
Naruto, Be My Son
鸣人,做我儿子吧
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Book List No. 3 in the Clouds
Naruto One Piece Thunderbolt Natsume Miko Daily Hunter Death God
A 10-Year Old Bookworm Who Loves Reasonable Two-Dimensional, Hard-Core Science or History.
Life is so hard, let's have some mental fat and happy water. I like happy and comfortable things, but refuse 🙅♀️Hei Shenzhen is disabled, life is so hard, I want to be happy for a while. 3 Stars means there are no major flaws. 4 Stars means it's good. I've been reading it. It's delicious😋. 5 Stars is a delicacy, at least the top in this circuit, or a single circuit. As a 9-year-old bookworm, these are all good books that I am currently following, or have already followed./(≧▽≦)/Absolute classi
✨My Reading Records Come from My Interests~welcome
Record some novels that you are satisfied with. It ignited my determination to write novels! Thanks for the quality novels and the writers who deserve praise. I highly recommend all the novels and physical books of "Three Days and Two Sleeps"! Highly recommend "Thriller Paradise"! —— I like most novel genres, as long as they are well written! ! ! If it's written in an average way, I don't really like slow-burning ones, and I really hate the harem! At the same time, I also don't like that in th
Find a Peaceful Harbor in This Impetuous Society
🦝Recommend some novels that you like to read and follow. 🦊Currently, I mainly like these types of genres: fandom, cultivating immortals, history, light novels, entertainment, solving crimes 🐰The main style is novel, casual, relaxed, three-dimensional, nonsensical, etc. With more positive energy in the traditional sense, rather than the poisonous chicken soup type. 🦭Recommended comments: Write more if you have time. If you don't have time, just recommend a book. Try to write down all the advan
Two-Dimensional Collection
I saw it myself and thought it was good
A Delicious Book List🍜🍜🍜xiancao Boutique Reserve
Book shortage? It doesn't exist... Say goodbye to book shortage and read only classics. This book list covers the magnificence of fantasy and heroes, the strangeness of urban superpowers, the depth of historical intrigues, and the brain-burning wits of Infinite Style. Each book is a masterpiece in the same genre. It has been tested by tens of millions of readers and has an explosive reputation. Just accept the order and save yourself the trouble of searching for books, allowing you to reach the
The Index of Forbidden Books of Five Generations of Demons. Come and Take a Look at Shu Huang. There Are No Poisonous Weeds Here.
It's just a banned book →_→How is that possible? You're overthinking it. If there are any categories you want to see, just leave a comment and I will add it.
A List of Books Collected by Twenty-Year-Old Bookworms
When I was little, I went through my grandpa's bookcase to read Sanyan Erpai. When I was older, I squatted in Xinhua Bookstore to read various classics. When I was older, I saved up money to buy Jin Ancient Martial Arts. I can't read all the books in my lifetime♥
King Wu Huan's Library
Record your daily reading, mainly the novels that you think are very good. You will also record some important plot points to avoid reading the book for too long and forgetting the previous plot content.
Good Novel
Collect relatively good books
Naruto One Piece Fanfic
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Private Bookshelf
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Advice for authors
The writing before Chapter 190 was good, but the writing after Chapter 190 was very contradictory. Naruto always said that he wanted to become Hokage, but from the beginning of his selfless dedication to make the village better, he continued to want to become Hokage one by one, but the approach was completely different. He ignored the safety of the village and ruined his face many times. Pirates have been used as a shield. For example, in Chapter 191, he ignored the kidnapping of the village and became a target for other villages and said that he was a pirate. In Chapter 203, Aunt Snake threatened to attack him and summoned the Ten Thousand Snakes psychically. Before taking action, Naruto also said that he would use this to threaten him as a pirate? After getting here, basically Naruto wants to become Hokage just like completing a mission. What he wanted to do after he wanted to become Hokage has changed. To be honest, I don't mind Naruto becoming a pure pirate or a massacre like Itachi, but I hate that he wants to become Hokage like now but does the opposite, very much like a hypocrite 😰
I have read more than 80 chapters, and most of the content is quite interesting, but the author always gives me the feeling that I don't know much about the worldview and characters.
