All Worlds Spoilers Group

I feel that the protagonist's worldview is incorrect, some characters' personalities are too bad, and the dialogue feels like a person talking to himself, without any personality.

I find your division of realms strange. It's not as precise as cultivation or the division of immortality! Easier to understand! . Well, let's start with the star rating, (that's okay too! You can sort it out yourself!) One star, two star, nine star. After all, I haven't watched "One Punch Man" and I don't know about (dragon level) (ghost level). What level is it? How do you compare it with cultivation, martial arts, and immortality? I can't tell the difference without a sense of substitution. A little dazed! When will we achieve a clear state of mind! We still have to wait until the prehistoric times or the higher world to unify the realm! (Big Thousand World, Middle Thousand World, Small Thousand World, High Martial Arts World, Medium Martial Arts World, Low Martial Arts World, Age of Ending Law, Ordinary World, Science and Technology World, Science Fiction World [Contains black technology, it's science fiction anyway!]) Actually, I don't really understand it. Maybe my world division is not very good, but at least it is relatively clear! I think I can understand it this way!

There are so many protagonists, believe it or not, I won't watch it. The protagonist, this creature, can be said to be at a heaven-defying level, but you come to a cheat chat group. What does Pindao think of this? Let's talk about someone like Su Ming, the protagonist of "Seeking Demons". Besides, wouldn't it be nice for Aizen to join the group?

How should I put it? It feels a bit mindless and cool. The combat power has collapsed so seriously that I think so.

Group friends always work for the group leader! The Savior vest does not match! How can an ordinary person be called a savior! It's okay if you pretend to be a boss. But why did you directly reveal that you are an ordinary person? If you don't use other people's abilities, they are useless, so you can't upgrade them? Are there no group members who are powerful enough to convince the crowd? When the group members are all virgins? It's just forcing wisdom! To be honest, if one day the members rebel, what will you do to resist? Can't beat but can only run? 😰

This article has good ideas but poor writing This is specifically reflected in three aspects 1. The description of the characters is distorted In this type of article, what most people want to see is the interaction between the protagonists of each work, rather than just a name. For example, the image of Captain America created by the movie is resolute, calm, and full of a sense of mission, with a bit of old-fashioned and American humor. However, the author did not portray the character's personality in the article at all, and also made the characters in the article lower their intelligence. Almost every character is easy to be happy and angry. There are many similar articles. Why can other authors portray characters so deeply in just a few lines? This is an obvious difference in writing style. 2. Logic issues of the plot This is something that many articles should pay attention to, that is, the logic of the plot. First of all, it is unrealistic to compare the strengths and weaknesses of various works. Even if we compare the expressiveness, there are some that have extremely high settings and poor expressiveness. Naturally, everything is still based on the author's setting, but you can't be inconsistent. The setting is like this at the beginning and then changes later? Then why did you work so hard on the settings earlier? 3. Insufficient control of "cool points" This is relatively abstract, and I can only give you an example - the most classic pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot. The protagonist is provoked by a villain, and a high-status or high-level expert comes. The protagonist makes a bet with the villain and wins the opponent. Then the opponent says "impossible, he must be cheating." This kind of plot can be placed in fantasy or urban settings, but if you put it in an invincible novel, it will inevitably lose its luster, because it will make the protagonist look petty and lose his character. The premise of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is to use the information asymmetry of the other party to gain a sense of suppression of IQ and strength. If you are the protagonist of an invincible novel, then you are invincible and why are you pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger? Isn't it a bad taste?

People from the Fairy Sword World can be resurrected in the Naruto World. If you use reincarnation to resurrect in the Fairy Sword World, there is some logic.

Another act of pretense, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. In the chat group prophet routine, why can't it be directly stated that the protagonist saw them in comics, movies, and novels? Why do you have to act so cool! Bad review Bad review

Actually, can you include Wu Liuqi... Super looking forward to it...

I hope the author can distinguish between good uses of land. There are many places in the article where they are used incorrectly.

The content feels a bit monotonous and too straightforward.

Why is the title of this book so similar to the Zhutian spoilers group?

I'm coming, I'm coming. I just started reading and I hope the author can express my feelings when writing... Don't be like a chat group repeater machine where all members can read a sentence one by one to complete a chapter... Oh!

I'm flying too! As a reader, why is this book so familiar? It turns out to be flying! Does the author of the previous book think that the readers are fools? Take the background, or even the setting, of someone else's book, and then rename it, and change the character's name as well.

