Honghuang: From the Demon Ancestor's Heir to the Greatest Demon of All Time
洪荒：从魔祖传人到古今第一魔
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- Completed
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- 1.6M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Mythic Cultivation
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- 1y ago
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The beginning portrays the Three Pure Ones as incredibly powerful, yet they can't even see through a disciple of Rahu who hasn't even become a saint yet? Are you kidding me? A mere Celestial Immortal looking down on the lineage of saints, thinking of creating his own methods—what's the point of having a master then? Are you courting death, or are the Three Pure Ones just weaklings? Can't they tell you're a demonic cultivator? This is truly ridiculous.
Chapter 33 states that it would take the Demon Ancestor at least 100,000 years to condense his physical body, which isn't that long, is it? So how could someone who treats billions of years as a fleeting moment act like an idiot? This part of the plot is a bit awkward.
The plot is full of toxic settings. The demon and witch races aren't afraid of saints, and the Zhou Tian Xing Dou Grand Array makes saints retreat in fear? What are you writing? A nuclear war fantasy? Saints are so degrading!
A mid-level Primordial Golden Immortal can create a multiverse; your version is too low.
The setting is grand, but the writing is petty. The Great Luo in your story seems to be the kind that is eternally free, but when you write it, it seems like it relies on both cultivation techniques and aptitude.
It's toxic; they always brag about how great they are, treating others like fools, it's incredibly awkward, and they seem rather frivolous.
The protagonist, supposedly the master of inner demons, is a hypocrite. True strength lies in the courage to draw one's sword against the stronger; only the weak draw their sword against the weaker. Constantly toying with the weak is incredibly low-class, like a complete idiot. ="#000000"> ="#000000"> ="#000000"> ="#000000"> ="#000000"> ="#000000"> ="#000000">'s</ font>
The traditional fantasy genre isn't popular anymore. Readers are looking for fantasy worlds with vastly different worlds, immortal beings roaming the heavens, and charlatans—the world-building is just too expansive. Authors, keep it up! I'm off too.
This is an extremely chaotic book. The logic is flawed, the writing is disorganized, and the world-building is incoherent. Even sending keywords to an AI writer and making revisions would likely yield a better result. In some plot points, it's worse than Deus Ex; things that should be briefly mentioned are stretched out over many pages, while things that should be elaborated upon are glossed over.
That's too vicious. You're full of scheming thoughts in front of a saint, and you say you're not qualified enough to cultivate to the Great Luo realm? Does the demonic path not require qualifications?