My Fellow Daoists Are Everywhere in Honghuang

This is just my personal opinion. I think Hongyun Laozu is a female immortal. After all, she was the first cloud to take human form. Look at the Three Immortals of Jiejiao; they were all cloud transformations, and they were all female. None of the subsequent cloud transformations have been male. So why would the first cloud transformation be male? That doesn't make sense.

The introduction says you have many fellow Daoists, which means you have a lot of karma. Becoming friends means you've helped them, and helping others creates karma between you. The first step to achieving Dao is to sever karmic ties with those you have. You could say everyone is an obstacle or enemy to your path.

This book is old-fashioned and has nothing new.

The story was going well until suddenly, it was like stepping in shit. It was about cultivating immortality in the primordial world, and suddenly they told me the protagonist should cultivate the path of gods or become a god through faith. Seriously, what the hell? There's gold everywhere, but you're digging for shit. The strongest proves the Dao through force, not cultivation. You can't cultivate the laws of weakness? Who's going to go to the primordial world to see your path of gods?

What did the Dao Ancestor transmit? Wasn't it the Dao of Immortality? Cultivating the Dao of Gods is utterly futile in the primordial world; at best, you'll reach the peak of a Great Luo Golden Immortal, or at most, a Heavenly Emperor.

The Jie Sect 😄, knowing full well that Tongtian of the Jie Sect is ruthless and heartless, never personally saving his disciples, knowing full well that most of the Jie Sect members are man-eating demons, knowing full well what will become of the Jie Sect, I still fawn over them, worse than an animal.

Holy crap, cultivating the divine path? Goodbye! At first, I thought it was cultivating the Great Dao of Cause and Effect or something else, but I didn't expect it to be the divine path. I'm disgusted. In the divine path, you have to maintain order for heaven and earth, you can't transcend it, you can't even become a quasi-saint.

The synopsis alone tells me it's a system novel; I honestly don't know what the author was thinking. Why keep using systems in the primordial world... Aren't they afraid of being discovered? A system that even the Heavenly Dao and sages can't detect—how advanced must that civilization be!

Book Review Advantages (Good writing style, smooth and fluent (importantly, no melodramatic simps), not overly annoying, not too much brainwashing) shortcoming (The protagonist's double standards) Without the system, the protagonist is nothing. On one hand, he gains the benefits of the system, and on the other hand, he's contemplating system conspiracy theories.

Adding a system to a fantasy novel instantly ruins its scope. No matter your final strength, what's the point if you can't transcend the system? I'm outta here…