Black Knight from Blue Star

The beginning is good, but the structure is not in control. It starts to falter in the middle and end of chapter 300. In addition, it is filled with realistic and vulgar jokes, which can be embellished, but it keeps repeating. There are still several paid chapters, which is a bit unbearable. In addition, it is also described as short-sighted to denigrate enemies, supporting characters, and even partners who are not in line with the protagonist's wishes, and the partners completely idolize the protagonist. The enemy turned into a clown, and the partners became flat, and over 400 of them were abandoned without anything interesting to look at.

Before it was released, I really couldn't understand the author's plot logic. He suddenly killed the tomboy prince. Although the author also released a mind map, there was no plot foreshadowing. There were sporadic simple dialogues and actions. There was not even a mental activity. What could the reader see? A question mark on his face? ? The plot is messy and unfolds at a rapid pace. It is better to write a pornographic novel about Jackie Chan Aotianliu. The author really has no ability to write about the struggle for hegemony and power😅

I have traveled to the game world that I relied on for a living in my previous life, and became the assistant of the future bosses. Why not make good use of this? Wuhu takes off! No, something is wrong with the baby's mother! Why is she a succubus! Why did he suddenly become the little stepfather! My heart is so tired. . . . . . What? The mysterious disappearance of the wealthy businessman's father and who is behind it! ? Will he continue to target me? ! No, find a backer quickly! Hey, it's so hard to be a fun person. . . . . . The author Xiang Yan has finished this book with two million words. Although this book is a double book, the plot of the book is smooth and fascinating, and the future is promising! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

The writing is good, and apart from playing friends 🐴, you can watch other plots. He's an old author, so I don't know why he came into contact with such a strange and poisonous thing... Boss Cao is just playing with other people's wives, you. . Normal people should accept it.

Something's wrong, the plot of the battle between humans and demons is too weird. I know the author wants to describe the idea of ​​"one is the hero and the other is the enemy" in the eyes of the two races from different perspectives, but I just can't bring it in to empathize. After all, the demons are cannibals. After all, people who read are also human beings, so how can their butt be crooked? Don't chase anymore, give up first.

I don't know why, but I feel that people in the novel lack respect for the strong. I can't say that there is no pursuit of force, but it is too little. . . It is obviously a world where great power belongs to itself.

Don't you find it disgusting to write threesome plots like Karina, Ryan, and Hardy? It's either your own woman or someone else's woman, and you're not good at it, so just two men and one woman are having an affair. So disgusting 💩

It's a cool article that you don't need to read with any brain (maybe?) I couldn't stand it after reading 30+ chapters. The protagonist was talking about licking the dog, and then he slept with a woman without any foreshadowing. I started to worry that something was wrong. To the extent that after just one night of chatting with the young lady on the street, I even started to worry about her brother who dropped out of school, her father who was a bad gambler, and her mother who was crying at home. Talking about brothers and mothers, we have known each other for a long time, there is no mention at all. It just gives me the impression that there is an exchange of interests. The protagonist gives the succubus his energy, and the succubus teaches the protagonist swordsmanship.

The foundation of this book was quite good at the beginning, but in the middle and later stages the logic collapsed a bit, and the level of polish of the plot obviously declined step by step. The disgusting plots are increasing and the pleasure is getting lower and lower. In particular, the author likes to focus on describing the dark side, but cannot give very good points. Not only can it not solve the problem, it can't even solve the person (or player) who broke the problem. So what's the point of having so many dark side descriptions? Do I subscribe to works to disgust myself? I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing the World Tree explode. In the background setting, the planet is very large and has a very large population. The Lord God of Order was simply killed by the Evil God at his home court, so forget it, it's not that he can't come back. The problem is that it is normal for people to die in war years, and massacres often occur. But just 300,000 deaths can bring 4 top evil gods into the game, not to mention that the evil god fragments can be fused at a lower cost later. The life of your set plane is measured in hundreds of millions. Players can also participate in this kind of evil sacrifice at a discount (and it is a discount with low soul loss, and the main requirement is flesh and blood). The evil power has grown too much. How can Order cheat and fight them? I don't know which readers will feel comfortable reading this kind of description of the dark side (even with the color) + reverse cheats (even the improvement of numerical collapse). Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for vegetables and radishes. Overall, there is still a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author will work harder and not disappoint the remaining readers.

