I Opened the Immortal Gate in the Tianlong Song Dynasty

This setting of God's Will is too awkward to appear in a world with low martial arts.

This set of world consciousness really puts good books into the middle and low-end. The world of heaven in the prehistoric world does not have your world consciousness.

Not bad, not bad. In fact, there are many areas for development of chakra and the sacred tree. I have read a lot of novels about the chakra of the sacred tree. They all focus on skills, ninjutsu and power. Everything they have is in the original novel. Maybe in the eyes of Xiaozhi, these powers are very powerful, but in my eyes In the principles of our Chinese theory, these are all about technique rather than Tao, let alone other things. I remember many comments saying that the essence of the sacred tree is to plunder the information energy of life on the entire planet, breed fruits, and obtain the possibility of the entire planet. In fact, it follows the path of omniscience and omnipotence.

This providence has really lowered the standard of the book

The author's imagination is OK, but he lacks mathematics and common sense. Tell me that a ball with a diameter of a hundred miles is divided into 3 parts, each of which is 10,000 feet? Could this still be a mountain? That's outrageous

The idea is very good, but the writing is not particularly fond of it. For the Otsutsuki clan, all kinds of pulling and stepping are actually quite boring. This thing is to let others see that you are better than Otsutsuki, but the protagonist written by the author does not feel that he is better than Otsutsuki? It's boring to still despise Otsutsuki.

It was pretty cool at first, but gradually I got tired of it, and it felt like the protagonist was overdoing it. It's just a bunch of nonsense and manipulation for a minute.

I found that many people think that the protagonist has a double standard for Otsutsuki, which is obviously a wrong view. First of all, Otsutsuki is a bandit. They use the sacred tree to plunder the energy of the planet to destroy the world. The protagonist uses the sacred tree for sustainable development, allowing the sacred tree and nature to progress together.       ，，，；，， As a passer-by, the protagonist bravely fights bandits and harvests trophies. This is a good deed that brings both fame and fortune. Some people in the comments said that the protagonist stepped on Otsutsuki to enhance himself, but the protagonist was just telling the truth. Rokudo and his two sons have brought trouble to the ninja world for thousands of years, causing countless killings but have not yet completed the unification and failed to realize their original intention of changing the world. But it takes the protagonist less than a hundred years to surpass them and do better than them

The male protagonist's ability can now wash the surface of the earth. Bao Xingnu feels that it is not impossible if he works hard. He hopes that he can replace the consciousness of the planet. The consciousness of that planet is always against the male protagonist every time it appears, and it has no power. It's quite disgusting. Moreover, it is a world of low martial arts. There is no such setting in the original novel. The author created this setting in a world with low martial arts. It feels weird. I hope there will be less descriptions of planet consciousness in the future. If you can't defeat the protagonist, then describing the alienation of the protagonist later is not deliberately alienating the readers.

The previous setting of the will of heaven is poisonous, but the later idea of ​​creating a martial path is quite interesting. The question now is what do you want to write about next? Continue to improve the martial arts system, and then the protagonist will take a new path? The road of chakra is already invincible in this world and is indeed the road to immortality. It would be superfluous to pull out the flowers later. For the natives of the Tianlong World, what is the difference between the Six Paths level or the Da Luo Jinxian level? You can't go back to Naruto World to take revenge later, right? Do you still want to change the map and become the flow of all heavens and all realms? Let's be direct, reduce the plot of the protagonist, and use it as a background board and plot advancement. Mainly write about how the original characters have changed after they have new martial arts paths or new martial arts stories. Or open a small account and go to the original plot to pretend to be cool and write cool articles.

It's still a bit too procrastinating. This was in ancient times. How could there be so many people who were not afraid of immortals?

Can't read. . . There is a lot of nonsense, and then there is a planetary consciousness, which gives the protagonist various restrictions, and uses half the page to force Lai Lai. He has the force of a strong man, but he does childish things. It is just like joking. What is the use of this force? Goodbye author

A sixth-level person, in a low-level martial arts, gives a lot of reasons to make himself logically reasonable, and then also talks about various restrictions. You will recover your strength at the beginning, just collect the sacred tree and directly develop Mars. If the tone is so high, how to write the follow-up? Forget it, let's not talk about it

It's nice to look at, but don't belittle Naruto's combat power. If those martial arts masters fight ninjas like this, they probably won't be able to get through a round. Note that this is talking about the strength of a sweeping monk and a ninja. A jounin can kill instantly with just one illusion and a teleportation.

The previous cross-border treasures are gone, only the key plug-ins are left. What the hell is the world's consciousness forcibly suppressing the protagonist's actions?

What is heresy? Those who deviate from the Dao are called heretics. How can you still prove the Dao? Prove what?

? Is your internal strength so good? If you are in a world like the Black Mountain Old Demon, forget it. A mere Tianlong can boast like this.

The will of the planet can copy the sacred tree, which is nonsense.

The author's description is really problematic. The protagonist has obviously demonstrated various means of catching stars and the moon, but these martial arts students still feel that they can challenge the protagonist. That's not what happens after gaining strength! You are so hungry that you could eat a cow. That is just your adjective. You also know that you can't eat it. But these people in the Tianlong Babu have high martial arts skills, so they must be realistic! What I said didn't sound like bragging, but I really felt like I could challenge myself. The gap is not between Snake Tunxiang and Ant Tunxiang, but Ant Tunxiang still thinks he can do it. This is obviously not in line with human common sense.

I feel that the author is very tired when writing, and he must have run out of ideas. He wrote 8 chapters in 10 days, and they are all watery. The plot of the story has not been advanced at all. I suggest that if you have no ideas and stop updating, you can open a single chapter to explain it. It will be understandable. Play it for a few days or a week, sort out your ideas, think about the outline, etc., And then write after you think clearly.

Where was the author reincarnated?