The Self-Cultivation of a Corpse

You don't have to be too sure if you say you are a corpse with an ax stuck in your head. Some people also have a knife stuck in their head. Why don't they go to the hospital for surgery and come back? They played a game when they registered.

The writing is pretty good, but the writing is too cowardly. The first time I tried to save someone, but I was shot three times by the people from the headquarters; The second time I told the people at the headquarters the rules of killing, but the people at the headquarters killed the protagonist first and then dealt with Wei Wei; The third time, my good friend was targeted by Wei Wei, and the protagonist wanted to go They looked for the source ghost to see if they could save a good friend. Then the people in the headquarters thought that the protagonist was a folk ghost master, so the people in the headquarters tried their best to kill the protagonist. The reason was that their captain was dealing with something strange and did not want the folk ghost master to interfere with the captain. However, they did not negotiate with the protagonist at all and just killed him. People in the headquarters were surprised that the protagonist was not killed. It has only been about forty chapters, and already three times the protagonist has taken risks to help the headquarters without asking for anything in return, but the people from the headquarters directly treated the protagonist as a piece of shit on the side of the road and trampled him to death. And every time, when fighting outsiders, you must first settle down inside, kill the protagonist first, and then deal with the weirdness. The most important thing is that the novel also says that the protagonist will join the headquarters in the future, and will also attract good friends to join. I think if you want to write about the protagonist joining the headquarters, you shouldn't make the headquarters so inhumane. And the key point is that the protagonist you wrote is a perfect victim. The starting point is purely self-sacrifice and altruism. In the process, it does not have any negative impact on the headquarters personnel, it is purely positive help, and then he is killed indiscriminately by the inhumane headquarters (actually, because the protagonist is a corpse, he has never been really killed, but the headquarters does not know, the headquarters is rushing to kill the protagonist). Then you plan to have the protagonist join the headquarters with his friends. Readers will be pissed off if they are brought into the perspective of the protagonist; the headquarters is written in a way that is not humane and cannot be brought into the story at all. The characters and plot of the novel cannot be drawn into the reader's mind, and it is useless no matter how good the writing is. Personally, I think the only thing that makes people feel good about this novel is the protagonist's good friend. He is loyal and his brothers are also loyal. He is not very lucky, but he has friends to help him.

You have never been a corpse, why do you write like this? ! ! 😡😡😡😡

A corpse is just a corpse, and a living person is a living person. Why should the dead still be alive?

A rare supernatural article, it looks interesting😋

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Please update it quickly, don't follow the same old routine, okay? The subject matter is still relatively new, and it's worth a look for the time being.

The writing is smooth, and there are no big poisonous points for the time being. It is a bit similar to the supernatural invincible text of Help Me Find a Corpse with Mysterious Resurrection.

There is nothing very distracting about the whole thing, and some parts are even very realistic, such as the official characters, the second encounter with the mutated protagonist, who is attacked directly because they are aliens, and some details describing passers-by (you know) can make the overall novel more vivid, and my personal feeling is no less than the mysterious resurrection.

Yes, when I read about the official contact, I felt as if I had seen a mysterious revival before. There are not too many poisonous points, and the logic is not confusing at the moment. But I hope the author will stop writing about emotions and focus on writing supernatural and horror content. Emotional romance novels~