Now That I'm a Goddess's Husband, Who Needs a Superstar System

The book is actually a good book, but it was spoiled by the author in the early stages. The secret dragging and crazy interpretation at the end immediately put off most readers. After more than 100 chapters, the pace picked up and they were basically readable.

Dad's Literary Life and Yang Xiaoluo's Cheap Dad are very well written, and the author was very high-spirited at the time. The last two books were almost finished, and they were not too good, so I just finished the book. As a result, the results of the next few books were not so good. The setting of this book is not bad now. Come on, I hope the author can return to the top.

She's already over thirty, and like the fairy sister, her body has passed its peak state. When a woman's body begins to deform rapidly, no matter how well you protect her, there is a big difference between someone in her thirties and someone in her twenties. Wouldn't the author write her age a little younger? , Twenty-seven or eight is fine,,,

Another suggestion: I suggest you adjust the way the mother-in-law is written. Today's young readers are basically less able to be wronged, and they don't want to be oppressed. If it were me, it would be difficult for me to endure my mother-in-law being so mean and mean for a long time. I guess it's hard for young people to tolerate it too. Therefore, it is recommended to reduce the mother-in-law's satire on the protagonist. During this period of time, she wants to accompany the heroine to experience life. Then let the nanny secretly observe and the mother-in-law stand still. After the male protagonist gets the remuneration from the literary website, he can take the initiative to communicate with the mother-in-law, which can relieve some of the mother-in-law's emotions. Wait until the TV series is released and becomes a hit, then communicate to get rid of the remaining emotions. Prejudices formed over a long period of time cannot be reversed in one communication, but require continuous communication in the middle. You can't expect to wait for great success before communicating to eliminate bias. It is possible that even before success, prejudices and contradictions have accumulated to the point where they are irreconcilable.

1. The heroine's age setting of 35 already shows that this book is not very long. 2. The male protagonist is equivalent to a bride-in-law, and is ridiculed by the mother-in-law. 3. There are no children after marriage. I don't know when the author plans to write about pregnancy and childbirth. The heroine's age will increase by one when she is pregnant in October. There are fewer and fewer roles to play. How many resources can be used to buff the heroine. 4. For the male protagonist to have a system, it must be the director and director, and he must be strong enough to lead the female protagonist to deal with the mother-in-law's routine, which is a perfect template for the Dragon King with a crooked mouth. To sum up, the character settings in this book are too much, and the crooked-mouthed Dragon King routine is too much.

A little suggestion, please speed up. How many chapters have you written for a 12-episode drama? Make it more concise and write only that much for the filming plot. Is it important for the plot of the young actors behind you? It's too procrastinating to write these all the time. 😅 Will it take so long to write a drama later? People who read your book either want to read entertainment stories, which are too slow, or want to read love stories, and they keep writing about filming plots, which makes people not so happy.

It's too inky, and the pace is super slow. I've finished filming about 100 of the first TV pictures given by the system. This is not filling in water, it's like filling in some words into the sea from time to time. I can't read it, a lot of boring and useless descriptions. There are also various useless branch lines that interrupt the rhythm, and the proportion of branch lines is too heavy. Also, it's too licky and disgusting. The advantage is that the setting is good, and the first TV I chose has a good connection with my actual situation, but the writing is not that exciting. Just licking my mother-in-law hard, and a little bit of Stockholm, suppressing me for half my life. The words "be careful not to be deceived" actually made the protagonist burst into tears. Is he sick?

1. The first drama was not completed until Chapter 109. 2. There are a lot of descriptions of shooting details, which are very large and boring. 3. There are a lot of plots in TV dramas that make readers want to watch the TV series again in the book. To summarize the above three points for new book friends, please weigh whether you can tolerate it before deciding whether to continue reading.

Does anyone know if Qidian has a function to block authors? I didn't finish the first one and was forced to quit.

What the hell, is this a superstar system? This is clearly a dog-licking system. It's too poisonous. You should go to a female channel.