Recent opinions: Opinion 1: (poisonous point) Too little regard for villains as villains, villains are like little soldiers in lol who kill on demand. Viewpoint 2: (Poisonous point) Too much downplaying good and evil, handling things at the level of primary school students, thinking that good is good and evil is evil, which is contrary to common sense. Viewpoint 3: The group members are extremely harmonious. It's already 2020 and take a look at the group chats you have joined. Every group chat needs a few thorns. Otherwise, what are the management and group leaders doing? View 4: If I have a problem, you can help me. If you have a problem, I can help you. Why help? What about reward? Just say thank you and that's all? Just kidding. Humanity is worldly! Humanity is worldly! ! Humanity is worldly! ! ! Do you understand? 😱! View 5: Do you think good people are really good people? If you kill all the bad guys, will there be no bad guys left? Are there no more bad guys? Pindao guesses that you can't understand this: "Look at the mountains, they are mountains, and the water is water. The mountains are not mountains, and the water is not water. The mountains are still mountains, and the water is still water." Viewpoint 6: What do those protagonists who are going smoothly come in to do? (For example, in Douma Cangqiong, the protagonist himself is not a good bird. No, the whole world has problems.) What do you want to do if you force a golden finger on it? In Pindao's eyes, it's better to play the protagonist than to play some supporting roles. In Pindao's opinion, the protagonist himself is nothing more than a troublemaker. For example, a family, sect, or dynasty that has been operating for hundreds, thousands, thousands, or tens of millions of years. If you were the master of that family, sect, or dynasty, would you be angry if you were turned upside down by one person? Do you hate it? But what can be done? He is the protagonist, the son of destiny. Do you want reconciliation or hostility? Reconciliation is destined to be criticized by thousands of people, and even your power will be defeated by the protagonist. If you are hostile, the protagonist will run away for his life. If he is strong enough, he will come back and kill you. How do you choose?

Well! Pindao is all set, but Xiao Yan is a little unhappy Please give me more details ⒈Don't say goodbye to the harem, don't say goodbye to the stallion. Once an abandoned book is discovered. ⒉Don't mess around. For example, in "Zhutian Spoilers Group", you kneel down and lick the protagonist. "Spoilers of All Heavens" shows signs of a stallion harem that I can't stand anymore and have given up on. ⒊The halo of the protagonist should not be so strong, and the IQ of the supporting characters and villains should be online. The above is just my personal request, so don't worry about poverty. Just after reading that novel, Pindao felt nauseous just looking at those stallions in the harem. He couldn't stand it anymore, and it even made Pindao gag. So Pindao kindly asks the author not to appear in the above three points. No matter how bad it is, Pindao will pursue it🙏🙏🙏

I hope Black Little Tiger from The Seven Heroes of Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit, Stark from Death God, The Great Sage from Journey to the West, Sha Qianmo from Flower Thousand Bones, Whitebeard from One Piece, Yang Guo from The Legend of the Condor Heroes, King Zhou from Wu Geng Ji, and Yang Jian from The Lotus Lantern Prequel will join the group, because they are all miserable.

Why do so many people hate Xiao Yan now? ? In the original novel, Xun'er has been protected by Ling Ying since she was a child. How could Xiao Yan enter without Xun'er's permission? The original book said that Xun'er came to Xiao's house to spend his childhood, but actually he came to get the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jade, but later he fell in love with Xiao Yan. One wanted to experiment with fighting spirit, and the other wanted the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jade. When it comes to Xiao Yan's character, I just laughed. As a son, he was filial to his parents. Xiao Zhan was arrested. How much pain did Xiao Yan suffer? As for what you are talking about about flirting without marrying, in the original novel, Xiao Yan is a person who traveled through the past in modern times. Monogamy is his duty. Xiao Yan likes Xun'er. Cai Lin is just an accident and modern people are responsible for it. You just talk about the hardships Xiao Yan went through on his way to becoming emperor? In addition to touching Xun'er's bones when he was a child, where else can Xiao Yan be black? He repaid his kindness, never betrayed his trust, and even saved the world. So why should we blame him? If we were to do it, could we do better than him?

