People Write Diaries in American Comics, and Iron Man Collapses at the Beginning

The front is fine, but the back is a retelling of the original plot, like taking stock of marketing accounts. Why compare with marketing accounts? Because the author wants to have enough words and deliberately spoils the Marvel characters, the entire diary's speaking style and tone are like a marketing account shouting at the audience, which is not like a diary at all. Putting aside the actual plot development in the diary part, it can also be described as poor. It can be said that the biggest problem is that the protagonist is like a camera and a broadcaster, with no sense of participation.

When Thor knew that he had his head shaved and one eye blinded, and then his favorite hammer was crushed, the most important thing is that because he did not cut off Thanos' head, half of the population of the universe was wiped out. After regretting it, he gave up on himself and became a fat nerd. The protagonist just thought about it. It happened in an instant, but the blow to Thor was huge. The most important thing was that Asgard was destroyed, and there were not many Asgardians left. Asgard's technology and magic were no longer inherited. When people died, books were destroyed, and the remaining people lingered on the earth. Will Thor practice ax skills like crazy? Will he let himself be illuminated by a neutron star to practice his divine power? Will he be inspired by the protagonist to use training methods from other worlds to train himself, such as the gravity chamber in Dragon Ball, to train every cell in his body?

You are obviously speaking from your heart. Who would write in a diary like this? It's embarrassing and hilarious, and I can't watch it without using my brain! ! !

When Fury knows that SHIELD should be called Serpentine Shield, will he be angry to death? When he knows that taking in aliens will be detrimental to the earth, and considering that few things he has done are good, what should Nick Fury do? He can only pray to Captain Marvel or ask Asgard for help to destroy Serpentis Shield and the Skrulls.

This novel can be a hit. Who is watching? It was quite awkward from the moment Tony got the diary to Chapter 6. The protagonist also introduces whether this flight recognizes the master or not. Your diary is for you. Did the author fly from somewhere? Isn't Qidian good at writing novels with growth and storytelling? Or is this a novel on a reading platform.

How is the author able to connect diary keeping and fighting criminals? I don't understand

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to worship the master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Xueer to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, marries Qian Renxue, and violently abuses Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look. Just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

Why fight against criminals again? The United States itself doesn't care about crime, and SHIELD doesn't care about street crime. You're the only one who travels back in time to fight crime. Are you mentally ill?

Who would write a diary in the way of writing online complaints? The content of the diary does not look like a diary at all. It is full of spoilers, which is too deliberate.

It's hard, 50% of the content is writing diaries, spoilers, and complaining about the plot of the movie, 40% is about the characters being shocked after watching it, and then continuing with the same plot as the original, and 10% is about describing the protagonist the same with or without him.

After reading thirty chapters, I can see that the author does not know how to write diaries, but only novels and story outlines.

To scold your boss, a foreigner, with Chinese language? Can foreigners still understand it? Write a diary of a few hundred words, and the diary is not written in Chinese or English. A few hundred words in Chinese means a few hundred words in English. A few hundred words in English may be thousands of letters. How do you calculate your source point consumption? In terms of English letters, your origin point is not enough. In terms of English words, the protagonist, a Chinese who travels to the United States, will immediately know English? Still slipping like this? Can you write a diary in English? In terms of Chinese, Stark is an American. If you play with the pronunciation of Chinese characters, can he understand Chinese? Logical flaws can be seen everywhere.

The main character's appearance is the biggest poisonous point, it's too embarrassing

Alas, it's just a shocking article. Isn't this the same plot as that one where the protagonist plays a superhero movie to a superhero? First, everyone is forcibly reduced to intelligence, and then the protagonist pops up to show off his superiority. The problem is that the writing is not good, and there is no tone of foreign language. Books on this type of subject will not last long. Let me tell you this, I don't understand why there are still novels on this subject now?

In fact, the role of the protagonist could be smaller. Although it is not much now, it could be smaller. Personal opinion.

Isn't it true that this fine product of yours wasn't created through brushing?

Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. Goldfinger was clearly given by Stan Lee. 2. The protagonist is exposed at the beginning. Although it is still a bit forced to drag out the plot, it is better than other diary streams where no one can be found. Let's talk about the shortcomings: If you want a protagonist in a diary stream, just write it and see the reaction of the diary. It's better to just read other Marvel fans to see how the protagonist is showing off.

I am very curious about which bedding author developed the diary stream. This type of diary stream is as real as a bird. This kind of diary flow, and also the kind where the whole world knows that I am a master, but I don't know, is disgusting to watch. These two writing methods are really like the sea water of the four oceans, they are really good for drinking.

Why are there so many diaries and heartfelt messages like this?

If you can't make it up, you'll be a eunuch. It's so disgusting.

This kind of writing about vegetables next door may be popular.

Brother, finish it. You are writing here and copying over there. You are copying without making a sound and your grades are good. Re-open the book.

Broken? If you want to write more, just do it. If you don't want to write, just ask for leave and do some knitting?

That's disgusting, eunuch

Is this the end of the book or the eunuch? I see there is one in the last chapter (End)

I found that many authors stopped updating for no reason since issue 4.1.

The book is ok, recommended and submitted I am just curious when the protagonist will know that others can see his diary.

Why did I write a chapter and then stop updating it?

New Mexico is a state, Thor 1 took place in a town in New Mexico, not a New Mexico town, and it destroyed the entire New Mexico, which is nonsense.

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...