I Turned Down Tsinghua’s Graduate Recommendation and Trained My Way Into the Military

Helicopters are one thing, after all, it's the army. What's the point of all this for you as an officer? Now you've got fighter jets, so how about destroyers and submarines too? Next time, why not just fly out of Earth and into space? Instead of focusing on your duties at the grassroots level, you're busy with these fancy tricks. I think you're writing about a "king of soldiers," but in a while, even that won't be as good as "king of soldiers" anymore; you'll have to call yourself a superman.

The army isn't like the armed police coming to arrest criminals; that's when the armed police are deployed. If they don't have enough personnel, the army will switch to armed police uniforms. This is politics.

1. It's too padded. The protagonist's awesomeness and such are repeated every time a new character appears, and there's too much repetitive plot about the protagonist encountering something or ending up in the hospital. 2. There are too many merits outside the military camp, making the protagonist seem less like a soldier.

The latest chapter, number ninety-six, states that, frankly, such a situation would be absolutely impossible in reality. The recruits have only been in the company for a month, and they are being sent out to carry out a blockade mission, facing armed bandits. If something happens to the recruits, who can bear the responsibility? Sending a recruit with a broken stick is just sending him to his death.

You've been working on a practice exercise for a month and still haven't finished. Why do you think your grades are so bad?

It's getting increasingly complicated. The first movie only had a high school diploma, the second upgraded to Peking University, and this one is a Tsinghua University graduate student. I won't watch the next one unless it's an Ivy League PhD.

I thought it was just another copycat article from the studio, but it turned out to be surprisingly good.

It seems they gave up on the guaranteed admission to graduate school. The school doesn't care whether you get guaranteed admission or not; they'll take it or leave it, there are plenty of other students coming anyway.

Basically, it can be summarized into three issues. The first one is too padded, especially with its excessive use of bread-like data to pad the word count. It also likes to randomly insert plot points, disrupting the flow of the story and significantly impacting the reading experience. Secondly, the author clearly didn't understand what to include and what not to include.

Could the main storyline be less forced? There have been over ten incidents, all involving the protagonist. Please reduce this kind of plot. It's already written as a special forces story; officer training, advanced studies, and strategy should be the main focus. Merits outside the military should only be occasional.