I Fish for All Worlds Beneath the Heavens

I just started reading, and I hope the protagonist won't mindlessly fawn over Xue Mengjun. His life is already in his own hands; he's being threatened into painting, putting his life in danger. I've read similar novels where the protagonist is first threatened by a woman, then forgives her because of her beauty. This protagonist has a cheat-like ability; what woman can't he have?

Sigh, another protagonist like this. They're clearly not smart, but the author insists on making them seem incredibly intelligent. However, because the author's intelligence can't keep up, the writing ends up being neither fish nor fowl.

The cultivation techniques and realms are too crudely described, and the differences between the techniques are not explained. The protagonist's cultivation also feels scattered, and it seems that one can reach the third stage of Body Forging simply by piling up medicine?

Your description of fishing across the myriad realms failed to capture the thrill or give the reader a sense of superiority over the natives. After all that fishing, it turned out to be a trivial skill. There were hardly any truly powerful techniques or items; all you saw were incomplete sections. The direction was wrong. Your portrayal of the myriad realms became like a children's game with the natives.

Is this some kind of fishing astronomy game? I don't see it. He only fishes occasionally for quests, and then he goes to other martial arts sects to learn skills. Isn't fishing more appealing? Why does he have to fawn over others to find enjoyment in fishing?

This isn't fishing, it's more like a journey through time to the West. I've got a quest system for you.

No, you're a disciple who fell from the sky, with no reputation or connections within the sect. What makes you think you can become the sect leader? You want to clarify things but don't explain. Your writing is clichéd and you add toxic elements. Even a small fish like that is released by your characters. You've gone down such a wrong path but don't know how to correct it.

Making an incision in the heart area means carving a groove in the heart? Will this kill anyone? How could an ordinary person who time-traveled manage to make an incision in their heart without fainting? Can anyone offer some explanation? Is it beyond my understanding as an ordinary person? 😵

Bad review! This is a misleading advertisement; it's not a genuine fishing post.

It's a pity. If it had been written like the previous fishing story, depicting a reclusive master, it would have been quite nice. The apprenticeship part, however, falls into a cliché. Not very interesting, I'm leaving.