It's neither Naruto nor Pirates, so it doesn't feel that way. The characters' speeches are quite dramatic, and the plot is boring all the way.
There is a problem that is not a problem!
If Whitebeard really wants to take some normal people in the Uchiha family under his command, how can he cure the common madness in the Uchiha family? As soon as the Sharingan is turned on, it enters the crazy mode and the black mode
I originally wanted to read the comments to judge whether it was poisonous or not, but everyone was arguing about the power 🌚 Looking at it from another angle, it proves that the author's writing is okay.
Ninjas can beat pirates even if they don't count as six paths.
To say that Whitebeard is more powerful than the Five Kage, let's first let Whitebeard surpass the Tailed Beasts. The Tailed Beasts have high mobility per person. All of them are monsters that can walk on water. The mouth cannon can destroy the island with a short charge of power. They can run and fly faster than small animals. Their chakra bodies are immortal. The defense can withstand advanced ninjutsu, steel does not break the defense at all, the Kyuubi can fire Tailed Beast Jade continuously, the Five Shadows are still super masters who can fight tailed beasts even if they are not the opponent of Tailed Beasts, Raikage is a super master who can suppress the Eight Tails, you let Whitebeard hit the Hokage? Pirates are physically powerful, but the weirdness of ninjutsu kills people with monotonous abilities. Who among the current pirate masters can surpass Obito with one eye? Ninja has low defense? That's because everyone is extraordinary, so each other can deal fatal blows to each other, just like Luffy was killed instantly by Thunder Bagua? Pirates don't have high defense but level suppression. They also have useless weapons and an armed color. But the armed color is not necessarily stronger than Kakuzu's earth spear. A combination of Hidan and Kakuzu can kill everyone in the pirate world just by thinking about it.
The most meaningless thing is Naruto's battle strength comparison. Naruto's battle strength has collapsed to the sky. Now I have a headache when I see Naruto. The classic method is to add more noodles and more water, more water and more noodles To be honest, the entire Naruto world has no logic. The Ninja Alliance is almost the combat strength of the entire Ninja world, with only 80,000 people Let's look at another defense. The hollow, just like this, can hold the entire population of the Land of Fire. In addition, Naruto is based on the Warring States period as a template. I will tell him his fate in the sky. The population of the entire Naruto world is estimated to be no more than 10 million Then, what is even more funny is that in order to compete for resources, a ninja war is launched, with a population of less than 10 million, and one world cannot fit in it? If the ninja world was the same size as the earth, let alone fighting, the death of a person would be a loss of productivity, and the resources would not be used. It is hard to imagine how millions of people could develop in America We can still fight, several countries are close to each other, and the surface area can be as big as the moon, it will not be like this Of course, the most heaven-defying thing is the problem of the upper and lower limits of Hokage. Let's talk about the same level first. The most powerful ones include the hexagonal city explosion and the hot chick being stabbed to death by kunai. The upper and lower limits can only be said to be astonishingly high The upper and lower limits of the same level are so high, and those of different levels are even more heaven-defying. The whole ninja The world's combat effectiveness division is like a standing dumbbell, with a complete fault in the middle. Add in the extremely disgusting lineage theory, and the entire combat effectiveness system is a mess. The people in Huoba themselves say that genius is greater than hard work, and bloodline is greater than genius, let alone geniuses with bloodline Of course, I didn't say fire. The shadow is weak, on the contrary, Naruto's combat power will become stronger and stronger. From Boruto, I can see that it seems that people don't want to end this IP, so the final result is that Naruto will become stronger and stronger, and may even reach the height of Dragon Ball After all, they are all aliens, so there is no problem in an interstellar war, right?
