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I have read a lot, so I left a book review mark. The writing is good, I give it 8 points. Although there are rough spots, the flaws are not hidden. In my opinion, this is a new book by a newcomer with very personal characteristics. If it is polished well, it can become even better. The content is very sophisticated. I think the author is the legendary folklore student abroad. If you like detailed descriptions in this aspect, you can jump right in. I think the mysterious world that appears from time to time is simply a treasure trove of this book. It's wonderful, every description and every background is very thoughtful, I like it very much! ! ! I even think that I can just stream Invincible. I can watch it as long as the protagonist comes into contact with these events one by one and solves these events one by one. (Similar to Sherlock Holmes, you don't need to have a background in the main conspiracy) The protagonist's character is also very good, and it really gives me the feeling of a student from the Dragon Kingdom studying in a foreign land. That kind of nervous and exciting use of one's mysterious ability, groping for use in the dark jungle, each ritual is also sophisticated enough, I love it. The shortcomings are also obvious. The first is the language. It has personal characteristics and is not very detailed. Sometimes there are redundant details. There is also the paragraphing. This author needs to consider it carefully. In some places, the paragraphs are too scattered, which makes people read loosely together and cannot bring in the atmosphere. Also, just absorb more. I can't put it into words, but now I don't feel as relaxed as reading online articles. This is one of the reasons why the author is not so popular. The summary is that it is a book with a setting and a very detailed background. With more polish, it still has a lot to offer, right? !

Personally, I value the plot more than the writing and some details. The plot of this book is quite interesting in the direction of various myths and mysticism, and the author is also quite good at making jokes The richness of the background setting is based on the existing stories of various civilizations. It should be quite interesting. I will give it a try!

I tried poisoning it a little bit for future reference. The poisonous points of this book are: the writing is the same as the machine translation, the dialogue is half Chinese and half English, and the dense bombardment of proper names. If you want to start reading, the learning cost is extremely high.

It's not impossible to change from road stories to farming stories, but to be honest, I have no interest in black people, Rwanda and Africa. I think most people should be the same 😵

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I always feel that many of the words and sentence logic in this book are very similar to English. I feel that it was written by someone who has been in an English environment for a long time. Is the author overseas?

Dear author, I found that there may be some problems in your writing. When I read the chapter about the battle with Efron, I found that the purpose and reasons for the protagonist's battle and killing were very unclear, which would lead to the collapse of the protagonist's character. For example, we could not distinguish whether he was a moral person or a person who killed wantonly.

The protagonist of this book is an aborigine, not a time-traveler. The book is written like a time-traveler.

Just read the first 80 chapters, but in fact it starts to fall apart from chapter 60. The author is obsessed with the setting of the road novel, but ignores the truly attractive folk customs. Some of the settings are inconsistent, and the main line becomes increasingly blurry. By the 100th chapter, only the creativity is still noticeable. As for the protagonist, his personality is not established at all. Each character creation was only touched upon briefly, and immediately changed to another angle at the slightest touch. In the end, the image of the protagonist remained vague for a hundred chapters. It's a pity that the first thirty chapters can be used as more interesting urban ghost stories.

I would like to ask, is the author a foreigner? It feels weird, but I can't tell what it is. It feels a bit like when I was chatting with a friend of mine.

The first volume can basically be regarded as the first season of the light novel. It has some exciting points and some poisonous points. Overall, it is very good. The overall plot almost speeds up from the Thunderbirds chapter, and the conflicts are almost constant until the final battle, which gives me a sense of completion. Of course, it can be seen from the first volume that it is basically setting up and foreshadowing, and all the big forces basically have no end. At the end of the volume, the approach of introducing all the big forces by breaking all the foundations is quite bold in my opinion. (Are you too extreme? Jpg) Compared with the way most online articles use the method of "changing maps" to make a smooth transition, the author's arrangement can be said to be quite retro and extreme🐶 ps: For readers who have not seen the end of the first volume, I can only say, stick to the end of the volume, it is very exciting, you must read it 😄

One thing is that the plot stage selection is inappropriate. Why don't you set up a different world? The writing feels okay, but the stage takes place in the Yankees. You have created an overseas student character for the protagonist, and are you planning to join the official organization of the Yankees? It is better to directly set the rebirth with white skin and yellow heart, so that there will be nothing wrong with you joining the official team. But, now it seems awkward for you, an international student, to join a Yankee organization. You need to know who the reader is as the protagonist. To be honest, a book like this cannot pass because it will invisibly dissuade too many readers. I retreated first. This is my problem, not the author's. I look forward to your next book.

