Scientific Cultivation Begins with The Outcast

After reading the first few dozen chapters, it seems the author looks down on *Under One Person*, even belittling Zhang Chulan's character. The original author, Mi Er, really likes Zhang Chulan, and I like him too. Given his experiences, I think it's a testament to his inherent kindness that he hasn't turned evil. He's scheming and calculating, but has he ever harmed anyone?

The author was probably a young and naive female college student. It contains a lot of personal values ​​and beliefs. Suitable for people who are not mentally old. Gray is the limit that ordinary people can see. Those who see black are either practitioners or victims. White is what's rare. Humans are social beings with individual consciousness. Class is inevitable.

In the original novel of Under One Person, aside from innate superhumans, the key difference between ordinary people and those who acquire superhuman abilities lies in whether they have mastered the basics of meditation. To put it bluntly, it's a difference in temperament. Once one's temperament is at a certain level, one can naturally cultivate Qi. The author is almost turning superhumans into a bloodline theory, which just doesn't sit right with me.

What kind of scientific cultivation is this? It's nothing but scientists who are both demonic and monstrous, simultaneously belittling Qi while frantically researching it. If a country really wanted Qi, it could just use a body-cultivation furnace.

I get a headache just looking at Sun Wukong, the Monkey King. The monkey has become the god of online novels, and so has the Primordial Era. These days, if you see Sun Wukong or the Primordial Era in the content of a new book, it's basically guaranteed to be a bad book.

Well, the author's writing style is decent, but their knowledge base is insufficient, and they also have an inexplicable arrogance. Riding on someone's popularity while completely misunderstanding the original setting and looking down on Qi cultivators.

This book has fundamental logical problems; it's probably written by someone who watched a popular anime or TV series and just started writing. It insists on separating the innate Qi of superhumans from science. It also portrays superhumans as weak. For example, they can't block bullets, they can only dodge… Let's not even talk about other things, can't the Golden Light Mantra block bullets?

The martial arts in the novel *Dragon and Snake Romance* are far more powerful than the supernatural beings; the first martial arts tournament almost demolished the Bird's Nest stadium. In the comics, even the Old Celestial Master couldn't withstand bullets.

You talked about science, and I thought you'd come up with some fancy tricks like Lao Meng, but all you did was say that practicing Qi is unscientific? Do you even understand the definition of science? People living in the same world use different worldviews. If you merge worlds and combine the underlying logic, you'll be different from ordinary people.

Well, how should I put it? The author's writing is too lowbrow. First of all, look up the Dark Fortress. It not only studies Qi, but also destiny and third-kind contactants. Why is it only the protagonist who has scientific knowledge? 🙄 Would a national team not have a large number of related researchers? If you just had a cheat code, that would be fine. But with science, Emma... It's better to just fantasize in the interior.