The God of Ice and Fire at Hogwarts

Additional refinement

Is there a lot of love elements? Really tired of talking about love

The original male and female protagonists are very good, so what are you going to do in the Harry Potter world?

Introduction: The Demon of Ice and Fire is actually not the protagonist. It is a man of fire who meets the heroine of ice, and his scalp goes numb.

A brief introduction, forget it, let's take a look at the content first

Various settings are unreasonable. The further I write, the more outrageous it becomes. Hundreds of wizards made tens of thousands of alchemy dolls and one demon king-level alchemy doll. It's really hard to watch

Did you really stop reading books at home when you were 11 years old? 28 Pureblood, how can you not have extra wands at home? How can we not have a family collection of books? Are you kidding me? Never read a single book until you were 11 years old? What do you think?

With a different introduction, this book would be on a higher level.

This introduction allowed me to see the pattern of the 1920s

The way the dialogue between the characters is expressed is like crap, which seriously lowers the quality of this book. I suggest the author read the original English version several times to see how the dialogue between the characters in the book should be expressed.

As the author, I would like to recommend my own book, "Hogwarts Global Project", which is a warm and joyful book with many self-created main lines and is not related to the main character. I hope everyone will like it. I shamelessly ask for it to be collected and read. It would be better if you have some pointers.

The inexplicable plot development is obviously very well written, but as you read it slowly, you feel like something is stuck in your throat, eh, it slipped away.

Is the author planning to write the main perspective of the male protagonist, or the dual perspectives of the male and female protagonists? It feels like the male protagonist basically has no sense of existence once the female protagonist appears, and the dual perspective becomes smoother 😰

This introduction. . . . . Can anyone tell me what the content is like?

Is this introduction changed? ! Is there Shennong? What is the content? This is the first time I have seen such a handicapped person. He cannot take on such a big project with just his toes. None of the introductions from ten years ago were so awkward.

Don't be kidding, in front of magic, ordinary people are wolves? I think wolf dogs are exaggerated...

In fact, the introduction can be simpler, so that not so many people will say it is awkward.

It's very well written. Keep it up. There are fewer and fewer Harry Potter books now. The protagonist Goldfinger is quite innovative. I hope he can have his own power in the future. The protagonist is so good at playing with fire. He must learn Grindelwald's fire calendar. The pace of the first grade is fast. Go into the main plot early. You can add some original works later. Come on, come on.

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It's barely watchable, but the biggest thing is that it's stiff, especially the dialogue, which looks like a robot, which makes the characters too flat.

Why is this introduction different from what I read?

The heroine has too many roles, and she can be on par with the protagonist

No matter how you look at the plot of Basilisk that year, it was very deliberate. It was foresight and calculation but not intentional. The result was a narrow victory. The two protagonists suppressed it too hard. I feel that at least it was a complete victory and crushing was not impossible. The author a year ago was too conservative.

I feel like the ending is a bit too hasty. I feel like it would be better to write more about the future magical world.

Very good, the three golden chapters are written very clearly, allowing readers to naturally enter the world of Harry Potter. Well worth reading, but too little. Urgent!