True Lord, Please Come Forth from the Mountains

It always feels like the protagonist just got beaten up, said he was going to lie down and rest, then forgot about it a few days later and went out to cause trouble again. A hermit in the mountains—I didn't see any improvement. Maybe there's some difference below the Golden Core stage, making it seem like he leveled up, but he's still the same. Why can't you write him as more powerful?

What the heck? It starts with Qi cultivation? I thought it would start with the character emerging from seclusion in the synopsis.

The protagonist is that guy who always stirs up trouble. He could have gotten stronger just by staying still, but I don't know why he had to go looking for death.

To put it bluntly, what I hate most are slow-burn books, especially these days when fantasy novels try to be slow-burn. It's just asking for trouble. Either it's just tedious padding or it's deliberately slow-burning, both of which are signs of poor writing. Fantasy is all about action, battles, and epic battles. If the author can't write with a sense of rhythm, they add a bunch of unnecessary plot points like fate and human relationships to pad the story.

Since it uses the Golden Core and Nascent Soul stage settings, why is it so garbage?

The synopsis doesn't seem like it's a story about ordinary people. I'm already at the Nascent Soul and Golden Core stages, but then you introduce Foundation Establishment Stage 9. Is there any Half-Step Great Perfection stage later on?

Please, True Lord, come down from the mountain and finish this book, because it's not as the synopsis suggests; a thousand years is enough time for a single book.

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Ask a question What cultivation technique does the protagonist practice? I don't recall seeing any cultivation technique named before. There's only one sword technique with a rather vague name, and another one that's called the Heart Sutra.

Well written! So far, it deserves the title "correct" and has a grand style.