The Layman Is a Witch

The feeling is still the same. I have read all 2 of the author's Witches, including this one. It can be said that the chaotic logic and nonsensical order are the author's style, but this one is still too depressing. Like the previous two books, the protagonist is always being ignored. The final explosion is understated, just like a reservoir with only a small water pipe. It is very frustrating.

It's really too chaotic and disorderly. You might as well just write about troubled times.

In a story about torture, the whole city came to whip the protagonist for three days. The last time I saw it, it was still like Liu Bei.

It's still a familiar smell. The protagonist is a psychotic virgin. He can't kill decisively. In addition, anyone can shit on the protagonist's head.

The writing is good, but there are some parts that I really can't understand. In a dangerous environment, facing the person who framed me, I don't care at all about the sins that are within reach. This is too anti-human. Details Chapter 71

I read three or four chapters, and it reminded me of the card book I had read a little bit before. When I came out and looked at the author column, it was indeed the same author. It's been so long, but the author's style hasn't changed at all. I don't know what to say. On the one hand, I feel that the logic of the whole writing is too confusing. On the other hand, the characters in it are too thin. It feels like the characters in the article behave and speak in the same way. Come on, author, I hope to write better and better in the future, and I hope to be able to read your better works in the future.

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I like it so much, this absurd feeling

I haven't read this book yet, but I have a suggestion - don't be too hasty, there will be problems in the 60th chapter of the Witch's book, is it too hasty?

Is it a type similar to "I'm Not a Witch"?

Do you want to write a fanfic? The kind that has a system and an outline.

It is said that there were no human beings in ancient times. It was the great fire of life that created human beings, and human beings cannot do without the blessing of the fire of life. Flame is sacred, a symbol of cleansing impurity, goodness and wisdom. This is the propaganda of the Zoroastrian Church, and it is also human cognition, whether in daily life or when getting rid of evil. However, some people say that the Fire of Life is a false god, and that all the truth is recorded in the few remaining Bard sect diaries. Some people even say that the diaries only record part of the truth, and both of them conceal it for the sake of their beliefs.

Author, I have read your first two books on Witches and Witches but have not finished them. Is it because I always feel that your descriptions are too poor? In other words, the plot progresses too fast, and the protagonist is always being discriminated against in various ways and has no reaction. He doesn't do anything in his own mind. It's not satisfying to take revenge or suffer disaster later.

As soon as this book was written, it was written into cards again. Just like the previous book, cards suddenly appeared out of nowhere, which was very abrupt. It's a little better than last time, at least I got a Weird to make a card. Although it still doesn't explain why a new Weird doesn't even have the ability to take revenge, but he has all kinds of knowledge and can make powerful cards. Although weirdness is a very powerful setting in many books, your book only mentions that it can kill people. As for the weirdness of the protagonist, it is not mentioned why he makes cards. It is natural. I'm not saying that writing cards is bad, but it's too messy if you write it this way. I'm not the only one who thinks it's too messy. Of course, I have different opinions. However, you are the author and you have the final say.

Let me tell you a little bit. First of all, Bianwen has become very poor in recent years, please take a look and cherish it. Most of the articles on external sites are about high school and mentally retarded. It is really not easy to have such a plot. Writing: 6 points. It seems that there is no drama. This has met the basic requirements for being in the Internet writing circle. Of course, it will be better with more practice. Plot: 7 points. As other comments have said, the article is not very interesting. In fact, the story is a little more depressing. A man in a woman's body is bullied by other men as a woman, which is also a very good point to watch. However, there is no appropriate explosion later, and the whole process of depression can easily make readers uncomfortable. Take a similar article as an example. I suddenly forgot the name of the article written by the author of "World Tree". It is more similar to this article. The "big man behind the scenes" is written very appropriately. Needless to say, if you want to have a quiet time on the Don River, Marvel and One Piece are both pure and enjoyable books that you can also learn from. For the technique of promoting desire first and suppressing it, I recommend "Incarnation of a Cute Girl in Two Dimensions" and so on. Similarly, there is another book called "Mystery: The Witch..." Whose name I have forgotten, and it uses a similar approach. Writing strength: 5 points. The portrayal of the characters is not profound. Many villains are made from the same mold and need more training. In short, it's quite good in this article, and it's an enjoyable read overall. I hope readers will continue to work hard.

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I didn't expect to finish the book so quickly, and it feels pretty good.

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My second one!

After reading it, I felt so rushed. Is it because of bad grades? But at least the author has the moral integrity to finish it.

It's okay. I've finished reading it. I'm going back to Earth so soon 😄

Are you opening a new book or changing orders?

Can you give the protagonist some comfort? I was frightened by the witch before you.

Tied, faster and faster 🙂