This novel seems to have nothing to do with the title. It feels like the little emperor uncle deleted the h part. It's so fun.

Nice. This is how you travel through the Western world, be a lord, find princesses, elves, beast-eared girls, succubi, and lord's wives. You said that the man who traveled through time didn't like this.

When I read the novel for the first time, I had a feeling that shocked me greatly. I felt deeply like dog licking and green tea. Makes me afraid of human values ​​😱

Let me explain in advance that I am a pure love party, but the protagonist of this novel has a relationship with a hero and a saint. I can only say that the pure love party and the tauren are silent. However, I quite like this kind of plot. It would be better if it was mainly for both men and women.

From an emotional point of view, the author is a bit seriously ill. I don't know what triggered him.

The thing I regret the most is spending money on this book. The plot of Queen Kingdom is a mess. After changing the name, it became even more stinky.

The real-life plot behind it poisoned me.

Author, do you want to take a look at what you are writing? How long do you want to keep this past life plot? You have abandoned the original character story and restarted it, right?

Ahem, how about calling it "Succubus Hardy Conquers Another World with Big Dick" 😏

The male protagonist is an automatic foaming machine and can use 🥚 to make cream, which is really 🐮 The data of the previous "Master Is Always Your Uncle" is not as rigorous. There are too many meaningless chapter descriptions, so many that they seriously affect the plot, and the author's quirks are even more serious.

Xiang Gonggong's consistent mid-to-late stage situation is that he cannot control his combat power, and then his values ​​collapse.

In the chapter before going to the Royal City (while in the town), I personally felt that I could really become a god, and it made me happy to watch it, but what about the plot after going to the Royal City? What a piece of shit that is, it's not an exaggeration to say it's shit. Alas, I am very disappointed. The beginning was so good, why did it suddenly happen like this?

I originally thought you would find a way to solve this problem, but now I see that not only did it not happen, but it got worse? Why do you want to learn female videos? Quickly solve it, cut it off, take it away (the protagonist) or turn it into a woman for Ryan. It's really disturbing to watch this male video

There is something wrong with your three views if you can write this kind of thing

The more I look at it, the more I feel that there is something wrong with my outlook on life.

I haven't deleted this book yet, but I want to know how the author handles it. It's too funny 😂

This is a dog licker. While saying that he is not a dog licker, he is getting intimate with the saint Karina. Wouldn't Karina push away the protagonist if she gets close to her? The key point is that both Ryan and Karina feel that a close relationship is the right thing to do. Is it really okay for the author to play it so perverted? It's not like the key protagonist has no friends or women, so it would be better to just kill these two, so as not to feel uncomfortable.

I got some clues when I saw the chapter about revenge for old Hardy. It was a conscious layout and added in reasoning elements. This is good, but it's really not that good. There are precedents for the four electors in Rome and the HRE, but you can't write them off as fools. All the historic manors and castles in Europe and the United States have a huge private library. This is the face of the nobles, and they will maintain it even if they don't read it. There is also the issue of trade routes. To be honest, anyone who has driven a car knows that there are only a few roads to go from one place to another. The road taken can be calculated from the departure and arrival time of the caravan. Considering the efficiency, the caravan cannot take small roads every time to avoid the eyes and ears. It only needs to squat a few times. Finally, why don't others just send someone in after finishing the caravan and rush home? At that time, one was not a noble, and the other was that the family's industry was booming. Those who could help you were eager to finish you off and divide the family property. You were a friend of the son of the former brave man, and a friend of the daughter of the current regional archbishop. What use did this background have in front of the direct members of the elector family? It can't be that the regional aristocrats are too proud, right?

In the later stage, it was too stretched and very watery.

From beginning to end, I feel like there is nothing else to do every day, and I feel tired just watching it.

The plot is very astringent, and there are even some bad words. I didn't expect that the pervert was me. It's so interesting and I love watching it 😆😆