Prince of Tennis: Black Glory

To put it simply, you're giving Seigaku a cheat code, always focusing on Seigaku. Why don't you just write about Seigaku then? Goodbye.

The protagonist is utterly despicable. He insists on going to Fudomine, and not only does he keep aiding the enemy, he keeps becoming a whetstone for others.

The Black Legion... Fudomine doesn't have a single genius. Even Tachibana Kichihei is far inferior to those true geniuses. How can you compete with others? Even if you forcefully cheat and win the national tournament, can you let a bunch of mediocre people replace those geniuses in the world championship?

Speechless. I've noticed some readers complain about the protagonist's strength and want to suppress it. Honestly, the protagonist of this book is the weakest I've read in tennis fanfiction. He loses frequently and gets humiliated. Leaving aside other tennis fanfiction protagonists, even the anime's Ryoma Echizen improves incredibly quickly, as does Kintaro Toyama, and even Ryoga Echizen, who's…

Assessment complete. It's not good; it's purely wishful thinking on the part of the author. You want to maintain the original flavor of Fudomine while also letting Fudomine achieve glory, but you hesitate and dare not do anything, not even dealing with that bunch of scoundrels in Fudomine. What are you writing? Not to mention the protagonist's power level is so low, how can he compare to others?

Wow, there are only a handful of talented people, and only a handful of strong teams. Not only did they send a top talent to Seigaku, but they also went off to start their own team, leaving themselves without any subordinates to strengthen their opponents. Even if Fudomine manages to gather its members a year later, their talent will still be mediocre.

In just a few dozen chapters, Akutsu was first sent to Seigaku, then Tezuka's injury was healed, then Fuji was encouraged, and then Hyotei was helped to break through his strength. The author often writes with a fan's mindset, constantly trying to rectify tragedies from the anime, instead of writing a story based on the protagonist's own experiences in the original work.

Main character: I want to rebuild the tennis club. School board member: I disagree. Main character: Why? School board member: Because you injured the coach I hired. Principal: The tennis club still needs to be rebuilt. Or maybe we should find someone else to rebuild it. School board member: Yes. However, he cannot participate in any tennis club activities. Main character:!!! The school's senior management unanimously agreed. The End.

You've already messed up the story. The only way to win is to force a power boost for your teammates later on, otherwise you can't beat Seigaku and Rikkai. Their talent is higher than yours, and their training intensity is no less. Why should they lose to you? Let alone the likes of Kamio and Ibu, who can Tachibana Kichihei beat? Tezuka, Echizen, and Akutsu all easily crush him.

After reading for a while, to be honest, this book isn't good. The main problem is that the author made the protagonist too awful.