Honghuang: From the Demon Ancestor's Heir to the Greatest Demon of All Time

At the beginning, the Sanqing was written so well, but in the end, you can't see through a descendant of Rahu who has not yet become a saint. Are you kidding me? You are a genius and look down on the inheritance of saints. If you want to create your own method, then you should worship Mao's teacher. Are you looking for death on your own or are you a noob in Sanqing? I can't tell you are a demon cultivator. It's really funny.

Chapter 33 says that it takes at least a hundred thousand years for the Demon Ancestor to condense his physical body. It doesn't take long, right? Therefore, how could such a person who has lived for hundreds of millions of years behave like a retarded person. This plot is a bit awkward to write

Various poisonous settings. Seeing that the demon clan and the witch clan are not afraid of the saints, and the saints retreat as soon as the star formation appears. What are you writing about, the prehistoric era of nuclear bombs? Saints are too cheap, right?

In the middle of the prehistoric period, Golden Immortal can open up the multiverse. Your version is too low.

The setting is very grand, but the writing is stingy. The Da Luo in you seems to be the kind of eternal freedom, but when you write it, it seems that it depends on both skills and qualifications.

Toxic, always praising oneself as awesome, treating others as fools, extremely embarrassed, and frivolous in nature

As for the protagonist, the master of inner demons, the truly strong dare to draw swords on the stronger, and the weak will draw swords on the weaker, always teasing the weak, it is too low, following a second-rate guy is ="#000000">'s</ font>

Nowadays, the traditional prehistoric genre is no longer popular. Readers read fantasy worlds such as Time Travel, Immortals in the Heavens, and God Stick. The world view is too vast. Come on, author, I'm going to leave too.

It's an extremely confusing book. The logic is confusing, the writing is confusing, and the worldview is confusing. Sending keywords to AI for writing and then making changes would be better than this. The handling of certain plots is even worse than Deus Ex Machina. Things that should be mentioned in one sentence have to be written in many pages, but things that should be described in detail are explained in one sentence. The priority is not distinguished, and the importance is reversed. I suggest that the eunuch re-read this book.

It's too poisonous. Your little thoughts slip away in front of the saint. You still don't have the qualifications. If you can't reach Daluo in cultivation, you don't need the qualifications for your magic way?