Immortality Begins with a Taoist Boy

I can't do it anymore, I want to complain, the settings have been conflicting, saying that there is a system based on self-awareness, the function only displays the content of self-awareness, you have the proficiency to break through self-awareness, how do you know your progress? Later, a radar detection function was introduced, which can detect humanoid creatures, direction and distance in the jungle. It is too conflicting. The author writes about the sect where the protagonist belongs. The framework is so complete, with various branches, including masters, elders, deacons and Taoist boys, as well as a complete knowledge system, training system and martial arts transmission. Cheng, after encountering the news about the two suspected bandits mentioned by the protagonist, he directly dispatched five elders. Are you kidding me? If someone else comes up against three, you can just go four and two. If you are afraid that these two are outposts, why don't you bring more people? What about your disciples? Does such a complete sect not have a full-time fighting team? The setting and actual display are too conflicting. There is also a protagonist who has no other memory and knows that there is a system, martial arts and possible immortality. When facing the attack of bandits, he said to the elder that concealing armor is a felony... Are you going crazy? In the face of enemy attacks, survival is the first priority. In the face of status, the elder is higher than you. In the face of the sect, you are on the same front. At this time, you want to say that concealing armor is a felony? It's so outrageous, it feels like the setting and cognition are always in conflict

The first part is pretty good, but when you get to Tofu Nao, it goes downhill straight away.

No, why do I feel that I have read this book? He was also a Taoist priest in the gym, and then, he was robbed by bandits, and he also had armor.

As soon as the Taoist temple was destroyed, the protagonist casually revealed his identity as a Taoist boy, without worrying at all that others would covet the so-called first Taoist temple in the area.

Any sect that has pig's feet will basically be wiped out, and it will last eight lifetimes.

Let me give you a suggestion, the plug-in panel has been badly written, and now it is just mediocre. And there won't be any good books with panel plug-ins in a few years. . . If you really want to write, find another way.

No wonder not many people have read it. When I saw the protagonist going down the mountain and meeting the gentleman on the beam, I felt something was wrong. It didn't look like it was written by one person. Originally, the requirements for reading are not high now. As long as it is basically reasonable and the sentences are smooth and fluent, you can read it. Maybe I am a little too demanding.

I really can't watch the cliche plot of bandits surrounding a Taoist temple, and then the Taoist temple having its legs broken and then wandering around again. It's so boring...

There is no eye-catching plot... It's bland and boring, and the plot contains too many irrelevant things,

Has Xianxia also been invaded by the system? It feels so inconsistent

Returning to Taoism alone? There is something wrong with your brain, the enemy is at hand, there is a traitor in the temple, how do you explain it? Put your life on jade, SB! If you don't want to run away quickly!

I don't understand why I bring a bunch of landlords with me and wipe their butts every day.

Brother, it's okay. I saw that the author kept writing. Awesome. I am also a newbie, and I don't have a single work yet. I admire my brother for his perseverance. Take your time and persist until you finish writing. Only when you accomplish something impossible will you realize how amazing you are.

Nothing was explained clearly, and he jumped into the sky

Those pictures showing me hanging out with traitors are really disgusting. The people I hate the most are not enemies but traitors.

Now that I see the wasted protagonist, I feel sick and abandon the book.

It's very strange. In Chapter 63, I just wrote that I didn't have any communication with other newbies because of the language barrier. I immediately saw Mo Fang when Yun Ling was there and then went to help him without knowing the danger. Firstly, you have no intersection with him Secondly, there is no interest relationship Thirdly, you have to bear risks What do you think of taking risks with a stranger to help him? Speechless =_=

Author, please read Chapter 2, either don't have an accident, why would a fox appear if there is an accident? Such a coincidental plot is too much. Either the protagonist kills the other party, or the protagonist is killed, and there should be no other unexpected visitors. This is the normal plot

For example, if there is a character, you can write down the name, personality, general background of the character, and what role you want him to play in the book. For example: Yoshikage has a tenacious temperament and loves his son eagerly. Although he betrayed Taixuanguan, he also felt guilty towards Lin Mu, the remaining disciple of Taixuanguan. He taught Lin Mu carefully and passed on the secret transmission of Taixuanguan that he had not originally obtained.

If you guys have anything to complain about, you can say it here. I will check them all and reply. Thanks.