Let's turn up the heat! 🤭🤭🤭 Longlong's book covers a wide range of topics and is 100% on the same frequency as this occult enthusiast! I have seen book friends say it looks like a computer translation, but I personally feel that it is not that exaggerated. The translation accent is a little bit, but it does not affect reading, and it is not necessary to treat it as an exotic flavor. In fact, the text fluency and accuracy far exceed the level of most authors from Qidian. Some book friends said that the setting of this book is relatively restrictive and may not be understandable, but it can actually be regarded as a way to increase the mysterious atmosphere. After all, the twelve main gods here do not completely correspond to the real gods, and it is no problem to read it as a self-designed one. There is no need to understand some documents or nouns (because I can't understand them). As for the mythical creatures and jokes that appear (which I have an impression of), other book friends and I also conducted Magic Pu in the Duan Commentary, so the reading threshold is not a big problem! Please feel free and bold to try reading, and don't be discouraged by Shennong. At least give it a try before making a choice! Also, the protagonist team is a rare team that does not have intrigues but is united. The characters are also very charming, which can be regarded as a clean starting point! The villains are not particularly clever. If there are any violations, they are compromises made in order to pass the trial (pointing fingers). The setting is unique among all the cheats, and it integrates well with the world view. In terms of updates, the roughly stable frequency of two updates a day is a relatively reliable one. Generally speaking, for friends who are not particularly familiar with occultism, this book can be used as a guide to get started with occultism. For friends who are occultists themselves, reading this book is like looking for Easter eggs in the grass. For me, this book is at the level of personal fairy grass, so I still hope that more friends can read this book 😚😚😚Don't be easily persuaded by Shennong!

You must continue writing. Without this book, Wadasi!

I shamed you 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭, 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Where is my captain? 😭😭😭😭😭😭Where is my cross talk group?

What can I say, increase your efforts! The myths and stories from around the world are almost endless in themselves, plus the unique settings, there are more to come!

All Rangers all start start start! And this one - [Forest Ranger]!

Damn it! Bata! Sizhuang! Da fairy queen. I have wanted to draw it for a long time, but I forgot ()

I have the cover of this book.

Our Lin Anzai, maybe, maybe, probably, should, need to have a simple vertical painting.

Fish backup: Zomo Rabbit Mixi and 50+ hats Lin An with ponytail (

Lin An: Let me return to Commerce. JPG .

Mischi Fairy Ring Bigger, better, stronger Fairy Queen (not)

Good books always leave me, woo woo woo (´◑д◐｀)

I couldn't sleep after drinking coffee in the middle of the night, so I got up and touched a few pictures. The pictures in order are Simon, Melissa, Lin An, Caroline and Vanessa.

Why isn't it updated? I think it's beautifully written.