I'm sorry, but I'm just a student and can't order them all. I have some suggestions. Whether you accept them or not is up to you. In fact, you should distinguish the levels of power systems in different worlds, and there are some things about certain people's abilities. For example, Magneto actually controls not pure magnetism, but electromagnetic force, one of the four basic forces. It does not require metal to use it, and the points in your group seem a bit cheap, Magic Nezha in Children Comes to the World is not as strong as in myths and legends, and when Hela was beaten to death, Odin was described. He is very powerful, even when he is old, he is still strong, and he cannot have the strength of his youth when he is old. It seems that Asgardians get stronger as they get older. When they get older, their bodies cannot bear the strength, so they lose the strength of their prime. Moreover, the good and evil in the story seem to be too clear. In fact, there are still a lot of gray Colorful, and there should be incompatibility when traveling between worlds and using items from another world. Different worlds will have some different rules that cause different items to not be able to exert the power they should have in the original world. For example, the six gems are the rules of the Marvel world. They are so strong. If you go to other worlds, they will not be so strong. Or if you give a setting, for example, the linked world will assimilate the rules at the first time. Otherwise, maybe the group members are not interfered with by the world rules, and when looking for group members, the world rules have been stripped away from the group members. There are also many characters who should check more different information and settings in their settings when they appear. I have seen that there are so many questions now. You can decide for yourself whether to adopt it or not. A word from a reader

I don't understand what the author thinks. As an author, I have a world view of a primary school student. In One Piece, Red Dog is really a good navy. If he kills Red Dog, what kind of world view is this? The conversation was completely unintelligible. Compared to Kizaru and Aokiji, Red Dog is really a good navy and soldier.

Reward, please ask Larry Eddas, Nanocore

Not bad. I voted for two recommendations. I hope you stick to them. I have collected them.

I can still read the previous ones, but where is Xiao Yan? The whole team knelt down and licked Xiao Yan. Can a fighting saint defeat Thanos? You are sure that you won't be killed by a palm, let alone a machete. Even Captain America's shield was chopped to pieces. A fight breaks the sky, what kind of space are you talking about? What do you say about mutants and aliens?

The combat power system is a bit broken, especially in Naruto, Nagato was not that good at first, but when he saw that Qingyun Dogen came in Chapter 39 and couldn't beat Nagato, it was a bit too much, right? To be honest, the ninjas in Naruto are really not strong. Not to mention that in other Naruto, they basically rely on their feet to travel. In Zhu Xian, people can fly. In Naruto, living a hundred and eighty years is a long life. In Zhu Xian, it is normal to live hundreds of years. Also, have you seen the author of Zhu Xian's moves? Learn about the four great sword tactics of Qingyun: The True Sword Controlling Thunder Technique: Jiutian Xuansha. Transformed into divine thunder and brilliant heavenly power. Lead it with a sword. The true secret to killing ghosts and gods: vast world. The righteousness will last forever, not to kill immortals, but to kill ghosts and gods. The True Secret of Sword Leading to Canglong: Nine Heavens Canglong, Devouring Heaven and Earth, Divine Weapon Sword Leading, Eternal Immortality. The true secret of ice falling from the sky: nine days of pure cold, ice crystals thousands of miles away. It summons ice from the sky and falls to the earth. The reason why the skills in Naruto are great is because the cost of comics is low. You draw a circle with a huge fire ball on the ground and black it out: If you write a hundred meters deep pit on the side, the huge fire ball will directly become an S-level. Not to mention the reincarnation of the invincible dirt. The dirt can be reincarnated in Zhuxianli Tianyin Temple and a rebirth spell can kill you.

I was speechless after reading Chapter 24. Sonic is weak compared to Saitama. Who is Saitama? He is truly invincible, a master who can jump from the moon back to the earth in one jump and defeat the Star Cannon with one punch! I think it's normal that Sonic can't beat Thor. Thor has a wide range of attack skills. Even in the era of Hammer God, there was Avengers 2. Thor's performance of destroying cities one by one, not to mention that Odin's father might not have paid attention to him when he was alive. Are Hulk, Neptune and others worthy of talking nonsense to Sonic?

It's really disgusting to see this episode about Pirates. Who is the good guy between Phoenix and Whitebeard? All of them are bad guys with piles of bones! Just help them fight in the navy? Just because it's Akainu? What the hell kind of outlook is this?

Is Japanese animation so good? What's the use of Japanese martial arts? I hate everything about Japan. Write about Japanese anime characters to persuade them to quit.

If you want to write, just write something purely Eastern or purely Western, write about the East and the West, neither fish nor fowl!

After reading a few chapters, I really want to send a blade to the author. You promote Ninjutsu so much, but do you know that Ninjutsu was born out of the Yin Yang family in China?

It's time to leave. Reading this book will make you want to curse. It's like treating the readers as noobs.