Now That I'm a Goddess's Husband, Who Needs a Superstar System

The book is actually a good book, but the author messed it up in the early stages. The subtle dragging and the crazy interpretations later on instantly deterred most readers. After more than 100 chapters, the pace picked up and it became readable.

"The Artistic Life of a Stay-at-Home Dad" and "Yang Xiaoluo's Cheap Stay-at-Home Dad" were both well-written; the author was quite ambitious back then. Both were completed when they were nearly finished and didn't feel padded out, resulting in their later books not performing as well. This one, however, has a good premise. Keep it up, and I hope the author returns to their peak.

She's over thirty, still calling herself a "fairy sister"? Her body's past its peak; it's the time when a woman's body starts to change rapidly. No matter how well you protect it, there's a huge difference between a thirty-five-year-old and a twenty-something... Couldn't the author have written her age younger? Twenty-seven or twenty-eight would have been fine too...

Another suggestion: the way the mother-in-law is portrayed should be adjusted. Young readers today are generally intolerant of being wronged or stifled. If it were me, I would find it difficult to tolerate such a sharp-tongued and sarcastic mother-in-law for long. I suspect young readers would also find it difficult.

1. The fact that the female lead is 35 years old clearly indicates that this book won't last long. 2. The male protagonist is essentially a son-in-law who marries into his wife's family, and he is even ridiculed by his mother-in-law. 3. There are no children after marriage. I don't know when the author plans to write about pregnancy and childbirth.

A small suggestion: speed things up! How many chapters have you written for a 12-episode series? Be more concise. Only write so much about the filming scenes. Are the minor actors' scenes later on important? Keep writing about these things; it's too drawn out. 😅Do you really need to write this much for the next series?

It's so drawn out, the pacing is incredibly slow. They've already filmed the first TV series given by the system (around 100 frames), this isn't just padding, it's like adding words to the ocean every now and then. It's unwatchable, with long, boring, and useless descriptions. There are also countless useless side stories that disrupt the flow, and the side stories are overemphasized.

1. Filming for the first season didn't wrap up until chapter 109. 2. It contains a large amount of detailed descriptions of the filming process, but it is rather dull. 3. The book contains a lot of filler TV drama plots, almost making readers want to watch the TV drama again within the book. To summarize the above three points for new readers, please assess whether you can handle the workload before deciding whether to continue reading.

Does anyone know if Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) has a function to blacklist authors? I gave up before I even finished reading the first chapter.

What the heck? Is this a superstar system? This is clearly a simp system, it's too toxic. You should go to the female-oriented genre.