The Road to Immortality for a Hundred Generations

Now I've seen people who are 6 years old and 1.5 Meters tall, and there's nothing abnormal about it.

After seeing the fourth life, after growing up so fast, I really feel uncomfortable with it. I really want to speed up the plot. If you write it, will you die in a few years? Every life grows up so fast, it's so annoying.

The author is stubborn, insisting that the whole three-year-old and five-year-olds look like other teenagers. Does the protagonist's practice of martial arts at the age of three and the martial arts at the age of thirteen have any impact on the plot? You write like this and readers will question it in the chapter review. Then you go and explain it to the readers in the chapter review. There are a lot of things. Maybe you say that people will abandon the book without reading a word for a long time. You write novels to let more readers see it, so that readers will think that your writing is good and subscribe to your book, instead of arguing with readers. If they find the next book with a swipe of their hand, why bother if you lose a reader.

I have to say that the book is really good, but the height is too unreasonable. You can say that you are six years old and 1.4 Meters, but it is too unreasonable to be taller. After all, you grow so fast in front, what should you do in the back?

When I first wrote about the height, I considered the readers' concerns about the protagonist's height. But then I checked the information and confirmed that there are indeed people who are so tall who dare to write this. And the most important thing is that they don't suffer from gigantism, they just grow fast. I didn't exaggerate the height of the protagonist in the first life, he just grew faster than ordinary people. The second life is an exaggeration because I have stated that the protagonist is extremely talented, born with supernatural powers, and has excellent martial arts qualifications.

Momojiji has more than 300,000 words and I haven't started cultivating immortality yet.

It's really well written, and it's a good book. The setting of martial arts is also very reasonable: the master of martial arts is compared to the late stage of Qi training, and the Baodao realm is compared to the foundation building stage. It's not like some novels where the great master of martial arts in Invincible World steps into the world of cultivation and is chased by a first-level qi-training novice for several days and nights! Almost made me burst out laughing

There are more masters in rebellion than in big cities. What the hell is the setting? Why is it not better to do something like rebellion than to get a salary if you have this ability?

It is written about immortals, and there will only be warriors and immortal cultivators Warriors are divided into: Unqualified Third-rate (good players) Second-rate (experts) First-class (strong) Xiantian (top combat power) Grandmaster (the pillar of a country) Inner elixir (fierce) Cultivation of immortals It is divided into: Qi refining (you can fight Xiantian in the early stage of Qi training, and you can fight Grandmaster in the later stage) Foundation building (combat power is approximately equal to the warrior's inner elixir) Golden elixir (theoretically the inner elixir warrior is in the same realm, but in reality it is far superior in terms of lifespan, combat power, and means) Nascent Soul (Gaga Meng) Plot: In the first life, the protagonist lived for two months and died of drought. In the second life, the protagonist was not born and died of drought. The first two lives were all written in one stroke. Only in the third life did I start writing normally. In this life, I wrote a little bit of farming, a little bit of cultivation, and a little bit of fighting. Mainly for the purpose of accumulation in the 4th life. The main focus of the fourth life is fighting, with extremely talented warriors killing everything. It can be understood as Chen Feng, the warrior protagonist of "Apostle of the Stars". In the fifth life, the protagonist should travel through time and become a prince, the son of the prime minister, or something like that. This is also the main focus of cultivating immortals + farming The sixth life will only focus on cultivating immortals.

This book follows the accumulation route. In fact, it has a good intention, but there is a problem with the focus. The pace in the front can be accelerated. For example, if you are engaged in business at the beginning, just mention it. There is no need to write in such detail. Also, in the end, you will switch to cultivating immortals. I think the author's intention is to start with martial arts. Once you have strong strength in the novice period, you can then go to cultivating immortals. The Qi training period may be more comfortable, so the focus should be here. The world of martial arts will be as fast as possible

The protagonist is already a master but does not ask the Miss Bai family for a copy of the immortal cultivation technique, which is extremely poisonous. You must know that the strength of a martial arts master is equivalent to that of a cultivator in the late stage of Qi refining, and Miss Bai is only at the third level of Qi refining. If the protagonist wants a copy of the Immortal Cultivation Technique, it is not difficult to get it. However, the author has to suppress the protagonist and prevent the protagonist from cultivating immortality. It is too poisonous.

The plot after entering Xiantian City is a complete mess. After about ten chapters, it is still about servants and lottery tickets. You can't see Baishi in Baishi Cultivation, and you can't see Xiuxian 😥

The author is too stubborn. In the introduction, he said that he would consider the thoughts of ancient people, but in terms of height setting, he chose something that is more prominent in modern times. You are not considering ancient times.

It's better to rewrite a book, there is no traffic recommendation

I read a Book of Eternity before and it was the same. It was the same garbage. If you are so rich, why don't you hire a few more talented people? Tunnels are just like non-existent ones and can be destroyed by others. As a time traveler, you don't know how to prepare for a rainy day. Squeezing out other businesses is also rubbish.

After reading the introduction, it reminded me of the book Death and Substitution, Whoever kills the protagonist will become that person.

It's okay to die as a mortal, but after cultivating as an immortal, many people die with their souls scattered, right? How to reincarnate? If you meet a demon cultivator and you want to die, is it possible for you to be reincarnated if you are directly transformed into a demon puppet or a demon cultivator? When you are only in the state of soul, you are invisible and invisible. What if you are beaten to the point of being beaten to pieces while you are still alive? What should you do?

What kind of cow and horse introduction is this 🤤