Dreams, Ghosts, Terror, and Tales

Does Sima Yi's word "Yi" still need to be notated?

What makes the original plot attractive is its whimsy. It is difficult to write a good original plot, but once it is written, it will become a classic. For original novels with multiple copies like this, there are even fewer good ones. I hope this book will also be as full of wonderful ideas as "Escape Set".

Sima Yi cultivates virtue? Why is it so inconsistent!

After seeing Chapter 27, I would like to share my personal feelings (I am not a professional and feel free to point out if I am wrong): 1. The dream at the beginning is well written and makes people want to read on. However, in the first copy, the presence of the protagonist and the players is low, and the impression given is not as good as those of NPCs, which is a bit putting the cart before the horse. Secondly, I feel that the exploration/inference/revelation is not portrayed enough, and there is no sense of substitution. In addition, I didn't see the climax of the copy, and the overall view is uneventful 2. Some places are written like a running account, and I can understand that the author wants to describe it more carefully, but some details are really unnecessary. For example, I basically skipped Chapter 27. There is no plot advancement or foreshadowing. I can write it but there is no need to write so much. Free chapters don't count so much, but putting such a shabby chapter on the shelf is very discouraging.

Feel sorry. I have a low IQ. I didn't understand what I was talking about when I read the first story. There are teammates' perspective and the male protagonist's perspective. The male protagonist's teammates are not a team, a mission, or what? What a mess

Did you get a kickback on my gaming helmet?

I think it's okay, but it's best to finish the first one quickly, after all, the first one is usually a short script that is both attractive and introductory.

The content is a bit too watery and I write whatever comes to mind. There were a bunch of rules listed at the beginning, but at the beginning there were a bunch of new rules (doors, fast food restaurants, identities) in addition to this bunch. I cleaned the hot springs and sorted out a bunch of hot springs with different rules. As a result, basically everything in this pile was taken care of, and in the end, I just pushed the monsters and pushed the map to get rid of the problem. Most of the 14 players in the game were noisy and ineffective. When cleaning the hot springs, it seemed that a few vases were of no use other than pressurizing them. Finally, the remaining players in the hotel were all offline at the speed of light. In the reality chapter, a lot of words are spent on almost useless analysis, cover-up, summary, and the pain of teammates losing their eyes. It was really painful for the author to squeeze in these chapters. It was painful for me to read them I don't know if it will get better in the future.

This book is very good in the field of supernatural science. I personally think that the reason for the mediocre results is that the author is not a great writer. This book is definitely a good book under the name of an old author such as "Set the Fire". Come on, stick with it and wait for the new book to become a hit.

You can only throw two, no more