It's quite embarrassing. Pirates fans always use the untenable lower limit of Naruto to criticize Naruto (Hokage crossed the border in three days, but the 30 days in Mt. Myoboku were completely ignored, saying that there is only one continent, and the Boruto map was updated, and they still didn't recognize it. Why do Pirates fans have privileges? What else is Tsunade? The air-raid shelter is small, so there are few people. As a result, the population was after the Great Ninja War. The surface of the Ten-Tails was blown to pieces, and it was said that not a single person died. The planet's population limit is very small. The moon is not even ten kilometers away. Pain can use Shinra Tensei to make it bigger than the Death Forest, at least two. A ten-kilometer hole, six paths can't make a ten-kilometer ball? The most embarrassing thing is that Naruto can't run dozens of meters in five seconds. Look at the picture below, does Pain personally say that it is tens of meters? From Naruto's perspective, someone as small as Pain has to know the plot of Snow Country, right? Naruto is faster than a train, and Boruto is about the same speed as a Raid train, so the old-fashioned trains that Pirates fans ride on are slower than humans, right?) What's even more embarrassing is that Pirates fans never talk about their lower limits. Isn't this a perfect double standard? (Why didn't the pirates talk about hydrogen balloons going to space and aerodynamic wooden ships to the moon? I suspect that the moon is in the ozone layer of the planet and there is air on the moon. After all, people can breathe normally on it. Otherwise, the hydrogen balloons will explode in space and the aerodynamic ships will be unable to borrow) There is also the fact that the average number of naked pirates is higher than that of pirates. They are all blood cows, which makes me laugh. Ignore all the rookie characters who will die at the first touch. For example, the cool ones like Whitebeard don't have enough wounds on his body? Akainu only hit wounds, but the soldiers didn't hit them? Roger was also beheaded by a soldier. Haimi never mentioned this. I feel that Haimi himself is quite embarrassed... Isn't the most awesome Stair War God? Why doesn't Haimi recognize Kuina? Such a good character lowers your defense limit, so just treat her as if she doesn't exist, right? If you want to really compare combat power, it would be best not to set a lower limit, but to make a fair and just comparison based on the actual size of the earth. Otherwise, what kind of comparison do you pirates use? Do you use double standards? You can admit other people's lower limits, but others can't admit your lower limits? How old are you, I want you to think it, not what you think... I feel like sea fans are more special among people who like to compete in battle strength... Every time they make the comment area stink...😅
The writing is great. Whitebeard's pride is still unfinished in One Piece. The plot is fully expressed. The entry point for the integration of Pirates and Naruto is also very good. The emotional bond does not feel greasy!
I know there is going to be a debate in the comment section, but Naruto is stepping on the Shinigami every day in the debate forum, and now the Thousand-Year Blood Battle of the Shinigami has been animated. As soon as the weight level rises, Naruto loses to the Shinigami, the ten-tailed beast jade is about to be stripped off and Bakuoku is defeated. The six paths are at their highest on the surface. If I don't tell you that others don't have six paths, don't brag about it. According to the upgrade method of the god of death, the jade hand shakes the three realms. There are 80 trillion fans of One Piece Uta. Oda said it could be used as a drama. The world of Pirates is much larger than the real world, and all Pirates characters can be upgraded in scale. When the Virgin Flame Pirates were taken from the normal Earth to a super explosive country and a weak continent, they were almost the same as the Ten-Tailed Beast Jade. Now it has been exposed so much that the country is unstable. So don't get too carried away if you are a hot fan with superior combat power. Recently, you lost your pants to the God of Death and had your pants stripped off. There are many mainland provinces on the stacked boxes, and if there are no six stacks of ten tails, it will be good to explode the country.
Whitebeard is definitely stronger than the third generation, but he can easily be taken away by a set of zombie seals. The strength of the Naruto world is just a thin line, and he can be taken away with just one sealing technique. Moreover, the current Whitebeard is a 72-year-old Whitebeard with injuries all over his body, and his durability is not good. If you don't have chakra, you won't be able to rely on your original abilities alone.
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"Author, be my son"
I've wanted to watch this for a long time. When I was watching the anime, I fantasized about the story of orphans like Naruto on Whitebeard's ship.