[The mixed thoughts I had after watching Invincible Heroes before taking a nap and the update... It's very exciting, so I'm sharing it] [*There is no connection with the original plot, and the characters are different] [Possible characters include: the protagonist of this work, the high school student mixed-race alien Lin An (systemless version), AKA "Ghost"; good gay friend Sanchez, who is a variant of who is unknown, a gay man of aboriginal descent; a tech nerd who develops spaceships in the basement Sister Sasaki Aiko-chan; super detective neighbor Xiao Ruan classmate (male); the beautiful girl "Sugar Bomb" Migard with the ability to travel through space; the alien father "Emperor" Professor Lin Hainan who looks like a hero but is actually a villain; Ms. Adelia, an ordinary person with a weak sense of existence; the still living angel Admiral Simon Lloyd; other superheroes and passers-by] [*OOC warning, persecution character warning] Lin An stared at the sky blankly. The stratus clouds were once broken by a certain figure, and the supersonic flight created a hole that penetrated the sky. Sunlight streamed down from this gap, shining on the young man's face, like a Pre-Raphaelite oil painting. "Hey, are you okay, buddy?" Sanchez bumped Lin An's lower back with his elbow, recalling his distant thoughts. "Oh. It's a nice day today," he announced calmly, leaving his friend confused. "Are you really okay? You have been absent-minded since last week. Do you want to finish class... Oops." Sanchez's chatter was interrupted by the paper ball thrown by the teacher. Lin An sighed, picked up the paper ball that bounced on his desk, waved his wrist, and the wand hidden in his sleeve slightly slipped out, and the air flow carried the paper ball and flew towards the trash can in front of the classroom. Ten rings, right on the target. "Oh, show off!" Sanchez muttered a few words in a low voice, buried his head in the textbook, and pretended to listen carefully. As for whether he was holding an international affairs textbook or a baby care manual for home economics class, the teacher would not care. However, Lin An did not hear his words. His thoughts went far away again, through the cloud tracks, to the other side of the earth. The "Emperor" is standing on the top of Mount Everest. He was always used to looking at things from a high place, and this inaccessible highest peak in the world happened to be a perfect place for contemplation. He was thinking about many things. The recent murder of the Earth Guard, his responsibility and mission, his sacrifice, and most importantly - his son. He was born for the expansion of the empire. The Commerce Empire is the greatest civilization in the galaxy. It should be an honor for these lower-class residents to be part of the empire. If his ancestors hadn't arrived here and spread the seeds of Komus radiation, the earth would not have been able to develop even a trace of mysterious power. In order to collect the twelve candles needed for the coming ceremony of Comoth, he personally killed the ignorant heroes and collected the spiritual essence flowing out of their bodies to use it as fuel to refine lamp oil. This is certainly a risky step... Thanks to that nosy Lloyd and the damn detective from hell, Adelia has begun to suspect him. That pet-like woman, his wife, is of course expendable, but his plan also requires the help of their son. At least for now, in order to stabilize his son's condition, he could not suddenly take action against Adelia. Now, in addition to the silver candle of the goddess with the lamp, he has made nine candles. As long as you get another mythical dream master and a legendary dreamer's medium, you can quickly complete most of the ritual arrangements. He has already found a victim for the Lord of Dreams. Simon Lloyd... One of the military's trump cards, the leader of the task force, and the person most likely to rise up against Commerce's rule in the future. As long as he is taken down, the remaining chickens and dogs in the military will no longer be his enemies. As for the dreamer, it is also easy to solve. One of his son's friends, "Sugar Bomb", seems to be the legendary dreamer medium, who can use the halo to travel short distances at will. Let Lin An deal with her personally. The "Emperor" seemed to feel the faint spiritual gaze coming from the distant shore, and couldn't help but smile with satisfaction. His son will be his most perfect helper on his journey to establish the second Commerce. "Please, you must be hiding something from us!" Sanchez pursed his lips and poked the scrambled eggs on the plate hard. Sasaki Aiko kicked him, and the purple carbon fiber exoskeleton wrapped her body, making her petite body reveal the ferocity of a giant beast. "... I'm fine." Lin An drank the milk carelessly, ignoring the concerned look from Migard, "It's just that he has been a little too busy recently. Lack of sleep, I guess." He has indeed been a little too busy recently - after the incident of the Earth Guard, he had to take up his post as a new generation mage, and as the son of the "Emperor", "Ghost" must do better than others in order to meet people's expectations. The seeker of knowledge is not an ideal medium who can improve in his dreams. He already spends more time studying the Encyclopedia of Magic every day than he spends on his studies. However, a recent unexplained heart palpitation made everything worse, not to mention that even a blind man could see that there was a crack in the relationship between his parents. Moreover, the deeper he goes into the world of the mystic, the more he feels his isolation. It was for this reason that he gave himself the codename Ghost. The more he got, the higher the radiation value, and the more his thoughts drifted away from reality. It's not that he can't feel the worries of Sanchez and the others, but some kind of more detached rationality makes his thinking as cold as steel, rejecting the approach of his friends. They will do little to help you in your grandiose endeavors... Mortal interference will only make your mysterious path more difficult... You are destined for a greater path... Shut up. He thought hard, I am on the greatest path, and my friends will remind me not to go too fast. "Your face doesn't look good. Maybe you really need to take a good rest, Ann." Migard drank the juice in small sips but quickly. A few drops of juice slid down the corners of her mouth, but before they touched her clothes, they were brought back to the juice box by a flash of pink light. It's no secret among the heroes that Sugar Bomb and Ghost attend the same high school. But for ordinary people, it is better not to know the secret of the hero. Lin An's subconscious seems to be more patient with this friend who is closer to him on the road. His attention finally returned to the dining table, and he raised a shallow smile: "Okay, don't worry, I will have a good rest." When Lin An opened the door to the house, he did not expect such a scene at all. At first he thought there was a thief in the house. The lights were not turned on, and the broken crystal vase and red wine spilled on the floor made the restaurant look like a murder scene. The fermented smell of wine seeping into the floor was mixed with a certain bitter salty taste, which reminded him of the ubiquitous smell of blood at crime scenes. Until he heard a low sob coming from under the open wine cabinet. "Mother...?" He asked tentatively, and his sobs stopped unexpectedly. Adelia, a strong woman in the railway company, was curled up like a baby in the corner of her restaurant, her hand cut open by a glass shard. Lin An suddenly realized that the smell of blood was not an illusion. For a moment he felt that this was a dream, as if his mother should not show such a... Vulnerable side. Part of him mentally laughed at the powerlessness of mortals, while another part of him ignited a calm rage. "What happened?" Of course he had a guess, but he didn't want to make a final decision before hearing his mother's own admission. Adelia raised her red and swollen tearful eyes, her always dignified and elegant demeanor disappeared at this moment. "It's... Your father..." She grabbed the hem of Lin An's clothes and her fingers were as hard as strangling someone's throat. "It was him... Who killed... The Fairy Queen... Fenrir... Angels... Witches... Those heroes..." "He deceived me... Deceived us... For more than twenty years... That hypocrite..." Followed by a series of sobs, "He is a tyrant who deceives the world... You must stop him, Xiao An" Prevent the format from being broken and put the picture version:

It's been a year. I probably won't come back.