay

The author's courage is commendable, he actually dared to write about the god of death, which is very commendable...! I remember that my grades on writing about Death were really poor, no matter how good you were at writing it.

I have read more than 100 chapters and have no idea what the main plot of this book is. What is the main character's purpose? Is it for the Spirit King? To collect a harem? To stop Aizen? Even if it's just a vague idea of ​​becoming stronger, it's okay. Some plots seem reasonable, but they don't stand up to scrutiny at all.

It feels like Sunshine Boy is crazily trying to win favor with girls for Ichigo, and because Shiromao is an old father who only comes home twice a year because of his accident on the road trip, Sunshine Boy's real name should be Kuroki Ichiryu 😁

It's not a foreshadowing at all. It's a foreshadowing that readers tend to overlook when reading it. It's only when the secret is revealed later that they think about it. This book is simply written by The Riddler. It's just telling you that a story happened here, but I won't tell you.

The advantages are that it is very imaginative, even if you read a lot of Bleach fans, you will not be bored. The disadvantages are that the threshold is relatively high, and people who don't know enough about Bleach will be confused. There are many plots about the Riddler, and the author has laid some foreshadowings that are easy to understand. The character design of the protagonist is also average, and the plot develops too fast. It is a full-level account that has been developed for many years. All kinds of back-up protagonists have been arranged, and they are waiting for the enemies to appear and then concoct them one by one. It is easy to not write anything in the mid-term. After all, the Death map is not big, unless a new map is opened, but there is no foreshadowing in this regard in the early stage. The audience is too small, and the subject matter is not popular enough and the above restrictions make it easy to

Where is the sunshine and cheerfulness? Looking at it makes me want to sleep