Live Forever in the World of Mortals

I feel that the protagonist is a bit pretentious. He is a mute boatman. You cure him and you still have to control him for the rest of his life? Make him immortal? Forced marriage? Damn it

The author has a glassy heart. If you don't like it, just leave silently. Don't scold me. If you scold me, you will be banned.

I didn't understand the introduction. What does it mean to establish the Immortality Gate again, and to completely change the entire world's path to immortality? From cultivating immortality with resources to comprehending the Taoist heart and so on?

Originally, I was invincible if I kept to myself, but in the end I gave up because of some cravings. I had to go out and wander, which caused some trouble. So what does the Five Poison Sect or the Great Xia court have to do with you? You have practiced silently for three hundred years. I guess the dynasties have changed and you have to get involved in such nonsense.

Immortal immortal seedlings. The protagonist lives forever, has no way to protect himself, and travels around the mortal world. The writing is delicate and the structure is smooth. Read it, don't die.

If you don't have the emperor's life, you have to worry about the emperor's heart.

Most of the ones that haven't been updated in a day or two have been cut off.

The character of the protagonist in these two chapters has been a bit broken recently, which is strange.

Don't let the monetary system collapse in the later period. A group of people in the Qi training period actually have so many spiritual stones.

I came here because of the chicken, and I have heard his story. Author, don't be sucked to death

The subject matter is very good. It's just too wordy. Explain again and again.

I just subscribed to a chapter and found the eunuch. What a bad luck.

The author has the same idea as me and if there are few resources, then he should reform it. No one in the longevity novel dares to think about it! What kind of fantasy is that?

It's okay, it looks quite natural. It would be nice if the writing improves and it seems more natural. Some parts look more deliberate.

I don't know why, but the latest two pictures feel weird. Is the protagonist's character a bit biased?

Author, you must finish a novel in order to grow. If you don't get good grades, you can cut it off. You can only gain the experience of being thrown into the street. How many books have you written to become a god one by one? ? ?