Are you sure there are sit-ups per capita? Isn't it unique to the protagonist group and the BOSS group? Even though the pirate has a good physique, Garp was hit with an ax and his head was full of blood. Whitebeard's defense was broken by bullets. Zabuza held a kunai in his mouth and rushed into the enemy to kill everyone. He had dozens of knives stuck in his body and shot with a pistol. He was still seriously injured by Kakashi, but he could still crawl to Shiro. You said that ninjas have low blood because they still have basic vitals. However, pirates have biologically modified monsters per capita. Pirates are not a human world at all, but a world of genetically modified experimental subjects. There are very few pure-blooded humans.
Hello everyone, because of a certain Socrates, I will be Haichui from today on. From now on, everyone will call me the first Haichui at the starting point. Let's first take a look at the pirate's gravity. Hey, a hydrogen balloon goes to the moon, a broken wooden boat goes to the moon, where is the applause? Where is the cry? One Piece's Neptune Beast is 700 meters long and weighs 120t. In reality, the 30-meter whale weighs 180t, a gap of more than 20 times. It can be seen that the world of Pirates has a density of hydrogen. Is it so awesome that it is invincible to the point of being criticized! ? The pirates have a huge civilization, 10 kilometers long, the size of a death forest, who else? In which other world can a civilization of ten kilometers be considered huge? Aren't pirates awesome enough? The maximum speed of a pirate, the world record for teleportation, 100 meters only takes 4 seconds! And Yuebu, who cannot reach this speed, can actually fly! The world of hydrogen is something you can only imagine, but you can't do it without him. wahhhhh, so cool! Thank you Socrates for letting me see such a wonderful world of pirates. I will continue to work hard to play pirates in the future. Of course, if anyone likes pirates, as long as you play pirates every day, you will be my good friend! 😡
Many people must have been slapped in the face.
Still think the third generation is hateful?
I had no idea how powerful Whitebeard was. But Whitebeard in his heyday. The third generation will definitely not be able to defeat him. 🙂 I simulated a perfect victory over Whitebeard and his shock space in his mind. I simulated the third generation again 🙂 and it seemed like I couldn't beat it 🙂
Whitebeard should be larger than the digital shadow, just an ordinary shadow. But ordinary Madara or Hashirama are much larger than the five shadows combined (the comprehensive cooperation will definitely be able to produce at least seven shadows, after all, if the cooperation is good, 1+1>2)
Some people say that Whitebeard is a mobile natural disaster, which is okay, but forget it in old age, Tailed Beast Jade is better
Combat strength is indeed a problem. Fortunately, Whitebeard's strength can still suppress him in the early and middle stages of Naruto, but how to fight against the Super Shadow and Six Paths in the later stage? The upper limit of Naruto's combat power is currently higher than that of the pirates, at least higher than that of the Yonko level like Whitebeard. In the later stage, when facing the Six Paths Class and Otongmu, Whitebeard's strength is completely insufficient. Should Whitebeard be allowed to transplant Otongmu's bloodline or become the Ten-Tails Jinchuuriki?
What can be compared? Madara would transform even if he was touched by Tangtang in the pirate world.
The Naruto world is so backward and twisted that even clans like Whitebeard have made progress.
I can't say that your character creation is very similar to the original work, right? It's almost exactly the same! Well written and worth reading
Naruto is almost turning into Whitebeard's dog.
The pirate's combat power must be stronger than that of Naruto, because of one thing, Naruto is finished and finalized. Pirates is still being serialized, so you can add settings as you like. When you fight Im in the future, you can't beat a second awakening or even a three, four, five, six, seven or eight awakenings like your Hokage.
Anyone whose fighting ability can cause a fight is definitely a genius.
My words are not as good as one dragon ball, and I can't even get through the Saiyan attack chapter.
I was attracted by the title of the book and read it in one sitting😲! I am a girl who has only watched a few episodes of One Piece and Naruto anime with others, and I obviously have no interest in these two series😦But I am already deeply attracted to Whitebeard at this point in the book. This man is so charming😍I decided to watch the anime. If the book is not as good as this, I will be really angry😠
This is a bit interesting. As a veteran pirate who was abandoned in the war and a ghost figure who has been following the anime since it was only twelve episodes out, there are all interesting elements here. Let's collect and keep it first haha
Well written👍