Laying Low in the Cultivation World, Adding Stat Points to Become an Immortal

The plot of the new chapter feels inexplicable. Does anyone really think that cultivators and mortals are equal?

The protagonist's natal flying sword is too casual, too trashy. Just any sword is his natal sword? What kind of rare and precious materials was it forged from? Or is it a supreme innate treasure?

Chapter 55 begins the dual-world travel, allowing the character to travel back and forth between Earth and the cultivation world. Do you guys think this is a flaw?

A cultivation novel spends almost 50 chapters, from chapter 15 to chapter 40-something, writing about the mortal world. Is this what you read when you read a cultivation novel? It's not like the "survivalist cultivation" genre, where if something happens in the cultivation world, you can retreat to the mortal world to survive.

The most common interaction between cultivators and mortals is limited to sects accepting disciples. Would a cultivator not be tempted to kill and plunder? Especially in Chapter Fifteen, "Entering the World to Seek the Dao"? The idea of ​​establishing a Dao Heart is incredibly awkward.

It's better not to write it, it's really embarrassing to read.

Cultivation in the past was all about ethereal beauty and lofty ideals; now, leisure is all about money-making, cutthroat competition, jealousy, palace intrigue, and the same old workplace drama.

The writing style, logic, and thought process are all good, but the plot and imagination are lacking, especially from the beginning of the Great Qian Dynasty.

Feel free to leave a comment below if you have any good ideas or cameo designs.

Chapter Seventeen describes the plot of a movie.