Mortal: I Am Xiang Laomo

There were people who wrote Xiang Zhili before, but I was poisoned. I was speechless when a big boss in the transformation stage of the gods specialized in becoming younger and became a licking dog. What the hell is a god in the stage of licking and practicing qi and foundation building? But I still want to write about the harem. If I lick every one I see, I can just accept her. If a big man in the transformation stage wants to take a concubine, the juniors will be very happy, but he lowers his status and cultivation level to become younger to lick her. I really can't understand why these authors are so mean? Ugh... After that, I was particularly disgusted with the plot in Qidian where the boss rejuvenated himself...

It is recommended not to bring in some colloquial words when writing, such as "Okay, anyway, to be honest", and appropriately reduce similar complaining words. The more these things are, the more inconsistent they will be, just like self-pleasure, which will make people laugh 😥

Brother Fei, I have some suggestions that I hope will be adopted. The protagonist is already invincible to mortals. In fact, he can take other routes, such as Chaos Star Overseas. The original description is that one cannot easily set foot without cultivating the gods. This leaves a lot of room for writing new stories, such as fighting against gods and monsters. I arrived in a country outside the sea, and found a way to the spirit world in this country. Of course, this method can be real or fake. It needs Fei to develop it slowly. Generally speaking, the Sea of Stars is the most exciting part of mortals. I hope Fei can make good use of it.

So far, the only friends I have seen who traveled through time to become Han Li are his sister, father, and his sister and mother. I hope an author can write and let me collect them all.

Two whole maps of Yue

Mortal resources are too few. Otherwise, why would such a Mahayana person not be able to ascend to the immortal world? There are just no resources. Do you think people are not willing to practice both Dharma and body? And use Xuantian's treasure or something. Many people even do evil things to survive thunder tribulations. Why are you still thinking about ascension?

How to write Xiang Zhili? I'm looking forward to it. The previous book about Xiang Zhili was criticized miserably. The author should go read it and avoid lightning.

The update speed is too slow. If we update it once a day, can we increase the number of words and describe more, which may not necessarily advance the plot? It is too short and weak, author.

Author, don't be so quick to write about the spiritual world. I prefer reading the human world.

The plot of Chaotic Sea of ​​Stars, soliciting suggestions and supporting roles! Book lovers are welcome to participate, and the author is not pretentious. If you have any good suggestions or ideas, you can leave a message. I don't guarantee that I will adopt it 100% of the time, but I will listen to it at least 80% or 90% of the time.

Yellow Maple Valley, Picture of Ancestor Linghu

I also have thoughts and want to open another mortal fanfic.

It's a good idea, but it's a bit confusing 🙂

There was a book about the Gift of Xiang in Qidian before, but the protagonist later killed Han Li.

The fanfics you wrote are quite toxic, and you even complained about the comic book adaptations.

The author's hobby is that you can have fun, but if you want to make money, this book is basically useless.

A time traveler is a time traveler, please don't do it. The author, I've read the legend called The Mortal's Gift before. Please don't do it. Also, it's not good for an old man to look like a gift to Xiang Zhili. People love beauty, so let him regain his youthful appearance after all in this period. Lin Huashen still has at least 1,200 years to live before he reaches 2,000 years old. The old man looks like the original Xiang Zhili who dressed up like this in order to keep a low profile. Since you are not Xiang Zhili but just wearing Xiang Zhili's skin, I don't think it is necessary to follow the original character.

The author himself feels that Dayan Jue and the external incarnation are very suitable for the current Xin Ruyin, and it can be said to be an opportunity to change his skin. There may be many book friends whose understanding of the secret art of external incarnation is only at the level of clones or 'advanced puppets'. In fact, this 'advanced puppet' can also train itself and is more maneuverable than a simple clone. This alone can allow people to change their skin and be reborn. Zhang Tie in the original work was actually refined according to the requirements for refining his external incarnation, but Doctor Mo and Yu Zitong who refined him did not know it. Ordinary corpse refining or puppet mechanisms do not have the function of self-cultivation, and they cannot allow monks to take over their bodies and be reborn. Once the original body has an accident, you can use your soul to seize your own external incarnation. Chapter 337 of the third volume of the original work mentioned that after the body of a monk in the alchemy stage of the Yuling Sect was destroyed, he took away the bent soul left by Old Demon Han in Jiayuan City. If Old Demon Han hadn't come to kill his soul, he might have been able to change his skin and be reborn. Readers who want to know more about the specific introduction of external incarnation can refer to Chapter 373 of Volume 4.

Update

Others write novels on a daily basis, but you update on a monthly basis this week.

Scanned from the rankings. Very fresh perspective, feels good!

Build a building specifically for book friends to point out mistakes or poor writing. You can even share your good suggestions in this building!

I don't understand why every author who writes about mortal fandom insists on Dayan Jue? ? ? ? You all know that this Dayan Jue practice will be a trap in the end, right? ?