The Mortal's Path to Immortality: The Tale of Li Feiyu, Ancestor of the Dao of Fate

He's been tested for poison. He's dead. You, a mere mortal who practices martial arts, learned magic without even cultivating qi? A martial arts sect has cultivation techniques? But nobody practices them? Even Doctor Mo knew to test the techniques on cattle and horses. Jin Guang can unleash a fireball that makes martial arts masters kneel and kowtow.

I've seen quite a few people criticizing the book without even reading it. I've read dozens of chapters so far, and it's actually quite enjoyable. So far, there haven't been any particularly bad parts. Anyway, I listen to the audiobook, and I haven't felt the urge to stop and criticize it halfway through. Consider this a heads-up for fellow readers.

I thought the comment section on QQ Reading was quiet enough, but it's not much better here... I came here specifically to give feedback. The description of the protagonist battling a divine master to seize a magical treasure from Tianlan Mountain was far superior in terms of power compared to the comical depictions of tens of thousands of jin (a unit of weight) in the original work.

Han Li has been exploited rotten by these authors. If I were to say, if Han Li were to travel to the modern era, would he skin these authors alive and refine their souls? 😁

I really can't understand why there are always novels where the protagonist presumptuously reveals things about the future, and it's not just a slip of the tongue, but a frequent occurrence. Besides making others think you're weird and mentally unstable, what's the point of this? Advancing the plot? Is this some kind of flirting? No way, no one would actually like someone who asks random questions all the time.

The original text says that even in the spirit realm, the five spiritual roots are the best. With your five spiritual roots in the mortal realm, it's going to be tough. (886)

There are many women in the story, but it doesn't feel like a mere chronicle. It shows that I put effort into it. However, once there are too many women, there's not enough to write about, and some are selectively omitted, such as the first wife, Zhang Xiu'er.

He's already the Lord of Destiny, what's there to be afraid of in Han Li? He can cuckold whoever he wants.

Author, could you please revise the first chapter? It doesn't matter who gave it the cheat code, even if it's from the future protagonist, but could you please stop writing things like "a idiot's destiny" or "the Dao Ancestor"? It makes the story feel like the current content is just a joke about the future protagonist. There's no need for that, bro!

Good, good, not bad, a harem is great 😃